Comments received on poems by wren



11/10/24
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 23rd, 2024 13:23

12/17/24
arqios said:

This poem captures powerfully the intense and unsettling nature of loneliness. Its imagery and personification create an immersive atmosphere, and its final lines poignantly reveal a complex relationship with this feeling. Thank you for sharing this evocative piece. :-)

December 20th, 2024 07:22

12/17/24
TobaniNataiella said:

What i am sensing in this very sad poem and i could be completely wrong, but i am sensing abuse and desperation. No abuse is not so bad, it is all bad, i hope you find a way to release your self from that situation, take care

December 20th, 2024 02:01

7/6/22
tallisman said:

We are all lonely at some level! I think, in the end, love finds you. Love this poem, well written!

August 3rd, 2022 00:33

10/9/21
L. B. Mek said:

so poetic, a magical read
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 2nd, 2022 05:07

4/2/22
MendedFences27 said:

Some great images. Your phrasings are unique and colorful. I like how your words seem to flow. A very interesting read and a lucky boy. - Phil A.

July 31st, 2022 18:49

5/22/22
Noah Malice said:

would you take a look at my recent submission and tell me what you think? i could show you the original for comparison if you want after

July 28th, 2022 23:32

5/22/22
Noah Malice said:

your word-choice is sublime, i love the way it sounds just to say

July 28th, 2022 23:23

3/29/22
L. B. Mek said:

great imagery, thanks for sharing

July 28th, 2022 01:30