Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
It\'s Called...Yes, What, Precisely?
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of the first a plea of the second resolved in the third a series of wonderful verse.
January 20th, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of the first a plea of the second resolved in the third a series of wonderful verse.
January 20th, 2025 06:27
With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa....
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
if attempt made to craft sonnet, i would deliver worse
outcome threatened by critics
madly gesticulating with shaky spear,
nevertheless yours truly (me)
stunned with awe at such magnificent verse,
thus feedback finds me on rare occasion to be terse
smarting with mine narcissistic pride and prejudice i nurse
when death do me part funeral procession
evinced by scant mourners following my hearse
while rigor mortis of mine once body electric
forever frozen with curse
whisked away by grim reaper
ill fate of lovely bones
where dead soul didst exit
found death me not proud averse
when sexagenarian just coming into his stride
rite before refining
former swiftly tailored harried style.
January 20th, 2025 04:48
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
if attempt made to craft sonnet, i would deliver worse
outcome threatened by critics
madly gesticulating with shaky spear,
nevertheless yours truly (me)
stunned with awe at such magnificent verse,
thus feedback finds me on rare occasion to be terse
smarting with mine narcissistic pride and prejudice i nurse
when death do me part funeral procession
evinced by scant mourners following my hearse
while rigor mortis of mine once body electric
forever frozen with curse
whisked away by grim reaper
ill fate of lovely bones
where dead soul didst exit
found death me not proud averse
when sexagenarian just coming into his stride
rite before refining
former swiftly tailored harried style.
January 20th, 2025 04:48
With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa....
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
while burrowed under blankets balled up in a bunch
outside yeti in seventh heaven
as beastie boy
upon pure as the driven snow
huge hairy feet crunch
reverberating across terrain, i gotta hunch
ole man winter still gotta judicious punch.
January 20th, 2025 04:20
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
while burrowed under blankets balled up in a bunch
outside yeti in seventh heaven
as beastie boy
upon pure as the driven snow
huge hairy feet crunch
reverberating across terrain, i gotta hunch
ole man winter still gotta judicious punch.
January 20th, 2025 04:20
With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa....
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, my friend. Now, if I wake up on Ground Hog\'s Day and find myself reading this again, I am going to look in the mirror and make sure I am not Bill Murray! LOL! My \"bad\" jokes aside, I love these sonnets, Missy. The very title in your first sonnet, let alone the content, filled me with the hope of Spring...drawing closer and closer. Thank you for that much needed reminder! An easy fave for me! 🌹👏
January 19th, 2025 16:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, my friend. Now, if I wake up on Ground Hog\'s Day and find myself reading this again, I am going to look in the mirror and make sure I am not Bill Murray! LOL! My \"bad\" jokes aside, I love these sonnets, Missy. The very title in your first sonnet, let alone the content, filled me with the hope of Spring...drawing closer and closer. Thank you for that much needed reminder! An easy fave for me! 🌹👏
January 19th, 2025 16:26
With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa....
Thomas W Case said:
You do a fantastic job with theese sonnets.
January 19th, 2025 13:23
Thomas W Case said:
You do a fantastic job with theese sonnets.
January 19th, 2025 13:23
With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa....
Cassie58 said:
Fine poetic expression in your sonnets Missy. A way to go yet before winter fades into the past and young spring brings forth birth and renewal. Bitterly chill here today. A pleasure to read you. Lovely to hear Vivaldi.
January 19th, 2025 08:27
Cassie58 said:
Fine poetic expression in your sonnets Missy. A way to go yet before winter fades into the past and young spring brings forth birth and renewal. Bitterly chill here today. A pleasure to read you. Lovely to hear Vivaldi.
January 19th, 2025 08:27
With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa....
2781 said:
I am/was, trying to compute the northern hemisphere seasons, in my scattered mind. Right, it\'s halfway through winter, sorry just imagining a scene. Enjoy
January 19th, 2025 08:00
2781 said:
I am/was, trying to compute the northern hemisphere seasons, in my scattered mind. Right, it\'s halfway through winter, sorry just imagining a scene. Enjoy
January 19th, 2025 08:00
With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa....
sorenbarrett said:
I thought at first it was the topic and imagry but then realized that these two were worded so poetically that I could not hold back a fave
January 19th, 2025 07:52
sorenbarrett said:
I thought at first it was the topic and imagry but then realized that these two were worded so poetically that I could not hold back a fave
January 19th, 2025 07:52
Of Sprites and Other \"Nonsense\"
sorenbarrett said:
Years ago had a glass coke bottle thrown at and bounce off my windshild but nothing since. A bit upsetting. Fun read none the less.
January 19th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Years ago had a glass coke bottle thrown at and bounce off my windshild but nothing since. A bit upsetting. Fun read none the less.
January 19th, 2025 05:07
Of Sprites and Other \"Nonsense\"
Neville said:
I think you are amazing Missy .. Yes amazing ma\'am, but please do try to slow down .. your nibs must be near molten even on a cold winters night .. Oh\' & I would seriously recommend you wear a crash helmet whilst driving for a week or two and carry either a Glock or a S&W neath ya dashboard .. at least until I can get the guys number from your dashcam .. 😉🤞
January 19th, 2025 04:51
Neville said:
I think you are amazing Missy .. Yes amazing ma\'am, but please do try to slow down .. your nibs must be near molten even on a cold winters night .. Oh\' & I would seriously recommend you wear a crash helmet whilst driving for a week or two and carry either a Glock or a S&W neath ya dashboard .. at least until I can get the guys number from your dashcam .. 😉🤞
January 19th, 2025 04:51
Of Sprites and Other \"Nonsense\"
arqios said:
That’s assault, isn’t it, whatever the reason or provocation….
January 19th, 2025 03:13
arqios said:
That’s assault, isn’t it, whatever the reason or provocation….
January 19th, 2025 03:13
Of Sprites and Other \"Nonsense\"
Doggerel Dave said:
Of course I enjoy - I don\'t always understand the motivation....but.... I just don\'t know how you find the time....
January 19th, 2025 00:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Of course I enjoy - I don\'t always understand the motivation....but.... I just don\'t know how you find the time....
January 19th, 2025 00:25
Of Sprites and Other \"Nonsense\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes, a drink thrown at your head while driving! That\'s something I\'ve never experienced. I\'ve had drinks thrown at my head, but never while driving! 🤣 Loved these sonnets, Missy! Also, looking forward to seeing what you are currently up to. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 22:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes, a drink thrown at your head while driving! That\'s something I\'ve never experienced. I\'ve had drinks thrown at my head, but never while driving! 🤣 Loved these sonnets, Missy! Also, looking forward to seeing what you are currently up to. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 22:03
There\'s Nothing Like the Pick-Up Line: \"I\'m Running A Fever of 104°\"...Is There?!
2781 said:
He heals all our dis-eases
January 18th, 2025 15:44
2781 said:
He heals all our dis-eases
January 18th, 2025 15:44
There\'s Nothing Like the Pick-Up Line: \"I\'m Running A Fever of 104°\"...Is There?!
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏 👏
Wow! 😲
Two awesome Sonnets
In a row I must say!👍
Those office workers seem
to have a refrigerator problem! 😳 😊
I won\'t touch that food,
no way Jöse!
Thanks for sharing poetess
much enjoyed!!
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
January 18th, 2025 14:09
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏 👏
Wow! 😲
Two awesome Sonnets
In a row I must say!👍
Those office workers seem
to have a refrigerator problem! 😳 😊
I won\'t touch that food,
no way Jöse!
Thanks for sharing poetess
much enjoyed!!
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
January 18th, 2025 14:09
There\'s Nothing Like the Pick-Up Line: \"I\'m Running A Fever of 104°\"...Is There?!
sorenbarrett said:
Work stories are about all I miss of the office or work site. They grow in exageration to limits beyound contemplation. A fun read Chic
January 17th, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
Work stories are about all I miss of the office or work site. They grow in exageration to limits beyound contemplation. A fun read Chic
January 17th, 2025 10:58
There\'s Nothing Like the Pick-Up Line: \"I\'m Running A Fever of 104°\"...Is There?!
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work.
January 16th, 2025 14:39
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work.
January 16th, 2025 14:39
There\'s Nothing Like the Pick-Up Line: \"I\'m Running A Fever of 104°\"...Is There?!
Neville said:
So very deliriously enjoyable Missy .. brought me out in a fine old sweat .. That\'ll teach em to keep the victuals on the plate and not to eat off the floor .. seconds please .. Neville
January 16th, 2025 03:06
Neville said:
So very deliriously enjoyable Missy .. brought me out in a fine old sweat .. That\'ll teach em to keep the victuals on the plate and not to eat off the floor .. seconds please .. Neville
January 16th, 2025 03:06
Beef Hot Dawgs at Midnight....oh!
Neville said:
Sounds like you had a great time .. being all beefed up like that and in pink too .. nuff to near make this old clinical specialist swoon BIG time .. Its the cold that gets to me most these days but have a spare space blanket if you need some extra heat .. so just holla .. Neville
January 15th, 2025 03:46
Neville said:
Sounds like you had a great time .. being all beefed up like that and in pink too .. nuff to near make this old clinical specialist swoon BIG time .. Its the cold that gets to me most these days but have a spare space blanket if you need some extra heat .. so just holla .. Neville
January 15th, 2025 03:46
Beef Hot Dawgs at Midnight....oh!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I no longer eat meat, and I still eat hot dogs (vegetarian), which are surprisingly good. I have always loved them and always will. Loved your sonnets, too, my friend. Well done! ❤️🙏
January 14th, 2025 19:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I no longer eat meat, and I still eat hot dogs (vegetarian), which are surprisingly good. I have always loved them and always will. Loved your sonnets, too, my friend. Well done! ❤️🙏
January 14th, 2025 19:39
Beef Hot Dawgs at Midnight....oh!
Thomas W Case said:
I love beef hotdogs. Great work.
January 14th, 2025 18:13
Thomas W Case said:
I love beef hotdogs. Great work.
January 14th, 2025 18:13
Beef Hot Dawgs at Midnight....oh!
sorenbarrett said:
Used to live next to a family that owned a hotdog factory. They would bring hotdogs to all the neighborhood get togeathers but they never ate one. Yea I know what is in them but I still eat them. A fun read.
January 14th, 2025 17:29
sorenbarrett said:
Used to live next to a family that owned a hotdog factory. They would bring hotdogs to all the neighborhood get togeathers but they never ate one. Yea I know what is in them but I still eat them. A fun read.
January 14th, 2025 17:29
You Didn\'t Want the Photograph, Did You?
Tom Dylan said:
Doh! I feel your pain. I was once enjoying a lovely kebab when I knocked my drink over. I panicked and jumped to get the drink, flinging my kebab everywhere! I was gutted! :-)
January 14th, 2025 08:24
Tom Dylan said:
Doh! I feel your pain. I was once enjoying a lovely kebab when I knocked my drink over. I panicked and jumped to get the drink, flinging my kebab everywhere! I was gutted! :-)
January 14th, 2025 08:24
You Didn\'t Want the Photograph, Did You?
Neville said:
Re: 1) You can toss a caber and you can beat an egg .. but you can\'t beat a tossed salad now can ya folks, let\'s be honest .. Re: 2) Absolutely bloomin brilliant & couldn\'t be battered nor bettered .. You just made me ache for the day I might be able to burn my white coat and draw the pension I have been working towards for goodness knows how long .. its another 👍👍Tuesday from me ma\'am .. Neville
January 14th, 2025 01:59
Neville said:
Re: 1) You can toss a caber and you can beat an egg .. but you can\'t beat a tossed salad now can ya folks, let\'s be honest .. Re: 2) Absolutely bloomin brilliant & couldn\'t be battered nor bettered .. You just made me ache for the day I might be able to burn my white coat and draw the pension I have been working towards for goodness knows how long .. its another 👍👍Tuesday from me ma\'am .. Neville
January 14th, 2025 01:59
You Didn\'t Want the Photograph, Did You?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done Missy! Glad you are still having fun despite it! Only way to roll, in my humble opinion. Another couple of mighty fine sonnet offerings, my friend. Well done! 🌹🌹
January 13th, 2025 19:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done Missy! Glad you are still having fun despite it! Only way to roll, in my humble opinion. Another couple of mighty fine sonnet offerings, my friend. Well done! 🌹🌹
January 13th, 2025 19:36
You Didn\'t Want the Photograph, Did You?
sorenbarrett said:
Too cold and hungry a most sad condition and to have fun despite this is a higher level. Very nice Chic
January 13th, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
Too cold and hungry a most sad condition and to have fun despite this is a higher level. Very nice Chic
January 13th, 2025 17:28
\"Wait, Wait--Don\'t Tell Me!\"
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. I love Vivaldi.
January 13th, 2025 13:53
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. I love Vivaldi.
January 13th, 2025 13:53
\"Wait, Wait--Don\'t Tell Me!\"
Tom Dylan said:
Some fine pieces there. And your comments about punishing us with four poems made me smile. A friend of mine reads my stories out on hospital radio, I always ask, have the patients not suffered enough? :-)
January 13th, 2025 08:32
Tom Dylan said:
Some fine pieces there. And your comments about punishing us with four poems made me smile. A friend of mine reads my stories out on hospital radio, I always ask, have the patients not suffered enough? :-)
January 13th, 2025 08:32
\"Wait, Wait--Don\'t Tell Me!\"
Neville said:
I personally think you pitched it just perfectly .. although I also get the impression you are pushing yourself or being pushed too hard .. You need to treat yourself to more neeps n tatties & some oak aged single malt more often ma\'am .. Neville
January 13th, 2025 03:01
Neville said:
I personally think you pitched it just perfectly .. although I also get the impression you are pushing yourself or being pushed too hard .. You need to treat yourself to more neeps n tatties & some oak aged single malt more often ma\'am .. Neville
January 13th, 2025 03:01
\"Wait, Wait--Don\'t Tell Me!\"
sorenbarrett said:
Morning ritual verses night and so it goes day to day. Well done Chic
January 12th, 2025 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
Morning ritual verses night and so it goes day to day. Well done Chic
January 12th, 2025 20:43
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