Comments received on poems by rhmn_7
Paper Planes
Neville said:
I am so glad I stopped by on my way elsewhere .. I was not disappointed ..
February 25th, 2024 14:49
Neville said:
I am so glad I stopped by on my way elsewhere .. I was not disappointed ..
February 25th, 2024 14:49
Paper Planes
Cassie58 said:
Your emotion is conveyed well here in this sad situation. Separations can be so difficult. A poignant read and written with skill. A good job done.
February 25th, 2024 14:25
Cassie58 said:
Your emotion is conveyed well here in this sad situation. Separations can be so difficult. A poignant read and written with skill. A good job done.
February 25th, 2024 14:25
Paper Planes
Accidental Poet said:
Very well crafted rhmn7, separated hearts can bring out the best of poetry. 😊👍
February 25th, 2024 11:34
Accidental Poet said:
Very well crafted rhmn7, separated hearts can bring out the best of poetry. 😊👍
February 25th, 2024 11:34
Paper Planes
Eugene S. said:
A very visual portrayal. I can see the paper planes - excellent analogy. Awesome & tragic poem.
February 25th, 2024 09:58
Eugene S. said:
A very visual portrayal. I can see the paper planes - excellent analogy. Awesome & tragic poem.
February 25th, 2024 09:58
Paper Planes
Teddy.15 said:
A very painful parting, longing even in death to be loved by another. Absolutely beautiful ❤️
February 25th, 2024 09:56
Teddy.15 said:
A very painful parting, longing even in death to be loved by another. Absolutely beautiful ❤️
February 25th, 2024 09:56
Paper Planes
sorenbarrett said:
Your approach with a question to the reader was a great beginning. It is also a great metaphor with the image of a loved one separated by the distance of a plane flight. Maintaining the theme another great ploy that keeps the reader on track.
\"14 springs saw our white jasmine tree,
one more year, and you win.\"
A wonderful line with the analogy of natures growth compared to the time apart. This makes the poem feel so human and real.
\"How did you spend years without me?\"
A great finishing line to the previous thought.
\"Two and a half words written on my wing:\"
This last line makes this a masterpiece. It ties in the first theme and leaves the reader to wonder what are the two and a half words. I can guess but I\'m never sure.
February 25th, 2024 09:24
sorenbarrett said:
Your approach with a question to the reader was a great beginning. It is also a great metaphor with the image of a loved one separated by the distance of a plane flight. Maintaining the theme another great ploy that keeps the reader on track.
\"14 springs saw our white jasmine tree,
one more year, and you win.\"
A wonderful line with the analogy of natures growth compared to the time apart. This makes the poem feel so human and real.
\"How did you spend years without me?\"
A great finishing line to the previous thought.
\"Two and a half words written on my wing:\"
This last line makes this a masterpiece. It ties in the first theme and leaves the reader to wonder what are the two and a half words. I can guess but I\'m never sure.
February 25th, 2024 09:24
Paper Planes
Alan R said:
Is love far away,
or longing too close?
Like paper planes we fly
who will part the most?
This is just brilliant
February 25th, 2024 09:20
Alan R said:
Is love far away,
or longing too close?
Like paper planes we fly
who will part the most?
This is just brilliant
February 25th, 2024 09:20
Painter of the Sky
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! How fortunate you were to witness such splendor, and then to capture it in this beautiful verse, truly inspired. The painter is indeed there for our benefit, a lovely homage!
November 5th, 2023 10:02
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! How fortunate you were to witness such splendor, and then to capture it in this beautiful verse, truly inspired. The painter is indeed there for our benefit, a lovely homage!
November 5th, 2023 10:02
Burning Souls
Firefall said:
Great poem. There is something so universal about looking at the sky and thinking about being separated from your love. ... Thank you for reminding me that you are literally looking at the past and longing for past memories.
November 5th, 2023 06:35
Firefall said:
Great poem. There is something so universal about looking at the sky and thinking about being separated from your love. ... Thank you for reminding me that you are literally looking at the past and longing for past memories.
November 5th, 2023 06:35
Men only cry when it rains
Neville said:
I love the association you make between rain and a mans tears ..
actually I very much like the message that runs throughout ..
.. Neville
October 29th, 2023 08:04
Neville said:
I love the association you make between rain and a mans tears ..
actually I very much like the message that runs throughout ..
.. Neville
October 29th, 2023 08:04
Painter of the Sky
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in words. Very nice
October 26th, 2023 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in words. Very nice
October 26th, 2023 11:09
Painter of the Sky
Neville said:
Please excuse the frustratingly protracted delay in my being able to reply .. a most impressive poem as is your photograph that heads this page .. Neville
October 23rd, 2023 14:51
Neville said:
Please excuse the frustratingly protracted delay in my being able to reply .. a most impressive poem as is your photograph that heads this page .. Neville
October 23rd, 2023 14:51
Men only cry when it rains
Eileen Clark said:
A beautiful poem, I\'m so glad I came over to meet you and your awesome work, best regards.
October 22nd, 2023 12:03
Eileen Clark said:
A beautiful poem, I\'m so glad I came over to meet you and your awesome work, best regards.
October 22nd, 2023 12:03
Painter of the Sky
Parisab said:
Great eye for hidden details of creation and nature…
October 22nd, 2023 11:40
Parisab said:
Great eye for hidden details of creation and nature…
October 22nd, 2023 11:40
Starbucks
Teddy.15 said:
LOL wonderful. I live in Italy and here we keep it simple caffè caffè latte and cappuccino 🤗 and some times we push the boat out and have a caffe doppio
October 22nd, 2023 10:02
Teddy.15 said:
LOL wonderful. I live in Italy and here we keep it simple caffè caffè latte and cappuccino 🤗 and some times we push the boat out and have a caffe doppio
October 22nd, 2023 10:02
Painter of the Sky
Christina8 said:
Very inspiring, indeed. Loved the poetry throughout. Wonderful!
October 22nd, 2023 09:53
Christina8 said:
Very inspiring, indeed. Loved the poetry throughout. Wonderful!
October 22nd, 2023 09:53
Painter of the Sky
2781 said:
What is man, that thou art mindful of him? And the son of man, that thou visit him?
October 22nd, 2023 09:37
2781 said:
What is man, that thou art mindful of him? And the son of man, that thou visit him?
October 22nd, 2023 09:37
Men only cry when it rains
Carly said:
This is so prevalent to how men can hurt just as much and suffer internally but they feel as though they have to hide it to maintain their strong demeanour, beautifully penned 💕
October 3rd, 2023 13:27
Carly said:
This is so prevalent to how men can hurt just as much and suffer internally but they feel as though they have to hide it to maintain their strong demeanour, beautifully penned 💕
October 3rd, 2023 13:27
Men only cry when it rains
janiselizabeth said:
It cannot be understated enough how hard it is for men to be emotionally vulnerable. There is a terrible double standard in society that is plaguing men right now. You are expected first to be emotional and open with your feelings. When you are, you are disrespected by peers and partners for being weak. You are trampled on and considered feminine. Then, if you hold everything back you are considered to be emotionally unavailable and are criticized for being too masculine. Society has not actually in practice done anything to help men be comfortable and secure with feeling all the same emotions that women do.
October 3rd, 2023 07:19
janiselizabeth said:
It cannot be understated enough how hard it is for men to be emotionally vulnerable. There is a terrible double standard in society that is plaguing men right now. You are expected first to be emotional and open with your feelings. When you are, you are disrespected by peers and partners for being weak. You are trampled on and considered feminine. Then, if you hold everything back you are considered to be emotionally unavailable and are criticized for being too masculine. Society has not actually in practice done anything to help men be comfortable and secure with feeling all the same emotions that women do.
October 3rd, 2023 07:19
Starbucks
Neville said:
make mine a double espresso .. cheers ....................... neville
June 21st, 2023 15:33
Neville said:
make mine a double espresso .. cheers ....................... neville
June 21st, 2023 15:33
Starbucks
Eugene S. said:
Maybe that\'s why I get the same Ole plain Latte. Can\'t stand all of the other extremities. Great metaphor.
June 18th, 2023 12:45
Eugene S. said:
Maybe that\'s why I get the same Ole plain Latte. Can\'t stand all of the other extremities. Great metaphor.
June 18th, 2023 12:45
Starbucks
Bella Shepard said:
Words have flowed from your fingertips onto this page in the most wonderful way. As I read each stanza I nod my head and think \"yes, yes, yes...\" Such sadness when we lose ourselves to the hyperbole of life, forgetting that coffee is just coffee and when it is consumed we are still the same old person we were. I love this poem!
June 6th, 2023 14:23
Bella Shepard said:
Words have flowed from your fingertips onto this page in the most wonderful way. As I read each stanza I nod my head and think \"yes, yes, yes...\" Such sadness when we lose ourselves to the hyperbole of life, forgetting that coffee is just coffee and when it is consumed we are still the same old person we were. I love this poem!
June 6th, 2023 14:23
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