Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy



Dancing....With Love
jvl narasimha rao said:

YOU ARE ON POETIC FIRE. YOU DESREVE A 10. WHAT A POET YOU ARE! MAY BE YOU ARE CELEBRATING CHRISTMAS IN YOUR OWN WAY. I AM CELEBRATING IT IN MY OWN WAY
yours lovingly,
JVL NARASIMHA RAO

December 24th, 2010 12:11

What the Fireball Said.....
jvl narasimha rao said:

A LOVELY GIFT FOR UR HUSBAND.a GREAT POEM WITH GREAT PASSION WHICH DESERVES A 10
yours JVL

December 24th, 2010 12:06

What the Fireball Said.....
dbremner said:

Wonderful piece, sign me a book as well! Very glad you have posted it, it certainly deserves to be here.

December 24th, 2010 03:18

Dancing....With Love
dbremner said:

Absolutely Snowflake, Absolutely! Excellent sonnet.

December 23rd, 2010 12:12

Standing on the Cusp......
dbremner said:

Snowflake this piece is absolutely excellent. The way you structure lines 9 and 10 are pure brilliance.

December 22nd, 2010 16:14

Standing on the Cusp......
jvl narasimha rao said:

Your poem is as beautiful as life itself with its dreams,doubts, hopes, wishes and above all our fate.I have given a ten.I am always liberal with my younger sister
yours elder brother
JVL

December 22nd, 2010 01:02

Falling in Love with YOU
jvl narasimha rao said:

It may be a gift for your husband, my brother-in-law.He is lucky.
yours lovingly,
JVL

December 21st, 2010 12:18

Aren't We Having Fun?!
jvl narasimha rao said:



December 21st, 2010 11:58

Aren't We Having Fun?!
jvl narasimha rao said:

It looks personal but it is universal.You prove to be a great poet.You are making all of us have fun.i HAVE RATED IT WITH A TEN I am more liberal than you
yours lovingly,
JVL

December 21st, 2010 11:57

Aren't We Having Fun?!
dbremner said:

I like this poem a great deal. The 4,4,6,7 makes for a nicely flowing piece of poetry. The subject too is perfect! Well done to you.

December 21st, 2010 10:29

Aren't We Having Fun?!
Pratikshya said:

its really a sweet composition....and i felt all the sweet feelings of the heart.....

December 21st, 2010 07:20

Falling in Love with YOU
Dolphine29 said:

I like it!! It's honest, you should not be hard on yourself :)

December 20th, 2010 15:26

Falling in Love with YOU
dbremner said:

A well desrved 10 for this one.

December 20th, 2010 03:50

I'm Afraid I'm Very Stuck-up.....!
dbremner said:

I like this an the way it is presented ending each even numbered line with 'me' fits the story within the piece, very clever.

December 19th, 2010 16:28

O Childhood....whither hast thou fled?
ironmaiden_81186 said:

i really like this piece, for its medieval style of writing and the theme that it has touched......and i know this poem has a much better literary feel than "back to times of splendor"...
very well written for its holistic approach towards a human life cycle...

December 19th, 2010 01:04

O Childhood....whither hast thou fled?
dbremner said:

I like this poem it deals with a subject we likely all think about, our younger days seem brighter but we should be optimistic about the future too.

December 18th, 2010 19:04

Brothers
jvl narasimha rao said:

You seem to be my sister.You always follow my poems .You have A sisterly heart.As a brother I rated the poem with a ten
yours loving brother,
JVL

December 18th, 2010 11:57

Brothers
dbremner said:

Nice poem, what a nice sister they have!

December 17th, 2010 15:29

I Don't Like You Anymore
dbremner said:

You have no reason to be dissatisfied as this is a well written piece.

December 16th, 2010 13:48

Two Little Flames....A Fire!
ironmaiden_81186 said:

a great love poem.....

December 16th, 2010 07:39

Thoughts of Spring in Wintertime.....
ironmaiden_81186 said:

"Thus beguile you winter's clime
With warm thoughts of spring's delight".....just love the last lines,
a very fiting end to a beautiful poem..


December 16th, 2010 07:26

"S" is for.......
StormyDay said:

It's silly and truely original; very fun with a rhyme scheme to boot! It brings a smile to my face. With your permission I'd like to try your new style for myself (?)

December 15th, 2010 15:07

Thoughts of Spring in Wintertime.....
dbremner said:

A REALLY nice poem, I like it dearly. Well done to you.

December 15th, 2010 13:54

A Close Friend
Lifewellspoken said:

Short but sweet...I love it.

December 15th, 2010 00:40

Two Little Flames....A Fire!
dbremner said:

A beautiful love poem. Well done! Very well done!

December 14th, 2010 14:40

Lament....My Windows are Closed for Winter!
dbremner said:

Nice poem with nice sentiments attached to it. Well done.

December 13th, 2010 16:59

It Rained Upon a Monday Here
dbremner said:

I really like the last two lines. They end it very well.

December 12th, 2010 14:38

Vanity....a lament
dbremner said:

It definately deserves to be published in my view.

December 11th, 2010 13:27

Our Lives are Spent in Vanity
dbremner said:

VERY well written with clearly much meaningful thought put in to it.

December 10th, 2010 16:35

Repenting Oneself
Hoween94 said:

I liked this poem very much. It just makes me want to read it over and over again.

December 9th, 2010 17:55



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