Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
Dear Valentine......
Zojinjo said:
Loved it! You have a perfect choice of words and the rhythm is flawless.
February 3rd, 2011 16:48
Zojinjo said:
Loved it! You have a perfect choice of words and the rhythm is flawless.
February 3rd, 2011 16:48
Your Valentine.....
Leonard Dabydeen said:
Dance to the music of the mind, the closer you twirl towards him your Valentine will get closer to you. Keep dancing.
February 2nd, 2011 23:34
Leonard Dabydeen said:
Dance to the music of the mind, the closer you twirl towards him your Valentine will get closer to you. Keep dancing.
February 2nd, 2011 23:34
Re: the Church
Marius said:
Sounds like words and feelings coming out from years spent in the environment you describe here. Not your typical religious poem. Not many who believe would admit to the fear factor so prevalent in Christianity.
I would respectfully take exception to the hate mentioned in the last verse, though. I don't hate believers. Hate is the most honest feeling; it cannot be faked. They say love is the most powerful feeling in the world? Well, one can fake love, but not hate.
However, it is also too strong a feeling to be used against people you don't even know personally, and in my opinion, not worthy of being used at all.
Well written.
January 30th, 2011 00:27
Marius said:
Sounds like words and feelings coming out from years spent in the environment you describe here. Not your typical religious poem. Not many who believe would admit to the fear factor so prevalent in Christianity.
I would respectfully take exception to the hate mentioned in the last verse, though. I don't hate believers. Hate is the most honest feeling; it cannot be faked. They say love is the most powerful feeling in the world? Well, one can fake love, but not hate.
However, it is also too strong a feeling to be used against people you don't even know personally, and in my opinion, not worthy of being used at all.
Well written.
January 30th, 2011 00:27
Clothespin Illustration of Marriage?!
Belinda AMeharry said:
Nicely put.
Could the one with the spring have more strength in that moment of time. The ability to bring you back to feeling, to love...
January 29th, 2011 18:40
Belinda AMeharry said:
Nicely put.
Could the one with the spring have more strength in that moment of time. The ability to bring you back to feeling, to love...
January 29th, 2011 18:40
I love to sail....
Alexandre Landsley said:
Who wouldn't want to sail to the "High Seas?" After reading this everyone will want to.........great poem. :)
January 29th, 2011 14:27
Alexandre Landsley said:
Who wouldn't want to sail to the "High Seas?" After reading this everyone will want to.........great poem. :)
January 29th, 2011 14:27
I love to sail....
dbremner said:
Really good poem, is it about kite flying?
January 29th, 2011 04:36
dbremner said:
Really good poem, is it about kite flying?
January 29th, 2011 04:36
Where not to put the Broken...
StormyDay said:
Aw, I was going to guess a pencil.. Anyway, cute poem! I thought it so fun, would you consider doing more riddle-poems?
January 28th, 2011 13:15
StormyDay said:
Aw, I was going to guess a pencil.. Anyway, cute poem! I thought it so fun, would you consider doing more riddle-poems?
January 28th, 2011 13:15
Where not to put the Broken...
Belinda AMeharry said:
lol
I give up. What was it?
January 28th, 2011 07:11
Belinda AMeharry said:
lol
I give up. What was it?
January 28th, 2011 07:11
Where not to put the Broken...
Marius said:
"clothespin" according to Jenny Gordon ;)
January 28th, 2011 04:26
Marius said:
"clothespin" according to Jenny Gordon ;)
January 28th, 2011 04:26
Clothespin Illustration of Marriage?!
gerrylegister said:
Thought provoking poem, with a serious element, leaving you thinking which side is better.
January 27th, 2011 21:26
gerrylegister said:
Thought provoking poem, with a serious element, leaving you thinking which side is better.
January 27th, 2011 21:26
Lightning Bugs?
Zojinjo said:
A very nice poem. Good rhythm and I nice choice of words.
You've sketched a scene I've encountered many times, yet I never thought of it this way. Great work.
-Zojinjo
January 27th, 2011 13:42
Zojinjo said:
A very nice poem. Good rhythm and I nice choice of words.
You've sketched a scene I've encountered many times, yet I never thought of it this way. Great work.
-Zojinjo
January 27th, 2011 13:42
Clothespin Illustration of Marriage?!
StormyDay said:
It's intriquing, thought-provoking, loved it. You never mentioned what the spring symbolizes..well, here's an idea. I think it is the bond of love, and through it God, for he is love incarnate.
January 27th, 2011 12:31
StormyDay said:
It's intriquing, thought-provoking, loved it. You never mentioned what the spring symbolizes..well, here's an idea. I think it is the bond of love, and through it God, for he is love incarnate.
January 27th, 2011 12:31
Clothespin Illustration of Marriage?!
StormyDay said:
It's intriquing, thought-provoking, loved it. You never mentioned what the spring symbolizes..well, here's an idea. I think it is the bond of love, and through it God, for he is love incarnate.
January 27th, 2011 12:31
StormyDay said:
It's intriquing, thought-provoking, loved it. You never mentioned what the spring symbolizes..well, here's an idea. I think it is the bond of love, and through it God, for he is love incarnate.
January 27th, 2011 12:31
Clothespin Illustration of Marriage?!
Marius said:
Humorous yet very serious. Been there, done that and I can relate. It spoke to me.
However, to answer your question, the woman is always the better half ;)
January 27th, 2011 03:21
Marius said:
Humorous yet very serious. Been there, done that and I can relate. It spoke to me.
However, to answer your question, the woman is always the better half ;)
January 27th, 2011 03:21
Ah, Incurable Dreamer.......
Marius said:
A nightmare for the protagonist but a dream of a poem. Very expressive.
January 27th, 2011 03:15
Marius said:
A nightmare for the protagonist but a dream of a poem. Very expressive.
January 27th, 2011 03:15
Lightning Bugs?
Marius said:
Very nice poem. I loved the fireflies comparison.
January 26th, 2011 04:06
Marius said:
Very nice poem. I loved the fireflies comparison.
January 26th, 2011 04:06
Ah, but what to write?
Marius said:
This beautifully exposes the feelings one gets from writing and reading their own creations as well as the dreaded writer's block when nothing seems to work. I loved it.
January 25th, 2011 17:00
Marius said:
This beautifully exposes the feelings one gets from writing and reading their own creations as well as the dreaded writer's block when nothing seems to work. I loved it.
January 25th, 2011 17:00
Grown Up?
gerrylegister said:
I agree with wisdom with age gained, beautiful!
January 22nd, 2011 01:24
gerrylegister said:
I agree with wisdom with age gained, beautiful!
January 22nd, 2011 01:24
Consider This When You Complain
downinit said:
yw:) thank u like i said it was great to remember her
January 20th, 2011 01:06
downinit said:
yw:) thank u like i said it was great to remember her
January 20th, 2011 01:06
Consider This When You Complain
downinit said:
this poem reminded me of a girl I onced cared for in a Christ centered camp. She was 8 and had no parents left to live from foster home to foster home she visted us for one week and as I was showing her the love of God she shared a favorite verse of hers- do everything without fault finding or complaining. i don't remember the address. You don't know how that changed my life coming from an orphan a sweet and gentle yet strong little girl. thnx for reminding me !!!!!!! loved it!
January 20th, 2011 00:54
downinit said:
this poem reminded me of a girl I onced cared for in a Christ centered camp. She was 8 and had no parents left to live from foster home to foster home she visted us for one week and as I was showing her the love of God she shared a favorite verse of hers- do everything without fault finding or complaining. i don't remember the address. You don't know how that changed my life coming from an orphan a sweet and gentle yet strong little girl. thnx for reminding me !!!!!!! loved it!
January 20th, 2011 00:54
You Make My Day
gerrylegister said:
Love sweetly woven in beautiful presentation
January 19th, 2011 17:27
gerrylegister said:
Love sweetly woven in beautiful presentation
January 19th, 2011 17:27
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