Comments received on poems by cerry
NO CO-STAR...
sorenbarrett said:
A novel approach where all the world is a stage or at least that is what some old writer said. Well done
September 1st, 2025 13:18
sorenbarrett said:
A novel approach where all the world is a stage or at least that is what some old writer said. Well done
September 1st, 2025 13:18
THE CLOCK IS TICKING...
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes and seems to be accelerating its pace. The end nears and the joy of youth disappears. Very nicely written a fave
August 22nd, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes and seems to be accelerating its pace. The end nears and the joy of youth disappears. Very nicely written a fave
August 22nd, 2025 04:51
A CRY FOR HELP...
NinjaGirl said:
There\'s so much comfort in a world we make up. One where we can control things, what one said, what one did. It\'s difficult because these thoughts, our worlds, are often negative, but I find that\'s because I can control it. I only enjoy thinking of the negative because I can control it....all this to say I have the same problem. Keep praying, keep trusting, friend.
August 14th, 2025 20:06
NinjaGirl said:
There\'s so much comfort in a world we make up. One where we can control things, what one said, what one did. It\'s difficult because these thoughts, our worlds, are often negative, but I find that\'s because I can control it. I only enjoy thinking of the negative because I can control it....all this to say I have the same problem. Keep praying, keep trusting, friend.
August 14th, 2025 20:06
A CRY FOR HELP...
Poetic Licence said:
A very brave and honest write from someone crying out for help, I would say if you are of faith have a quick chat there for some advice and take it from there, there are many organisations out there that can help, wishing you all the best
August 14th, 2025 07:49
Poetic Licence said:
A very brave and honest write from someone crying out for help, I would say if you are of faith have a quick chat there for some advice and take it from there, there are many organisations out there that can help, wishing you all the best
August 14th, 2025 07:49
A CRY FOR HELP...
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a definite plea for help in this poem reaching out to a therapist or counselor, minister or priest may be a first step. Find one that you feel comfortable with. Very nicely written in clear and understandable form it makes its point. A courageous write.
August 14th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a definite plea for help in this poem reaching out to a therapist or counselor, minister or priest may be a first step. Find one that you feel comfortable with. Very nicely written in clear and understandable form it makes its point. A courageous write.
August 14th, 2025 05:45
AN UNINVITED GUEST...
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a clever write about controling those unwelcome thoughts, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 07:57
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a clever write about controling those unwelcome thoughts, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 07:57
AN UNINVITED GUEST...
sorenbarrett said:
Negativity often visits but is not welcome to stay. A fun approach to the issue and I have a restraining order against negative thoughts and my house is posted. A creative write
August 11th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Negativity often visits but is not welcome to stay. A fun approach to the issue and I have a restraining order against negative thoughts and my house is posted. A creative write
August 11th, 2025 04:02
DEAR DAD,
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt write relatable to many, finding it difficult to reconnect after a long absence, better to try than regret, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:12
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt write relatable to many, finding it difficult to reconnect after a long absence, better to try than regret, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:12
DEAR DAD,
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems not only from the poet but from many that do not reach out to fathers after being grown and on one\'s own. Nicely stated in verse
August 1st, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems not only from the poet but from many that do not reach out to fathers after being grown and on one\'s own. Nicely stated in verse
August 1st, 2025 05:09
DEAR DAD,
peto said:
Nobody\'s perfect eh
Perhaps as you are so creative you could write a letter, get all you wanted to say on it
Then burn it
Moving on is never easy but we usually find a way
Enjoyed reading
July 31st, 2025 22:39
peto said:
Nobody\'s perfect eh
Perhaps as you are so creative you could write a letter, get all you wanted to say on it
Then burn it
Moving on is never easy but we usually find a way
Enjoyed reading
July 31st, 2025 22:39
ME VS. ME
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and sad write reflection through their life and laying the blame all at their own door step. Building our self esteem is a long process when it is low, but we haft to value and appreciate ourselves before others can, wishing all the best and thank you for the Fav on wise man
June 17th, 2025 05:07
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and sad write reflection through their life and laying the blame all at their own door step. Building our self esteem is a long process when it is low, but we haft to value and appreciate ourselves before others can, wishing all the best and thank you for the Fav on wise man
June 17th, 2025 05:07
ME VS. ME
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of self deprecation. Building self esteem that does not become arrogance is a lifetime task of finding who one is and learning to love it. Nicely written
June 17th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of self deprecation. Building self esteem that does not become arrogance is a lifetime task of finding who one is and learning to love it. Nicely written
June 17th, 2025 04:00
THE UNSPOKEN WORDS OF A BROKEN PERSON, Pt 1
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of the mask we try to wear when inside we are falling apart and hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 00:24
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of the mask we try to wear when inside we are falling apart and hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 00:24
THE UNSPOKEN WORDS OF A BROKEN PERSON, Pt 1
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and most personal it rings with so many things that we all hide. A lovely write. Nicely done
June 13th, 2025 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and most personal it rings with so many things that we all hide. A lovely write. Nicely done
June 13th, 2025 14:21
THE UNSPOKEN WORDS OF A BROKEN PERSON, Pt 1
cerry said:
I also made this into a fusion, so if y’all would like to add something feel free to. I’d love to read your story
June 13th, 2025 13:29
cerry said:
I also made this into a fusion, so if y’all would like to add something feel free to. I’d love to read your story
June 13th, 2025 13:29
FLAWS FLAWS FLAWS
Poetic Licence said:
A touching of beating one self up over what they perceive as flaws and faults, as the author says we are not meant to be perfect, nicely expressed write
June 12th, 2025 04:30
Poetic Licence said:
A touching of beating one self up over what they perceive as flaws and faults, as the author says we are not meant to be perfect, nicely expressed write
June 12th, 2025 04:30
FLAWS FLAWS FLAWS
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about being harder on ourselves than others and the need to be forgiving of self flaws. A most interesting poem
June 12th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about being harder on ourselves than others and the need to be forgiving of self flaws. A most interesting poem
June 12th, 2025 03:43
JUDGEMENT
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in soliloquy form that speaks to the reader to exercise compassion and reason in judging others. It is powerful in its reason and shows emotion in its words. Nicely composed
March 21st, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in soliloquy form that speaks to the reader to exercise compassion and reason in judging others. It is powerful in its reason and shows emotion in its words. Nicely composed
March 21st, 2025 03:43
WOE IS ME
Poetic Licence said:
It is only us who have the key to get us out the prison we put ourselves in, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
It is only us who have the key to get us out the prison we put ourselves in, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:13
THE JOURNEY OF A THOUSAND MILES
sorenbarrett said:
So true you only know if you try. A wonderful encouraging poem.
January 23rd, 2025 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
So true you only know if you try. A wonderful encouraging poem.
January 23rd, 2025 11:34
THE JOURNEY OF A THOUSAND MILES
Poetic Licence said:
A really enjoyable read, just be yourself and go at your own pace, as and when you choose, great write
January 23rd, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
A really enjoyable read, just be yourself and go at your own pace, as and when you choose, great write
January 23rd, 2025 05:44
THE JOURNEY OF A THOUSAND MILES
orchidee said:
Why yes, a journey of 1,000 miles -or whatever distance - begins with the first step (as a Chinese preverb says). We won\'t get anywhere unless we put one foot in front of the other! lol.
January 23rd, 2025 03:47
orchidee said:
Why yes, a journey of 1,000 miles -or whatever distance - begins with the first step (as a Chinese preverb says). We won\'t get anywhere unless we put one foot in front of the other! lol.
January 23rd, 2025 03:47
IS THIS THE NARROW GATE?
sorenbarrett said:
Jubilant writing, although some confusion as to how one thinks or feels this poem, expresses a sense of joy and looking forward to the future lovely
September 4th, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Jubilant writing, although some confusion as to how one thinks or feels this poem, expresses a sense of joy and looking forward to the future lovely
September 4th, 2024 05:48
WE ARE NOT MEANT TO BE.
Qurrathul Ain said:
It happens the other way too. When all the pieces fit perfectly and clearly says that we are meant to be, but it still does not happen.
July 2nd, 2024 02:33
Qurrathul Ain said:
It happens the other way too. When all the pieces fit perfectly and clearly says that we are meant to be, but it still does not happen.
July 2nd, 2024 02:33
THE CHAINS OF HATRED
Lorenz said:
How many crimes committed in the name of love !
June 3rd, 2024 09:00
Lorenz said:
How many crimes committed in the name of love !
June 3rd, 2024 09:00
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