Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
"S" is for.......
dbremner said:
Likeable poem. Never seen one like it before.
December 4th, 2010 14:35
dbremner said:
Likeable poem. Never seen one like it before.
December 4th, 2010 14:35
"S" is for.......
ironmaiden_81186 said:
clecverly written...the vagueness of it is the beauty of it..
December 4th, 2010 05:25
ironmaiden_81186 said:
clecverly written...the vagueness of it is the beauty of it..
December 4th, 2010 05:25
I am Like the Weeds, I Guess....
ironmaiden_81186 said:
that adult must have been right....you certainly have a pretty smile
and when you put that in words...its even better.. so smile :)
December 4th, 2010 05:20
ironmaiden_81186 said:
that adult must have been right....you certainly have a pretty smile
and when you put that in words...its even better.. so smile :)
December 4th, 2010 05:20
Autumn's Promise....Love Won!
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i m still trying to unearth a few lines here......but i guess u broke the barrier of amateur poetry...its as beautiful as it can get
and i think the best comes in the least time...its flawless and the imagery is excellent...kudos
December 2nd, 2010 23:32
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i m still trying to unearth a few lines here......but i guess u broke the barrier of amateur poetry...its as beautiful as it can get
and i think the best comes in the least time...its flawless and the imagery is excellent...kudos
December 2nd, 2010 23:32
Why Should I Smile?
dbremner said:
Clever working of the lines through/between each part.
December 2nd, 2010 17:05
dbremner said:
Clever working of the lines through/between each part.
December 2nd, 2010 17:05
Where's Your Smile? (revision)
dbremner said:
Clever reworking. I can hear the American accent!
December 1st, 2010 14:13
dbremner said:
Clever reworking. I can hear the American accent!
December 1st, 2010 14:13
I'm Not Good Enough for YOU......
dbremner said:
Sounds good to me as well. I read it a few of times and liked it better each time.
November 29th, 2010 17:31
dbremner said:
Sounds good to me as well. I read it a few of times and liked it better each time.
November 29th, 2010 17:31
Autumn's Promise....Love Won!
dbremner said:
Nice one. The imagery is there just as you show it with the picture. P.s Is the slowness problem through using reply. I just wrote to you but I am not sure if it sent. Let me know
November 27th, 2010 12:12
dbremner said:
Nice one. The imagery is there just as you show it with the picture. P.s Is the slowness problem through using reply. I just wrote to you but I am not sure if it sent. Let me know
November 27th, 2010 12:12
Entreating His Silence
dbremner said:
Like it, I reckon it's not easy to write in this structure but youv'e done it proud.
November 26th, 2010 16:19
dbremner said:
Like it, I reckon it's not easy to write in this structure but youv'e done it proud.
November 26th, 2010 16:19
I am Blushing
Aviksha said:
i know how it feels to control the eagerness.........................i love it .
November 24th, 2010 23:05
Aviksha said:
i know how it feels to control the eagerness.........................i love it .
November 24th, 2010 23:05
How I love to see your eyes....(in two parts)
Anna said:
This is my favorite poem! Really, really, really, really, really good! ♥
November 24th, 2010 22:19
Anna said:
This is my favorite poem! Really, really, really, really, really good! ♥
November 24th, 2010 22:19
How I love to see your eyes....(in two parts)
mikeal said:
you can do way better with a topic like this especially you cheeky i trust your comments over any one else cause i feel you know poetry better then me
November 23rd, 2010 23:15
mikeal said:
you can do way better with a topic like this especially you cheeky i trust your comments over any one else cause i feel you know poetry better then me
November 23rd, 2010 23:15
How I love to see your eyes....(in two parts)
nikhilps said:
nice work.... i felt to read it more times..... keep on writting.... u r a good poetess.. there is a lot study frm ur poems for me...
November 22nd, 2010 09:10
nikhilps said:
nice work.... i felt to read it more times..... keep on writting.... u r a good poetess.. there is a lot study frm ur poems for me...
November 22nd, 2010 09:10
Promise me.....True love?
nikhilps said:
yaar! actually this poem is not my subject.bcoz im not in love and dont knw wat is love and also i dont want to.... but when i read the poem i felt im satisfied by reading a good poem....
November 22nd, 2010 09:05
nikhilps said:
yaar! actually this poem is not my subject.bcoz im not in love and dont knw wat is love and also i dont want to.... but when i read the poem i felt im satisfied by reading a good poem....
November 22nd, 2010 09:05
For Loneliness I Come....
nikhilps said:
great! u r really great...... nice poem....... many things had said with less words.......
November 22nd, 2010 08:59
nikhilps said:
great! u r really great...... nice poem....... many things had said with less words.......
November 22nd, 2010 08:59
Promise me.....True love?
Aviksha said:
HEY
I LIKE UR POEM.YES HOW WE FELL IN LOVE AND HOW U FEEL IN DEPART IS JUST NOT THE REAL POEM ...YOUR POEM GIVES VALU OF THAT PERSON WHOM U LOVED EVER....
GOOD JOB.........
November 22nd, 2010 01:19
Aviksha said:
HEY
I LIKE UR POEM.YES HOW WE FELL IN LOVE AND HOW U FEEL IN DEPART IS JUST NOT THE REAL POEM ...YOUR POEM GIVES VALU OF THAT PERSON WHOM U LOVED EVER....
GOOD JOB.........
November 22nd, 2010 01:19
Promise me.....True love?
dbremner said:
Good stuff this - I've been there unfortunately (divorce) so I think I understand the message. One of the things that helped me through was reading 'Nausea' by Jean Paul Sartre, but we are all different it just worked for me.
November 21st, 2010 13:21
dbremner said:
Good stuff this - I've been there unfortunately (divorce) so I think I understand the message. One of the things that helped me through was reading 'Nausea' by Jean Paul Sartre, but we are all different it just worked for me.
November 21st, 2010 13:21
We live for now...
Cheeky Missy said:
And MY favourite line is......Have you been trying too hard for long?! since my answer is sadly, ya, and giving up didn't but make matters worse.
November 20th, 2010 22:08
Cheeky Missy said:
And MY favourite line is......Have you been trying too hard for long?! since my answer is sadly, ya, and giving up didn't but make matters worse.
November 20th, 2010 22:08
For Loneliness I Come....
dbremner said:
Now this IS good. You are saying a heck of a lot, delivering a strong message that to many is all they need to get through. The fact that its done in a short poem is for this one a bonus as it underlines the fact that the message is powerful enough.
November 20th, 2010 12:55
dbremner said:
Now this IS good. You are saying a heck of a lot, delivering a strong message that to many is all they need to get through. The fact that its done in a short poem is for this one a bonus as it underlines the fact that the message is powerful enough.
November 20th, 2010 12:55
I've Lost You?
dbremner said:
Good poem as well. I had a penpal some years ago that I often think about. This piece just reminded me again. I sometimes wonder if e-mail has taken away the great feeling in recieving a hand written letter through the snail mail.
November 20th, 2010 11:15
dbremner said:
Good poem as well. I had a penpal some years ago that I often think about. This piece just reminded me again. I sometimes wonder if e-mail has taken away the great feeling in recieving a hand written letter through the snail mail.
November 20th, 2010 11:15
We live for now...
dbremner said:
I like this a lot. I like how its structured and I like what it says. Theres a message in it and its a strong one. Well done.
November 20th, 2010 11:12
dbremner said:
I like this a lot. I like how its structured and I like what it says. Theres a message in it and its a strong one. Well done.
November 20th, 2010 11:12
I've Lost You?
nikhilps said:
nice poem! but i wanna say something u.... what i felt after reading ur two poems... u r writting only abt one emotion or feeling.... just make a change in ur thinking... the way u express, i mean the way u write is different and thats too good. so try to think differently... i mean to make a change in the poems u write.... im not a great poet to advise or say something like this.. but as a friend i just said what i felt... dont feel bad pls..... and its a nice poem.... really it is a nice poem.... keep on writting......
November 20th, 2010 07:37
nikhilps said:
nice poem! but i wanna say something u.... what i felt after reading ur two poems... u r writting only abt one emotion or feeling.... just make a change in ur thinking... the way u express, i mean the way u write is different and thats too good. so try to think differently... i mean to make a change in the poems u write.... im not a great poet to advise or say something like this.. but as a friend i just said what i felt... dont feel bad pls..... and its a nice poem.... really it is a nice poem.... keep on writting......
November 20th, 2010 07:37
Re: The Imaginary Room....
nikhilps said:
yaar!!!!!!! u r great!!! nice thought and a beautiful poem too....
November 19th, 2010 04:29
nikhilps said:
yaar!!!!!!! u r great!!! nice thought and a beautiful poem too....
November 19th, 2010 04:29
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