Comments received on poems by PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)
Take Out the Trash!
Doggerel Dave said:
Yuk! I\'m a compulsive hand washer, and after your very vivid piece, I just had to.....
But why no compost... I know - your are on the 23rd Floor! 🙂
December 19th, 2022 23:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Yuk! I\'m a compulsive hand washer, and after your very vivid piece, I just had to.....
But why no compost... I know - your are on the 23rd Floor! 🙂
December 19th, 2022 23:27
So, You Made A Mistake
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you are right:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129289
December 15th, 2022 00:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you are right:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129289
December 15th, 2022 00:35
I Won\'t Look
Doggerel Dave said:
I just hope you get a pay rise...
As a dedication to those who get on with the job, though I wish them all the best.
Solid people, solid write.
December 10th, 2022 18:52
Doggerel Dave said:
I just hope you get a pay rise...
As a dedication to those who get on with the job, though I wish them all the best.
Solid people, solid write.
December 10th, 2022 18:52
Desk Top Fever
L. B. Mek said:
love your flow and yes
sometimes having a window
to look out of and imagine
while sat behind a desk
is more a burden than a blessing
and then those fogs descend
where your screen is blurred
and in place of a keyboard you see shovels...
lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet
December 5th, 2022 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
love your flow and yes
sometimes having a window
to look out of and imagine
while sat behind a desk
is more a burden than a blessing
and then those fogs descend
where your screen is blurred
and in place of a keyboard you see shovels...
lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet
December 5th, 2022 04:16
Desk Top Fever
Doggerel Dave said:
For every substance (including water) there\'s a \'therapeutic window\' and caffeine, for me is no exception :
Two shots of coffee from the machine is just right - less I\'m weak and slothful, more and I\'m trying to jump out of my skin...
December 3rd, 2022 00:22
Doggerel Dave said:
For every substance (including water) there\'s a \'therapeutic window\' and caffeine, for me is no exception :
Two shots of coffee from the machine is just right - less I\'m weak and slothful, more and I\'m trying to jump out of my skin...
December 3rd, 2022 00:22
Desk Top Fever
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how i agree that too much desk-work brings on the yawns and nothing is ventured until we get out of doors --- hoping by now you have de-toxed from that caffeine and are ready for more my friend.
December 2nd, 2022 13:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how i agree that too much desk-work brings on the yawns and nothing is ventured until we get out of doors --- hoping by now you have de-toxed from that caffeine and are ready for more my friend.
December 2nd, 2022 13:49
The Engineer and the Salesman
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
(Salespeople, first learn
to sale themselves
and with each sale, they begin
to cheapen their self, worth...
Engineers and creators of any ilk
first learn to believe in their ideas
Insuring integrity and sincerity
is a foundation of their, worth...
still, one gets commissions
the other, envelope payoffs
and those who refuse to play
\'the game\'
can be found on the doll que
as consequence
for their morality\'s unbending spines
November 28th, 2022 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
(Salespeople, first learn
to sale themselves
and with each sale, they begin
to cheapen their self, worth...
Engineers and creators of any ilk
first learn to believe in their ideas
Insuring integrity and sincerity
is a foundation of their, worth...
still, one gets commissions
the other, envelope payoffs
and those who refuse to play
\'the game\'
can be found on the doll que
as consequence
for their morality\'s unbending spines
November 28th, 2022 05:30
Lyric-less
Doggerel Dave said:
Message (if any) is the most important part of the whole enterprise. If the message does not suit, don\'t subscribe.
And indeed the same goes for poetry. The words might be well organised, the rhythm spot on, but if there\'s nothing of import being communicated, Why bother?
You have communicated plenty with this piece, - Thanks.
November 23rd, 2022 00:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Message (if any) is the most important part of the whole enterprise. If the message does not suit, don\'t subscribe.
And indeed the same goes for poetry. The words might be well organised, the rhythm spot on, but if there\'s nothing of import being communicated, Why bother?
You have communicated plenty with this piece, - Thanks.
November 23rd, 2022 00:19
My Reflection
Doggerel Dave said:
Good Write, PV.
I give myself a big wink and an even bigger smile first thing - does me for the day.
November 17th, 2022 01:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Good Write, PV.
I give myself a big wink and an even bigger smile first thing - does me for the day.
November 17th, 2022 01:02
Do Good ... Quietly
LauraBerry said:
Very true, we can\'t change anyone but ourselves and be a quiet example of what the change looks like.
November 15th, 2022 05:38
LauraBerry said:
Very true, we can\'t change anyone but ourselves and be a quiet example of what the change looks like.
November 15th, 2022 05:38
Heart and Mind Called a Meeting
Doggerel Dave said:
Dilemma often faced somewhere, I think - in fact I\'ve done my own version \"It\'s Over Then?\" way back near the beginning of my entries here.
The personification of heart and mind is neat way to describe the process.
November 8th, 2022 19:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Dilemma often faced somewhere, I think - in fact I\'ve done my own version \"It\'s Over Then?\" way back near the beginning of my entries here.
The personification of heart and mind is neat way to describe the process.
November 8th, 2022 19:14
Tick, Tock ... Taken
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Yes, to make time one’s dearest friend; most especially, this moment.
November 5th, 2022 10:16
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Yes, to make time one’s dearest friend; most especially, this moment.
November 5th, 2022 10:16
Don\'t Shoot the Messenger!
Doggerel Dave said:
Apart from the verses, I do admire your videos. Any chance you might disclose how you do them?
Please understand I will not be in the least perturbed, offended or cast down if you tell me to mind my own business, it is a private matter, but I had to ask!
November 2nd, 2022 00:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Apart from the verses, I do admire your videos. Any chance you might disclose how you do them?
Please understand I will not be in the least perturbed, offended or cast down if you tell me to mind my own business, it is a private matter, but I had to ask!
November 2nd, 2022 00:21
Grow a Pair
L. B. Mek said:
forgive me if I interpret your wordplay
to read \'Pear\'
and thus, utilising your words as seed
to help reinforce that backbone, withered
by the passing of Time
waning, under those bruises of life;
(some may find your direct approach
overwhelming
in modernity\'s, easy-fit
all-is-victimhood, culture
but
if we really want to penetrate, past
people\'s bubbles of survival
to affect and impact, lives
such harsh truth\'s, need to be outed
so we can find a way, to rid us
of their shackles)
thanks for sharing
(I read and learn)
October 31st, 2022 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
forgive me if I interpret your wordplay
to read \'Pear\'
and thus, utilising your words as seed
to help reinforce that backbone, withered
by the passing of Time
waning, under those bruises of life;
(some may find your direct approach
overwhelming
in modernity\'s, easy-fit
all-is-victimhood, culture
but
if we really want to penetrate, past
people\'s bubbles of survival
to affect and impact, lives
such harsh truth\'s, need to be outed
so we can find a way, to rid us
of their shackles)
thanks for sharing
(I read and learn)
October 31st, 2022 04:59
Grow a Pair
Doggerel Dave said:
This is confusing - the poem, which I like, is surely advice to have the courage to speak up....... I\'m going to ignore the \'grow a pair\' completely...
On utube , the story of your inspiration is different, but worthy of a separate post here I think...
Interesting...
October 30th, 2022 18:32
Doggerel Dave said:
This is confusing - the poem, which I like, is surely advice to have the courage to speak up....... I\'m going to ignore the \'grow a pair\' completely...
On utube , the story of your inspiration is different, but worthy of a separate post here I think...
Interesting...
October 30th, 2022 18:32
No Room for the Costume
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Thanks! I am from a time when ghosts and witches were the norm. I get that warm and fuzzy stuff. But, I am wondering maybe their parents are afraid of those haunted houses that pop up? Thanks for the comment!
October 27th, 2022 18:19
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Thanks! I am from a time when ghosts and witches were the norm. I get that warm and fuzzy stuff. But, I am wondering maybe their parents are afraid of those haunted houses that pop up? Thanks for the comment!
October 27th, 2022 18:19
No Room for the Costume
Alistair2626 said:
Very topical poem. I especially liked the phrase:
\"But, I would like to see, more terrifying.
Spooky, dark and electrifying\"
Absolutely!
October 27th, 2022 18:12
Alistair2626 said:
Very topical poem. I especially liked the phrase:
\"But, I would like to see, more terrifying.
Spooky, dark and electrifying\"
Absolutely!
October 27th, 2022 18:12
Key to Success
Doggerel Dave said:
A set up in a very litigious society? Please confirm. Enjoyed. 🙂 🙂
October 24th, 2022 23:57
Doggerel Dave said:
A set up in a very litigious society? Please confirm. Enjoyed. 🙂 🙂
October 24th, 2022 23:57
Shop \'Til You Haunt
Doggerel Dave said:
Wooooo to you toooooo. A good u\'n.
Family of the famous Chevy Chase? Is this all you are doing with the research? Book launch on it\'s way?
October 18th, 2022 18:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Wooooo to you toooooo. A good u\'n.
Family of the famous Chevy Chase? Is this all you are doing with the research? Book launch on it\'s way?
October 18th, 2022 18:24
12 Laws and 1 Rule
Doggerel Dave said:
Great video, PV
Concepts a little too mystical/new age for me, I\'m afraid.
Take care.
October 16th, 2022 05:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Great video, PV
Concepts a little too mystical/new age for me, I\'m afraid.
Take care.
October 16th, 2022 05:44
Stuck Between the Lines
Doggerel Dave said:
This is fun with issues which mean much to me:
Peanut butter, crunchy, pure (free of additives of any kind) is an essential ingredient of almost every meal.
Emails are my main mode of communication when not here (draft - walk away - return later - send).
But never the twain shall meet.
October 12th, 2022 23:27
Doggerel Dave said:
This is fun with issues which mean much to me:
Peanut butter, crunchy, pure (free of additives of any kind) is an essential ingredient of almost every meal.
Emails are my main mode of communication when not here (draft - walk away - return later - send).
But never the twain shall meet.
October 12th, 2022 23:27
The F-Bomb
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, can be over used - particularly today by stand up comedians.
I use it - sparingly when I\'m annoyed.
The one word I avoid in this class Is cunt - because something so lovely, the source of life and pleasure should not be used in any other way but praise - and it \'aint.
October 11th, 2022 04:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, can be over used - particularly today by stand up comedians.
I use it - sparingly when I\'m annoyed.
The one word I avoid in this class Is cunt - because something so lovely, the source of life and pleasure should not be used in any other way but praise - and it \'aint.
October 11th, 2022 04:01
Optimism and Pessimism Met for Lunch
Doggerel Dave said:
Depends.... on the situation....
Fun write.... Glass half full?
October 8th, 2022 18:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Depends.... on the situation....
Fun write.... Glass half full?
October 8th, 2022 18:38
Invasion of the Boring Guy
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on - most (99%) of the guests in your video looked pretty interesting to me...
October 4th, 2022 00:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on - most (99%) of the guests in your video looked pretty interesting to me...
October 4th, 2022 00:46
Write It Down, Write It Out.
Doggerel Dave said:
Good advice in your comment. Unfortunately the little voice in my head which advised caution vacated that space a very long time ago.
October 1st, 2022 20:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Good advice in your comment. Unfortunately the little voice in my head which advised caution vacated that space a very long time ago.
October 1st, 2022 20:57
I Heart My Heart
Doggerel Dave said:
Awwh You just stay in that good place - the pain isn\'t worth the trouble..
September 30th, 2022 19:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Awwh You just stay in that good place - the pain isn\'t worth the trouble..
September 30th, 2022 19:43
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