Comments received on poems by wren
3/27/25
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, wren,
As if pleading to know, the pursuit of knowledge, the knowledge of life and all the \'wants\' therein in this very fine poem of yours. I have enjoyed this verse, very much so. Well done indeed.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
September 9th, 2025 10:14
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, wren,
As if pleading to know, the pursuit of knowledge, the knowledge of life and all the \'wants\' therein in this very fine poem of yours. I have enjoyed this verse, very much so. Well done indeed.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
September 9th, 2025 10:14
3/27/25
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the song Gethsemane from Jesus Christ Superstar in this poem. I guess it is the phrase (I want I want I want) that stimulated it. A powerful poem of desire and an asking with force of the human soul. Nicely written For such deep expression of emotion a fave
September 8th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the song Gethsemane from Jesus Christ Superstar in this poem. I guess it is the phrase (I want I want I want) that stimulated it. A powerful poem of desire and an asking with force of the human soul. Nicely written For such deep expression of emotion a fave
September 8th, 2025 04:44
7/23/25
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this poem has some great images and poses a very important question leaving the reader to reflect on it. Nicely done and a fave
September 1st, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this poem has some great images and poses a very important question leaving the reader to reflect on it. Nicely done and a fave
September 1st, 2025 04:37
4/10/25
sorenbarrett said:
The onset of a panic attack? It sounds so much like it. A vivid and concrete description of anxiety. Well written
April 11th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
The onset of a panic attack? It sounds so much like it. A vivid and concrete description of anxiety. Well written
April 11th, 2025 03:52
12/17/24
arqios said:
This poem captures powerfully the intense and unsettling nature of loneliness. Its imagery and personification create an immersive atmosphere, and its final lines poignantly reveal a complex relationship with this feeling. Thank you for sharing this evocative piece. :-)
December 20th, 2024 07:22
arqios said:
This poem captures powerfully the intense and unsettling nature of loneliness. Its imagery and personification create an immersive atmosphere, and its final lines poignantly reveal a complex relationship with this feeling. Thank you for sharing this evocative piece. :-)
December 20th, 2024 07:22
12/17/24
Poetic Licence said:
What i am sensing in this very sad poem and i could be completely wrong, but i am sensing abuse and desperation. No abuse is not so bad, it is all bad, i hope you find a way to release your self from that situation, take care
December 20th, 2024 02:01
Poetic Licence said:
What i am sensing in this very sad poem and i could be completely wrong, but i am sensing abuse and desperation. No abuse is not so bad, it is all bad, i hope you find a way to release your self from that situation, take care
December 20th, 2024 02:01
7/6/22
tallisman said:
We are all lonely at some level! I think, in the end, love finds you. Love this poem, well written!
August 3rd, 2022 00:33
tallisman said:
We are all lonely at some level! I think, in the end, love finds you. Love this poem, well written!
August 3rd, 2022 00:33
10/9/21
L. B. Mek said:
so poetic, a magical read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 2nd, 2022 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
so poetic, a magical read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 2nd, 2022 05:07
4/2/22
MendedFences27 said:
Some great images. Your phrasings are unique and colorful. I like how your words seem to flow. A very interesting read and a lucky boy. - Phil A.
July 31st, 2022 18:49
MendedFences27 said:
Some great images. Your phrasings are unique and colorful. I like how your words seem to flow. A very interesting read and a lucky boy. - Phil A.
July 31st, 2022 18:49
5/22/22
Noah Malice said:
would you take a look at my recent submission and tell me what you think? i could show you the original for comparison if you want after
July 28th, 2022 23:32
Noah Malice said:
would you take a look at my recent submission and tell me what you think? i could show you the original for comparison if you want after
July 28th, 2022 23:32
5/22/22
Noah Malice said:
your word-choice is sublime, i love the way it sounds just to say
July 28th, 2022 23:23
Noah Malice said:
your word-choice is sublime, i love the way it sounds just to say
July 28th, 2022 23:23
