Comments received on poems by darknessandlight
Intertwined
Bella Shepard said:
This 5-7-5 is beautiful, as well as the complementary pic you\'ve chosen.
March 2nd, 2023 14:46
Bella Shepard said:
This 5-7-5 is beautiful, as well as the complementary pic you\'ve chosen.
March 2nd, 2023 14:46
Suffocating
shaa said:
Your words always make me feel we\'re in the same situation where we try but can\'t get out of despite the hurt and pain
October 4th, 2022 05:38
shaa said:
Your words always make me feel we\'re in the same situation where we try but can\'t get out of despite the hurt and pain
October 4th, 2022 05:38
On and on
Justa_Geezer said:
I Know how that goes too, nice work, I think you left the T off heart in your final line !
September 27th, 2022 10:06
Justa_Geezer said:
I Know how that goes too, nice work, I think you left the T off heart in your final line !
September 27th, 2022 10:06
On and on
hzugman said:
Know that you are worthy and deserving of happiness. Next time you pass a homeless person. talk to them if even for a short time and you both will feel more worthy. And give them a small alms (if you can). They really appreciate socks so maybe carry a few pairs of them in your car for such a purpose. Excuse me for preaching.
September 27th, 2022 09:40
hzugman said:
Know that you are worthy and deserving of happiness. Next time you pass a homeless person. talk to them if even for a short time and you both will feel more worthy. And give them a small alms (if you can). They really appreciate socks so maybe carry a few pairs of them in your car for such a purpose. Excuse me for preaching.
September 27th, 2022 09:40
Demons and The Darkness
Mr. Not said:
I can relate to this to some level, thoughts and feelings turning into a burden, but at the same time you dont want to change beause it brings some kind of comfort.
September 22nd, 2022 03:28
Mr. Not said:
I can relate to this to some level, thoughts and feelings turning into a burden, but at the same time you dont want to change beause it brings some kind of comfort.
September 22nd, 2022 03:28
Demons and The Darkness
abstract_meow111 said:
Looking for the a tiny bit of light within the darkness can save many. Great Poem, I do mainly write poems of faith and trust but I also do many that are during my depressed days. Only way I made it was believing a new day would be there for me filled with beauty and laughter especially when sobbing that\'s when telling myself that was truly needed, I am much improved but if the soul is jaded it must seek love in order to survive this world and whats in it.
September 20th, 2022 18:44
abstract_meow111 said:
Looking for the a tiny bit of light within the darkness can save many. Great Poem, I do mainly write poems of faith and trust but I also do many that are during my depressed days. Only way I made it was believing a new day would be there for me filled with beauty and laughter especially when sobbing that\'s when telling myself that was truly needed, I am much improved but if the soul is jaded it must seek love in order to survive this world and whats in it.
September 20th, 2022 18:44
Misery\'s End
shaa said:
Soo sad, glad you actually didn\'t go through with what you penned down
September 19th, 2022 12:57
shaa said:
Soo sad, glad you actually didn\'t go through with what you penned down
September 19th, 2022 12:57
A Hope, a Dream, a Wish
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so beautifully phrased dear friend. I love to read aloud and this piece certainly comes to life as I do. So many wonderful things have been built on hopes, dreams and wishes, keep them alive and pursue them.
September 11th, 2022 16:16
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so beautifully phrased dear friend. I love to read aloud and this piece certainly comes to life as I do. So many wonderful things have been built on hopes, dreams and wishes, keep them alive and pursue them.
September 11th, 2022 16:16
A Hope, a Dream, a Wish
jenny.g said:
Beautiful words of beautiful hope. Hold it close and cherish it.
September 11th, 2022 15:00
jenny.g said:
Beautiful words of beautiful hope. Hold it close and cherish it.
September 11th, 2022 15:00
