Comments received on poems by darknessandlight



Intertwined
Bella Shepard said:

This 5-7-5 is beautiful, as well as the complementary pic you\'ve chosen.

March 2nd, 2023 14:46

Pointless
jenny.g said:

Making the definitive decision is a necessary step.

October 4th, 2022 13:38

Suffocating
shaa said:

Your words always make me feel we\'re in the same situation where we try but can\'t get out of despite the hurt and pain

October 4th, 2022 05:38

Pointless
shaa said:

Aint ready to stop dreaming yet😢

October 4th, 2022 05:33

Conceded Heart
Dr. Soma said:

Fabulous, Dear.

September 29th, 2022 04:56

On and on
Justa_Geezer said:

I Know how that goes too, nice work, I think you left the T off heart in your final line !

September 27th, 2022 10:06

On and on
hzugman said:

Know that you are worthy and deserving of happiness. Next time you pass a homeless person. talk to them if even for a short time and you both will feel more worthy. And give them a small alms (if you can). They really appreciate socks so maybe carry a few pairs of them in your car for such a purpose. Excuse me for preaching.

September 27th, 2022 09:40

Demons and The Darkness
Mr. Not said:

I can relate to this to some level, thoughts and feelings turning into a burden, but at the same time you dont want to change beause it brings some kind of comfort.

September 22nd, 2022 03:28

Demons and The Darkness
shaa said:

I\'m in love with the ending

September 21st, 2022 09:35

Demons and The Darkness
abstract_meow111 said:

Looking for the a tiny bit of light within the darkness can save many. Great Poem, I do mainly write poems of faith and trust but I also do many that are during my depressed days. Only way I made it was believing a new day would be there for me filled with beauty and laughter especially when sobbing that\'s when telling myself that was truly needed, I am much improved but if the soul is jaded it must seek love in order to survive this world and whats in it.

September 20th, 2022 18:44

Misery\'s End
shaa said:

Soo sad, glad you actually didn\'t go through with what you penned down

September 19th, 2022 12:57

You Walked Away
Dr. Soma said:

Very rhythmic.

September 12th, 2022 00:21

A Hope, a Dream, a Wish
Bella Shepard said:

This poem is so beautifully phrased dear friend. I love to read aloud and this piece certainly comes to life as I do. So many wonderful things have been built on hopes, dreams and wishes, keep them alive and pursue them.

September 11th, 2022 16:16

A Hope, a Dream, a Wish
jenny.g said:

Beautiful words of beautiful hope. Hold it close and cherish it.

September 11th, 2022 15:00

You Walked Away
jenny.g said:

Powerful and beautiful.

September 11th, 2022 01:59