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Burning Souls
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so eloquently expressed, and read aloud even more impactful. I love the analogy to the stars. Though the light we see may have been extinguished years ago, it still reaches our eyes and burns bright. Loved it!
December 23rd, 2022 10:26
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so eloquently expressed, and read aloud even more impactful. I love the analogy to the stars. Though the light we see may have been extinguished years ago, it still reaches our eyes and burns bright. Loved it!
December 23rd, 2022 10:26
Burning Souls
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, a good read
thanks for sharing
(the very act of looking
is to witness history, in the making
hence why we require awareness
to distil the moment from that forest
of sensory chaos
we recognise as existence
, pain and hurt
existing, in each second
either we\'re heading to that inevitability
or recovering from having survived it, barely
so those rare gifted moments of peace
we learn to cherish, hesitatingly..)
December 23rd, 2022 10:08
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, a good read
thanks for sharing
(the very act of looking
is to witness history, in the making
hence why we require awareness
to distil the moment from that forest
of sensory chaos
we recognise as existence
, pain and hurt
existing, in each second
either we\'re heading to that inevitability
or recovering from having survived it, barely
so those rare gifted moments of peace
we learn to cherish, hesitatingly..)
December 23rd, 2022 10:08
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