Comments received on poems by skpearl
the collapsed city
skpearl said:
Thank you so much! It means a lot to me when someone says that they relate to my work
May 17th, 2023 03:06
skpearl said:
Thank you so much! It means a lot to me when someone says that they relate to my work
May 17th, 2023 03:06
the collapsed city
Elahe poems said:
This is so personal yet so relatable. I love how it describes my feelings for my hometown. I enjoyed reading it so much and i hope you feel safe and happy wherever you end up.
May 16th, 2023 23:20
Elahe poems said:
This is so personal yet so relatable. I love how it describes my feelings for my hometown. I enjoyed reading it so much and i hope you feel safe and happy wherever you end up.
May 16th, 2023 23:20
the collapsed city
MendedFences27 said:
Your very personal poem rang true to me. Several times I was in a place for a length of time, a place that made me feel \"out of place,\" Nothing there made me happy, yet upon leaving it was missed because it had become familiar to me. I guess that\'s why they say, \"There\'s no place like home.\"
Your poem is very well written. I see no capitalization or punctuation. Is this your style? The poem is direct and the language is straight-forward. It was a good read. - Phil A.
May 16th, 2023 21:39
MendedFences27 said:
Your very personal poem rang true to me. Several times I was in a place for a length of time, a place that made me feel \"out of place,\" Nothing there made me happy, yet upon leaving it was missed because it had become familiar to me. I guess that\'s why they say, \"There\'s no place like home.\"
Your poem is very well written. I see no capitalization or punctuation. Is this your style? The poem is direct and the language is straight-forward. It was a good read. - Phil A.
May 16th, 2023 21:39
i made pancakes
alexis-isntalwayshere said:
This was so beautifully wrote. I have the greatest sympathy for the pain behind this poem.
Best Wishes
January 25th, 2023 22:39
alexis-isntalwayshere said:
This was so beautifully wrote. I have the greatest sympathy for the pain behind this poem.
Best Wishes
January 25th, 2023 22:39
i made pancakes
Ok Waleed said:
Why would I eat your pancakes when we can go to IHOP !
January 25th, 2023 18:23
Ok Waleed said:
Why would I eat your pancakes when we can go to IHOP !
January 25th, 2023 18:23
mute
L. B. Mek said:
\'noses getting bigger
skin begins to harden
every word that has been said
returns as a burden\'
Brilliant!
forgive my feeble attempt
at a poetic reply below
(have had similar conversations
or rather
ending\'s wrapped in bubble wrap
yet within us, that needle exists
prickling it disquiet
is this it, it needles
all those hopes and dreams
wished and unvoiced prayers
amounting to a box of belongings
a finale shadow\'s waving visage
and just like that
we\'re meant to turn a page
begin our lines again
but someday soon, far too soon
we know
we\'ll run out of blank pages
the past\'s ink
staining, our future\'s horizons
fearing
we won\'t have the energy left
when the right fit, walks into our life
we\'ll just be watching-on, lamenting
why poetry\'s right words
never come to us in time
and life\'s smile
is delivered in handful shards...)
January 20th, 2023 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'noses getting bigger
skin begins to harden
every word that has been said
returns as a burden\'
Brilliant!
forgive my feeble attempt
at a poetic reply below
(have had similar conversations
or rather
ending\'s wrapped in bubble wrap
yet within us, that needle exists
prickling it disquiet
is this it, it needles
all those hopes and dreams
wished and unvoiced prayers
amounting to a box of belongings
a finale shadow\'s waving visage
and just like that
we\'re meant to turn a page
begin our lines again
but someday soon, far too soon
we know
we\'ll run out of blank pages
the past\'s ink
staining, our future\'s horizons
fearing
we won\'t have the energy left
when the right fit, walks into our life
we\'ll just be watching-on, lamenting
why poetry\'s right words
never come to us in time
and life\'s smile
is delivered in handful shards...)
January 20th, 2023 05:18
my love
Rocky Lagou said:
Love this poem Katherine. You really expressed your emotions so profoundly and I think this is something that many of us can relate to. Sometimes we become latched on to a lover so excessively to the point where it feels like we can\'t even breathe without them.
September 20th, 2022 08:05
Rocky Lagou said:
Love this poem Katherine. You really expressed your emotions so profoundly and I think this is something that many of us can relate to. Sometimes we become latched on to a lover so excessively to the point where it feels like we can\'t even breathe without them.
September 20th, 2022 08:05
to dear friend
W.J. said:
god? this is so good? I love it so so much. Every line and word felt on point and right where it had to be. I think this is my favorite part:
“we used to love the walks
and laying down on earth
waiting for storm to rage
and the world to end”
You’re amazing!! Thank you for sharing!
September 19th, 2022 16:30
W.J. said:
god? this is so good? I love it so so much. Every line and word felt on point and right where it had to be. I think this is my favorite part:
“we used to love the walks
and laying down on earth
waiting for storm to rage
and the world to end”
You’re amazing!! Thank you for sharing!
September 19th, 2022 16:30
to dear friend
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes friendships just fizzle out, no rhyme or reason, just consternation.
September 19th, 2022 11:45
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes friendships just fizzle out, no rhyme or reason, just consternation.
September 19th, 2022 11:45
my love
darknessandlight said:
This is amazing. I can tangibly feel your longing and want. Your sorrow and desire
September 19th, 2022 08:17
darknessandlight said:
This is amazing. I can tangibly feel your longing and want. Your sorrow and desire
September 19th, 2022 08:17
my love
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking you like this guy then.
I could be wrong though, it maybe something higher.
September 19th, 2022 05:37
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking you like this guy then.
I could be wrong though, it maybe something higher.
September 19th, 2022 05:37
my love
divinetothe9 said:
\"Lover forgive me for all my sins\"
Praying for the forgiveness of the one you love my dear.
September 18th, 2022 23:41
divinetothe9 said:
\"Lover forgive me for all my sins\"
Praying for the forgiveness of the one you love my dear.
September 18th, 2022 23:41
my love
Hollow Enigma said:
Great read. Sad read but impressively vulnerable and descriptive. Welcome to My poetic side can\'t wait to read more!
September 18th, 2022 15:55
Hollow Enigma said:
Great read. Sad read but impressively vulnerable and descriptive. Welcome to My poetic side can\'t wait to read more!
September 18th, 2022 15:55
