Comments received on poems by rhmn_7
Wanna fall in love?
NafisaSB said:
so many options here - but love is blind, and sudden - it can happen without notice at the oddest of times, and the strangest places
imagination put to good use, enjoyed the verse
December 26th, 2024 02:23
NafisaSB said:
so many options here - but love is blind, and sudden - it can happen without notice at the oddest of times, and the strangest places
imagination put to good use, enjoyed the verse
December 26th, 2024 02:23
Wanna fall in love?
Bella Shepard said:
I grew up going to the movies, lingering over the story lines of accidental meetings that stirred a vision of perfect love in a young girls heart. Everything glittered in Hollywood, we yearned for it, and you capture that feeling perfectly in this beautifully versed poem. You then bring us gently down to earth with words that express what real love should be. Exquisitly done my friend!
December 23rd, 2024 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
I grew up going to the movies, lingering over the story lines of accidental meetings that stirred a vision of perfect love in a young girls heart. Everything glittered in Hollywood, we yearned for it, and you capture that feeling perfectly in this beautifully versed poem. You then bring us gently down to earth with words that express what real love should be. Exquisitly done my friend!
December 23rd, 2024 13:40
Wanna fall in love?
Doggerel Dave said:
\"You don\'t want love,
but a shiny glittery copy.\"
Shouldn\'t really be here at all; I\'ve banged on about the word \'love\' and what it isn\'t, quite often here. However you have given reasonable space to describing one form it isn\'t. Thumbs up from me👍
December 21st, 2024 19:26
Doggerel Dave said:
\"You don\'t want love,
but a shiny glittery copy.\"
Shouldn\'t really be here at all; I\'ve banged on about the word \'love\' and what it isn\'t, quite often here. However you have given reasonable space to describing one form it isn\'t. Thumbs up from me👍
December 21st, 2024 19:26
Wanna fall in love?
David Wakeling said:
A vivid exploration of the many ways Love can happened.Enjoyable read
December 21st, 2024 14:47
David Wakeling said:
A vivid exploration of the many ways Love can happened.Enjoyable read
December 21st, 2024 14:47
Wanna fall in love?
Teddy.15 said:
I love this because as a young woman when I was single I really looked for this Hollywood love, it never came and I\'m happy with my lot, but that is because as you rightly say in your last stanza, true love needs no frame, absolutely the best way to see it. Wonderful, and kudos for your empathy towards us ever soppy ladies 🤣
December 21st, 2024 13:17
Teddy.15 said:
I love this because as a young woman when I was single I really looked for this Hollywood love, it never came and I\'m happy with my lot, but that is because as you rightly say in your last stanza, true love needs no frame, absolutely the best way to see it. Wonderful, and kudos for your empathy towards us ever soppy ladies 🤣
December 21st, 2024 13:17
Wanna fall in love?
Cassie58 said:
A fabulous read. Much enjoyed. Pleased I stopped by. You get a fav from me. All the best.
December 21st, 2024 13:05
Cassie58 said:
A fabulous read. Much enjoyed. Pleased I stopped by. You get a fav from me. All the best.
December 21st, 2024 13:05
Wanna fall in love?
Neville said:
I doubt anyone anywhere would decline the invitation .. and if they had half a chance, most would surely jump at it .. I quite fancy it in the library myself .. 😎👍
December 21st, 2024 11:58
Neville said:
I doubt anyone anywhere would decline the invitation .. and if they had half a chance, most would surely jump at it .. I quite fancy it in the library myself .. 😎👍
December 21st, 2024 11:58
Life
rrodriguez said:
I enjoyed reading your poem and thought about the many times that I wanted to quit, but I kept on going and I\'m glad I did. Wonderful message, my friend.
September 5th, 2024 06:43
rrodriguez said:
I enjoyed reading your poem and thought about the many times that I wanted to quit, but I kept on going and I\'m glad I did. Wonderful message, my friend.
September 5th, 2024 06:43
Life
Neville said:
that\'s life in a nutshell & so very well poemed .. Neville
August 19th, 2024 16:31
Neville said:
that\'s life in a nutshell & so very well poemed .. Neville
August 19th, 2024 16:31
Life
Dan Williams said:
A nicely detailed explanation of \"the price of life is death\". Bravo.
August 19th, 2024 00:34
Dan Williams said:
A nicely detailed explanation of \"the price of life is death\". Bravo.
August 19th, 2024 00:34
Life
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful poem of tenacity, each stanza life affirming, no matter what the odds. The last stanza is priceless. Can\'t help but love this and all it\'s positive vibes. Great write my friend!!
August 18th, 2024 14:58
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful poem of tenacity, each stanza life affirming, no matter what the odds. The last stanza is priceless. Can\'t help but love this and all it\'s positive vibes. Great write my friend!!
August 18th, 2024 14:58
Life
Teddy.15 said:
Such an incredibly wonderful message, and so true, sometimes we are the failure of our own lost dreams. 🌹
August 18th, 2024 08:10
Teddy.15 said:
Such an incredibly wonderful message, and so true, sometimes we are the failure of our own lost dreams. 🌹
August 18th, 2024 08:10
Life
sorenbarrett said:
A great message to this poem that carries through to the end. Nicely written.
August 18th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
A great message to this poem that carries through to the end. Nicely written.
August 18th, 2024 06:15
Among Poets
Eugene S. said:
Poetry, very bluntly, is the way that I have to get it out. To free the self from the weight of decades and decades on this planet. It may not mean much to others, they may not have context, but I do and sometimes they do too.
July 30th, 2024 04:35
Eugene S. said:
Poetry, very bluntly, is the way that I have to get it out. To free the self from the weight of decades and decades on this planet. It may not mean much to others, they may not have context, but I do and sometimes they do too.
July 30th, 2024 04:35
Among Poets
2781 said:
It can be used to condense thoughts, and can be a generous gift, or not!
June 2nd, 2024 00:05
2781 said:
It can be used to condense thoughts, and can be a generous gift, or not!
June 2nd, 2024 00:05
Among Poets
Alan R said:
I write to find the peace in collecting my thoughts, fixing them for the given time, as if a snapshot in time. And a higher joycomes along, when someone relates to it, as if another person had the same path unfolding in their mind...
May 2nd, 2024 13:35
Alan R said:
I write to find the peace in collecting my thoughts, fixing them for the given time, as if a snapshot in time. And a higher joycomes along, when someone relates to it, as if another person had the same path unfolding in their mind...
May 2nd, 2024 13:35
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Thomas W Case said:
Great work. I love this. A poet needs to create.
March 3rd, 2024 17:33
Thomas W Case said:
Great work. I love this. A poet needs to create.
March 3rd, 2024 17:33
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peto said:
I wouldn\'t claim to be a poet more of a Trier
However I\'ll try to answer
A pen paper and possibly a reader
You got everyone going with this write
Ta for sharing it
March 3rd, 2024 13:30
peto said:
I wouldn\'t claim to be a poet more of a Trier
However I\'ll try to answer
A pen paper and possibly a reader
You got everyone going with this write
Ta for sharing it
March 3rd, 2024 13:30
Among Poets
Accidental Poet said:
For me, writing poetry is not a competition with anyone, although on my main page here I say I am a slave to the poetic whims of my Muse. I write as anyone writes, to let out what will not stay hidden, what pesters my quill until it lands on the page and allows me to hit that submit button being satisfied with itself. We write not for the glory, but the expression of what\'s in our hearts. Deny what\'s in your heart and you shall suffer the consequences. Well penned/questioned rhmn_7 😊👍
March 3rd, 2024 11:14
Accidental Poet said:
For me, writing poetry is not a competition with anyone, although on my main page here I say I am a slave to the poetic whims of my Muse. I write as anyone writes, to let out what will not stay hidden, what pesters my quill until it lands on the page and allows me to hit that submit button being satisfied with itself. We write not for the glory, but the expression of what\'s in our hearts. Deny what\'s in your heart and you shall suffer the consequences. Well penned/questioned rhmn_7 😊👍
March 3rd, 2024 11:14
Among Poets
Neville said:
For as long as I can remember (almost) I have personally written in an attempt to capture moments, situations, circumstances and or events that either appeal and or otherwise catch my attention .. and in the hope that they will essentially serve to stimulate my own mental muscle when I am too old to wield my pen ..
More recently however, also to try and raise funds for a few charitable causes very dear to my heart ..
I very much enjoyed the reading of and participating in your poetic social experiment my friend ..
Neville
March 3rd, 2024 08:39
Neville said:
For as long as I can remember (almost) I have personally written in an attempt to capture moments, situations, circumstances and or events that either appeal and or otherwise catch my attention .. and in the hope that they will essentially serve to stimulate my own mental muscle when I am too old to wield my pen ..
More recently however, also to try and raise funds for a few charitable causes very dear to my heart ..
I very much enjoyed the reading of and participating in your poetic social experiment my friend ..
Neville
March 3rd, 2024 08:39
Among Poets
Doggerel Dave said:
Like the open ended nature of your piece on one level; I would think that the only answer you can obtain is from yourself. Many different motivations can be seen here. Some self talk may be helpful.
March 3rd, 2024 08:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Like the open ended nature of your piece on one level; I would think that the only answer you can obtain is from yourself. Many different motivations can be seen here. Some self talk may be helpful.
March 3rd, 2024 08:14
Among Poets
sorenbarrett said:
A great question put in verse. I can only speak for myself. I write for myself and realize that the words of others are what they wish to share with the world. Some like I are limited in this gift and I realize as I read the pomes out there that they do the best they can to express the human experience, not all are as gifted as the greats and some that are not so lucky to catch the world attention. For me poetry is therapy.
March 3rd, 2024 08:11
sorenbarrett said:
A great question put in verse. I can only speak for myself. I write for myself and realize that the words of others are what they wish to share with the world. Some like I are limited in this gift and I realize as I read the pomes out there that they do the best they can to express the human experience, not all are as gifted as the greats and some that are not so lucky to catch the world attention. For me poetry is therapy.
March 3rd, 2024 08:11
Among Poets
2781 said:
\"It is not good to eat much honey; so for men to search their own glory is not glory.\"
March 3rd, 2024 08:08
2781 said:
\"It is not good to eat much honey; so for men to search their own glory is not glory.\"
March 3rd, 2024 08:08
Don\'t forget
Doggerel Dave said:
No Sorry, I obviously didn\'t make myself clear (and, given the adulation above, I know I\'m going to appear a party pooper once more), I don\'t need to be advised by anyone. If, as is oftimes said, \'if I want your advice I\'ll ask for it.!\' that\'s where I\'m at.
To me it\'s condescending; to all those above it obviously isn\'t so you have no choice but to go with the strength, I suppose....
February 27th, 2024 04:25
Doggerel Dave said:
No Sorry, I obviously didn\'t make myself clear (and, given the adulation above, I know I\'m going to appear a party pooper once more), I don\'t need to be advised by anyone. If, as is oftimes said, \'if I want your advice I\'ll ask for it.!\' that\'s where I\'m at.
To me it\'s condescending; to all those above it obviously isn\'t so you have no choice but to go with the strength, I suppose....
February 27th, 2024 04:25
The boy, his dream and me
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely had a moment like that (way in the past)
I felt quite vividly, gained from forceful, well constructed poetry.
February 25th, 2024 18:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely had a moment like that (way in the past)
I felt quite vividly, gained from forceful, well constructed poetry.
February 25th, 2024 18:08
Paper Planes
Bella Shepard said:
I love the metaphor of paper planes, so fragile, as love itself can be, lost but never forgotten. Lovingly & Beautifully versed my friend!
February 25th, 2024 17:55
Bella Shepard said:
I love the metaphor of paper planes, so fragile, as love itself can be, lost but never forgotten. Lovingly & Beautifully versed my friend!
February 25th, 2024 17:55
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