Comments received on poems by rhmn_7
My Biggest Fear
sorenbarrett said:
A precursor to the existential question. Shakespear said \"To thine own self be true\" and how can you be true without knowing oneself? Good write
January 10th, 2023 11:50
sorenbarrett said:
A precursor to the existential question. Shakespear said \"To thine own self be true\" and how can you be true without knowing oneself? Good write
January 10th, 2023 11:50
My Biggest Fear
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always care for ourselves as if we do not how can we help others. Good words rhmn_7.
Andy
January 9th, 2023 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always care for ourselves as if we do not how can we help others. Good words rhmn_7.
Andy
January 9th, 2023 02:26
My Biggest Fear
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words make a good case for being awake to who we are. and enjoying seeing the shine of our special place in the universe. Thank you for sharing this finely penned post.
January 8th, 2023 08:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words make a good case for being awake to who we are. and enjoying seeing the shine of our special place in the universe. Thank you for sharing this finely penned post.
January 8th, 2023 08:54
Season of Death
PurpleGlasses said:
Love this Poem especially the first two line! Amazing
December 30th, 2022 11:41
PurpleGlasses said:
Love this Poem especially the first two line! Amazing
December 30th, 2022 11:41
for you
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A superb poem of undying love expressed in strong bond, self love or love of your life.
Altogether awesome to read! Kudos for this muse.!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:56
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A superb poem of undying love expressed in strong bond, self love or love of your life.
Altogether awesome to read! Kudos for this muse.!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:56
Burning Souls
sorenbarrett said:
This started with such an obvious but neglected view \"do we live in the past if we look at stars\" It left my mind wandering. Then with your next lines it took my mind to another place. All this was cognitive but the next stanza took me to an emotional level. This shifting of levels was very nice and formed a completeness. The last stanza tied it all together. Well done
December 23rd, 2022 16:00
sorenbarrett said:
This started with such an obvious but neglected view \"do we live in the past if we look at stars\" It left my mind wandering. Then with your next lines it took my mind to another place. All this was cognitive but the next stanza took me to an emotional level. This shifting of levels was very nice and formed a completeness. The last stanza tied it all together. Well done
December 23rd, 2022 16:00
Burning Souls
kaetlynn ✿ said:
so beautifully written and relatable. \"only for me to be left behind by a liar\" gave me full body chills. thank you for sharing, please continue to do so! you definitely have a gift
December 23rd, 2022 14:01
kaetlynn ✿ said:
so beautifully written and relatable. \"only for me to be left behind by a liar\" gave me full body chills. thank you for sharing, please continue to do so! you definitely have a gift
December 23rd, 2022 14:01
Burning Souls
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so eloquently expressed, and read aloud even more impactful. I love the analogy to the stars. Though the light we see may have been extinguished years ago, it still reaches our eyes and burns bright. Loved it!
December 23rd, 2022 10:26
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so eloquently expressed, and read aloud even more impactful. I love the analogy to the stars. Though the light we see may have been extinguished years ago, it still reaches our eyes and burns bright. Loved it!
December 23rd, 2022 10:26
Burning Souls
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, a good read
thanks for sharing
(the very act of looking
is to witness history, in the making
hence why we require awareness
to distil the moment from that forest
of sensory chaos
we recognise as existence
, pain and hurt
existing, in each second
either we\'re heading to that inevitability
or recovering from having survived it, barely
so those rare gifted moments of peace
we learn to cherish, hesitatingly..)
December 23rd, 2022 10:08
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, a good read
thanks for sharing
(the very act of looking
is to witness history, in the making
hence why we require awareness
to distil the moment from that forest
of sensory chaos
we recognise as existence
, pain and hurt
existing, in each second
either we\'re heading to that inevitability
or recovering from having survived it, barely
so those rare gifted moments of peace
we learn to cherish, hesitatingly..)
December 23rd, 2022 10:08
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