Now, Let\'s Get Down to Business
Fränz Müller said:

Not eggs, but roses! Bravo!!

October 19th, 2026 13:31

Psychology Is A Fitting Term
Thomas W Case said:

There’s a damn painful tension here between resentment toward fashionable psychological jargon and the frightening reality of experiences the speaker cannot fully explain, with the missing details leaving him bewildered and diminished. The final turn is the keeper for me—“Likeas a child whose mother\'s GONE” followed by the plea for the LORD’s mercy strips away the argument and reveals the deeper wound: beneath the confusion is someone frightened by his own gaps in memory and reaching for a source of safety he can trust.

October 13th, 2026 08:22

Of French Silk Pies and Flicks
Thomas W Case said:

There’s a charming frustration here, turning a French Silk Pie accident and a favorite movie into a mock-tragedy for all those “pretty lines” that vanished before they could be written down. The final “LORD, where to?” is the keeper for me, because after all the playful Elizabethan language and self-inflicted guilt, the poem suddenly opens into something more melancholy: the fear that time, like those lost lines, is slipping away while we’re busy looking elsewhere.

October 6th, 2026 08:09

Of French Silk Pies and Flicks
NafisaSB said:

Dey humor at its cheeky best, dear Missy

October 5th, 2026 12:52

Of French Silk Pies and Flicks
Fränz Müller said:

The skies here are as gray as my mood 🥹

September 30th, 2026 07:52

Of French Silk Pies and Flicks
Paul Bell said:

Does the lord like chocolate hymns, i wonder.
Why are Tuesdays dull days.

September 30th, 2026 05:17

Of French Silk Pies and Flicks
Alex Arnot said:

An interesting duality in this one, humorous and reflective! Great write!

September 30th, 2026 00:29

Don\'t Ask
Neville said:



I think this is far more cerebral than one might at first imagine .. indeed, on my umpteenth reading I am now firmly convinced it is brilliant ma\'am .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐😎👍

September 20th, 2026 12:46

Don\'t Ask
Durdica Porobija said:

That\'s tragic. When you convince someone that humiliation is bearable.

September 14th, 2026 04:59

Don\'t Ask
Paul Bell said:

Sounds like the definition of being locked in the cupboard.
Freedom is when you get to 18, till then I own you.

September 11th, 2026 10:39

Psychology Is A Fitting Term
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this is deeply moving. The missing pieces accumulate until the speaker feels abandoned within her own experience...and that final appeal to God rises from a place beyond explanation. Vulnerable, honest, and powerful work, Missy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 10th, 2026 21:37

Psychology Is A Fitting Term
sorenbarrett said:

Another good write Chic full of rhyme well said.

September 10th, 2026 12:24

Wouldn\'t You Like to Know?
Doggerel Dave said:

Story plain , artfully rendered , and please don\'t throw all those sonnets up in one go!
Good to know you are still here at MPS.

September 7th, 2026 20:34

Wouldn\'t You Like to Know?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Missy, this is darkly clever. It starts almost like a joke and then drops straight into consequence...a sharp reminder of how dangerous self-deception can become. Strong write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 7th, 2026 14:54

Remember 1983 and Trends?!
NafisaSB said:

Good memories 🤔😛

August 11th, 2026 03:46