Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
O Childhood....whither hast thou fled?
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i really like this piece, for its medieval style of writing and the theme that it has touched......and i know this poem has a much better literary feel than "back to times of splendor"...
very well written for its holistic approach towards a human life cycle...
December 19th, 2010 01:04
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i really like this piece, for its medieval style of writing and the theme that it has touched......and i know this poem has a much better literary feel than "back to times of splendor"...
very well written for its holistic approach towards a human life cycle...
December 19th, 2010 01:04
O Childhood....whither hast thou fled?
dbremner said:
I like this poem it deals with a subject we likely all think about, our younger days seem brighter but we should be optimistic about the future too.
December 18th, 2010 19:04
dbremner said:
I like this poem it deals with a subject we likely all think about, our younger days seem brighter but we should be optimistic about the future too.
December 18th, 2010 19:04
Brothers
jvl narasimha rao said:
You seem to be my sister.You always follow my poems .You have A sisterly heart.As a brother I rated the poem with a ten
yours loving brother,
JVL
December 18th, 2010 11:57
jvl narasimha rao said:
You seem to be my sister.You always follow my poems .You have A sisterly heart.As a brother I rated the poem with a ten
yours loving brother,
JVL
December 18th, 2010 11:57
I Don't Like You Anymore
dbremner said:
You have no reason to be dissatisfied as this is a well written piece.
December 16th, 2010 13:48
dbremner said:
You have no reason to be dissatisfied as this is a well written piece.
December 16th, 2010 13:48
Thoughts of Spring in Wintertime.....
ironmaiden_81186 said:
"Thus beguile you winter's clime
With warm thoughts of spring's delight".....just love the last lines,
a very fiting end to a beautiful poem..
December 16th, 2010 07:26
ironmaiden_81186 said:
"Thus beguile you winter's clime
With warm thoughts of spring's delight".....just love the last lines,
a very fiting end to a beautiful poem..
December 16th, 2010 07:26
"S" is for.......
StormyDay said:
It's silly and truely original; very fun with a rhyme scheme to boot! It brings a smile to my face. With your permission I'd like to try your new style for myself (?)
December 15th, 2010 15:07
StormyDay said:
It's silly and truely original; very fun with a rhyme scheme to boot! It brings a smile to my face. With your permission I'd like to try your new style for myself (?)
December 15th, 2010 15:07
Thoughts of Spring in Wintertime.....
dbremner said:
A REALLY nice poem, I like it dearly. Well done to you.
December 15th, 2010 13:54
dbremner said:
A REALLY nice poem, I like it dearly. Well done to you.
December 15th, 2010 13:54
Two Little Flames....A Fire!
dbremner said:
A beautiful love poem. Well done! Very well done!
December 14th, 2010 14:40
dbremner said:
A beautiful love poem. Well done! Very well done!
December 14th, 2010 14:40
Lament....My Windows are Closed for Winter!
dbremner said:
Nice poem with nice sentiments attached to it. Well done.
December 13th, 2010 16:59
dbremner said:
Nice poem with nice sentiments attached to it. Well done.
December 13th, 2010 16:59
It Rained Upon a Monday Here
dbremner said:
I really like the last two lines. They end it very well.
December 12th, 2010 14:38
dbremner said:
I really like the last two lines. They end it very well.
December 12th, 2010 14:38
Vanity....a lament
dbremner said:
It definately deserves to be published in my view.
December 11th, 2010 13:27
dbremner said:
It definately deserves to be published in my view.
December 11th, 2010 13:27
Our Lives are Spent in Vanity
dbremner said:
VERY well written with clearly much meaningful thought put in to it.
December 10th, 2010 16:35
dbremner said:
VERY well written with clearly much meaningful thought put in to it.
December 10th, 2010 16:35
Repenting Oneself
Hoween94 said:
I liked this poem very much. It just makes me want to read it over and over again.
December 9th, 2010 17:55
Hoween94 said:
I liked this poem very much. It just makes me want to read it over and over again.
December 9th, 2010 17:55
Repenting Oneself
dbremner said:
Very well constructed and clearly a very personal piece. As a poem I like it dearly.
December 9th, 2010 16:20
dbremner said:
Very well constructed and clearly a very personal piece. As a poem I like it dearly.
December 9th, 2010 16:20
A Close Friend
dbremner said:
It is a good little poem that says a lot in just a short piece.
December 7th, 2010 15:32
dbremner said:
It is a good little poem that says a lot in just a short piece.
December 7th, 2010 15:32
Reflections on a Frosty Window
dbremner said:
Ten for this without any doubt.
December 6th, 2010 13:35
dbremner said:
Ten for this without any doubt.
December 6th, 2010 13:35
Trudging through the snow...
Lifewellspoken said:
This is a very sweet poem/song, I love it.
December 5th, 2010 19:36
Lifewellspoken said:
This is a very sweet poem/song, I love it.
December 5th, 2010 19:36
"S" is for.......
dbremner said:
Likeable poem. Never seen one like it before.
December 4th, 2010 14:35
dbremner said:
Likeable poem. Never seen one like it before.
December 4th, 2010 14:35
"S" is for.......
ironmaiden_81186 said:
clecverly written...the vagueness of it is the beauty of it..
December 4th, 2010 05:25
ironmaiden_81186 said:
clecverly written...the vagueness of it is the beauty of it..
December 4th, 2010 05:25
I am Like the Weeds, I Guess....
ironmaiden_81186 said:
that adult must have been right....you certainly have a pretty smile
and when you put that in words...its even better.. so smile :)
December 4th, 2010 05:20
ironmaiden_81186 said:
that adult must have been right....you certainly have a pretty smile
and when you put that in words...its even better.. so smile :)
December 4th, 2010 05:20
Autumn's Promise....Love Won!
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i m still trying to unearth a few lines here......but i guess u broke the barrier of amateur poetry...its as beautiful as it can get
and i think the best comes in the least time...its flawless and the imagery is excellent...kudos
December 2nd, 2010 23:32
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i m still trying to unearth a few lines here......but i guess u broke the barrier of amateur poetry...its as beautiful as it can get
and i think the best comes in the least time...its flawless and the imagery is excellent...kudos
December 2nd, 2010 23:32
Why Should I Smile?
dbremner said:
Clever working of the lines through/between each part.
December 2nd, 2010 17:05
dbremner said:
Clever working of the lines through/between each part.
December 2nd, 2010 17:05
Where's Your Smile? (revision)
dbremner said:
Clever reworking. I can hear the American accent!
December 1st, 2010 14:13
dbremner said:
Clever reworking. I can hear the American accent!
December 1st, 2010 14:13
I'm Not Good Enough for YOU......
dbremner said:
Sounds good to me as well. I read it a few of times and liked it better each time.
November 29th, 2010 17:31
dbremner said:
Sounds good to me as well. I read it a few of times and liked it better each time.
November 29th, 2010 17:31
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