Comments received on poems by sincerelymarie
Her first heartbreak
L. B. Mek said:
\'They made me feel unworthy of stillness\'
so powerful
when we distil, lifeline
genius wisdom
to accessibly worded
poetic efficacy...
thank you, dear Poet
I read and learn
(ain\'t it funny, how easily
we allow ourselves
to concede, our right
to be who or what, we choose to be
assuming
their collective, righteousness
has more power, than our strife
crystalized
self awareness, how sad
when tomorrow, they\'ll claim they
once
loved us for that same, resolve
we surrendered
just to belong, to that
we know, we so vehemently despise...!)
April 21st, 2023 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'They made me feel unworthy of stillness\'
so powerful
when we distil, lifeline
genius wisdom
to accessibly worded
poetic efficacy...
thank you, dear Poet
I read and learn
(ain\'t it funny, how easily
we allow ourselves
to concede, our right
to be who or what, we choose to be
assuming
their collective, righteousness
has more power, than our strife
crystalized
self awareness, how sad
when tomorrow, they\'ll claim they
once
loved us for that same, resolve
we surrendered
just to belong, to that
we know, we so vehemently despise...!)
April 21st, 2023 06:05
2pm showers
L. B. Mek said:
I can so relate to your nuances, dear Poet
thanks for sharing
(love taints
then its, tethers
linger
and try as we might
new shower gel or perfume
its scents, still haunt
mercilessly
till we\'re taking 2pm showers
while reliving 2am scenes...)
December 2nd, 2022 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
I can so relate to your nuances, dear Poet
thanks for sharing
(love taints
then its, tethers
linger
and try as we might
new shower gel or perfume
its scents, still haunt
mercilessly
till we\'re taking 2pm showers
while reliving 2am scenes...)
December 2nd, 2022 05:47
Sincerely, Marie
Doggerel Dave said:
Interesting slightly enigmatic piece which kept my attention,
Should you intend to stay, it would be good if you could tell us something about yourself plus read and respond to other\'s poems.
November 15th, 2022 00:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Interesting slightly enigmatic piece which kept my attention,
Should you intend to stay, it would be good if you could tell us something about yourself plus read and respond to other\'s poems.
November 15th, 2022 00:30
