Comments received on poems by cerry
ME VS. ME
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and sad write reflection through their life and laying the blame all at their own door step. Building our self esteem is a long process when it is low, but we haft to value and appreciate ourselves before others can, wishing all the best and thank you for the Fav on wise man
June 17th, 2025 05:07
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and sad write reflection through their life and laying the blame all at their own door step. Building our self esteem is a long process when it is low, but we haft to value and appreciate ourselves before others can, wishing all the best and thank you for the Fav on wise man
June 17th, 2025 05:07
ME VS. ME
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of self deprecation. Building self esteem that does not become arrogance is a lifetime task of finding who one is and learning to love it. Nicely written
June 17th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of self deprecation. Building self esteem that does not become arrogance is a lifetime task of finding who one is and learning to love it. Nicely written
June 17th, 2025 04:00
THE UNSPOKEN WORDS OF A BROKEN PERSON, Pt 1
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of the mask we try to wear when inside we are falling apart and hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 00:24
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of the mask we try to wear when inside we are falling apart and hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 00:24
THE UNSPOKEN WORDS OF A BROKEN PERSON, Pt 1
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and most personal it rings with so many things that we all hide. A lovely write. Nicely done
June 13th, 2025 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and most personal it rings with so many things that we all hide. A lovely write. Nicely done
June 13th, 2025 14:21
THE UNSPOKEN WORDS OF A BROKEN PERSON, Pt 1
cerry said:
I also made this into a fusion, so if y’all would like to add something feel free to. I’d love to read your story
June 13th, 2025 13:29
cerry said:
I also made this into a fusion, so if y’all would like to add something feel free to. I’d love to read your story
June 13th, 2025 13:29
FLAWS FLAWS FLAWS
Poetic Licence said:
A touching of beating one self up over what they perceive as flaws and faults, as the author says we are not meant to be perfect, nicely expressed write
June 12th, 2025 04:30
Poetic Licence said:
A touching of beating one self up over what they perceive as flaws and faults, as the author says we are not meant to be perfect, nicely expressed write
June 12th, 2025 04:30
FLAWS FLAWS FLAWS
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about being harder on ourselves than others and the need to be forgiving of self flaws. A most interesting poem
June 12th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about being harder on ourselves than others and the need to be forgiving of self flaws. A most interesting poem
June 12th, 2025 03:43
JUDGEMENT
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in soliloquy form that speaks to the reader to exercise compassion and reason in judging others. It is powerful in its reason and shows emotion in its words. Nicely composed
March 21st, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in soliloquy form that speaks to the reader to exercise compassion and reason in judging others. It is powerful in its reason and shows emotion in its words. Nicely composed
March 21st, 2025 03:43
WOE IS ME
Poetic Licence said:
It is only us who have the key to get us out the prison we put ourselves in, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
It is only us who have the key to get us out the prison we put ourselves in, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:13
THE JOURNEY OF A THOUSAND MILES
sorenbarrett said:
So true you only know if you try. A wonderful encouraging poem.
January 23rd, 2025 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
So true you only know if you try. A wonderful encouraging poem.
January 23rd, 2025 11:34
THE JOURNEY OF A THOUSAND MILES
Poetic Licence said:
A really enjoyable read, just be yourself and go at your own pace, as and when you choose, great write
January 23rd, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
A really enjoyable read, just be yourself and go at your own pace, as and when you choose, great write
January 23rd, 2025 05:44
THE JOURNEY OF A THOUSAND MILES
orchidee said:
Why yes, a journey of 1,000 miles -or whatever distance - begins with the first step (as a Chinese preverb says). We won\'t get anywhere unless we put one foot in front of the other! lol.
January 23rd, 2025 03:47
orchidee said:
Why yes, a journey of 1,000 miles -or whatever distance - begins with the first step (as a Chinese preverb says). We won\'t get anywhere unless we put one foot in front of the other! lol.
January 23rd, 2025 03:47
IS THIS THE NARROW GATE?
sorenbarrett said:
Jubilant writing, although some confusion as to how one thinks or feels this poem, expresses a sense of joy and looking forward to the future lovely
September 4th, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Jubilant writing, although some confusion as to how one thinks or feels this poem, expresses a sense of joy and looking forward to the future lovely
September 4th, 2024 05:48
WE ARE NOT MEANT TO BE.
Qurrathul Ain said:
It happens the other way too. When all the pieces fit perfectly and clearly says that we are meant to be, but it still does not happen.
July 2nd, 2024 02:33
Qurrathul Ain said:
It happens the other way too. When all the pieces fit perfectly and clearly says that we are meant to be, but it still does not happen.
July 2nd, 2024 02:33
THE CHAINS OF HATRED
Lorenz said:
How many crimes committed in the name of love !
June 3rd, 2024 09:00
Lorenz said:
How many crimes committed in the name of love !
June 3rd, 2024 09:00
THE CHAINS OF HATRED
2781 said:
Hate the evil, and love the good, and established judgement in the gate:
June 3rd, 2024 06:01
2781 said:
Hate the evil, and love the good, and established judgement in the gate:
June 3rd, 2024 06:01
THE POWER OF WORDS
2781 said:
Death and life are in the power of the tongue: and they that love it shall eat the fruit thereof.
June 2nd, 2024 08:59
2781 said:
Death and life are in the power of the tongue: and they that love it shall eat the fruit thereof.
June 2nd, 2024 08:59
THE POWER OF WORDS
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s simple but true and said so well! Why we get lost in others and our own spell, watch our words then we can see... what\'s real or just a belief
Thanks for sharing
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
June 1st, 2024 09:52
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s simple but true and said so well! Why we get lost in others and our own spell, watch our words then we can see... what\'s real or just a belief
Thanks for sharing
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
June 1st, 2024 09:52
THE POWER OF WORDS
Neilton said:
You conveyed your message perfectly.Words are truly very powerful!
June 1st, 2024 04:47
Neilton said:
You conveyed your message perfectly.Words are truly very powerful!
June 1st, 2024 04:47
OH, HOW THE TIMES HAVE PASSED!
2781 said:
I think it\'s the percentages.
Your only young.
May 15th, 2024 04:12
2781 said:
I think it\'s the percentages.
Your only young.
May 15th, 2024 04:12
WHEN DID THE PREY BECOME THE ONE TO BLAME?
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “When did the prey become the one to blame ?” by Cerry.
This reminds us of one of the fables from the French writer La Fontaine (1621-1695), about the wolf who attacked a lamb who was drinking downstream, accusing it of muddying the water. The wolf itself was drinking UPSTREAM. The prey became the one to blame…
https://www.literature.com/book/the_wolf_and_the_lamb_2474
Soman Ragavan. 27 April 2024.
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April 27th, 2024 06:06
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “When did the prey become the one to blame ?” by Cerry.
This reminds us of one of the fables from the French writer La Fontaine (1621-1695), about the wolf who attacked a lamb who was drinking downstream, accusing it of muddying the water. The wolf itself was drinking UPSTREAM. The prey became the one to blame…
https://www.literature.com/book/the_wolf_and_the_lamb_2474
Soman Ragavan. 27 April 2024.
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April 27th, 2024 06:06
THE BOOK OF REVELATION
Parisab said:
Very good observation from the lens of “the book of revelation” I still have hope for the youth…
October 18th, 2023 02:21
Parisab said:
Very good observation from the lens of “the book of revelation” I still have hope for the youth…
October 18th, 2023 02:21
EVERYTHING IS MEANINGLESS
peto said:
Perhaps we could use the time we have to try to help others in their journey
It\'s in giving we receive most
Thoroughly enjoyed
See you at the end
October 15th, 2023 13:04
peto said:
Perhaps we could use the time we have to try to help others in their journey
It\'s in giving we receive most
Thoroughly enjoyed
See you at the end
October 15th, 2023 13:04
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