Comments received on poems by cerry
THE LURCHLESS MOON
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a surreal and dream like quality that one is in a daze. Nicely done
February 3rd, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a surreal and dream like quality that one is in a daze. Nicely done
February 3rd, 2026 04:02
THE LIES OF COMFORT
Paul Bell said:
I always think if you\'re content, you\'re probably near death.
Probably why I keep moving.
January 28th, 2026 16:06
Paul Bell said:
I always think if you\'re content, you\'re probably near death.
Probably why I keep moving.
January 28th, 2026 16:06
THE MASK OF FAILURE
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of how knowing both sides makes one not only more knowledgeable but more complete. One never knows the value of life until one almost looses it.
January 26th, 2026 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of how knowing both sides makes one not only more knowledgeable but more complete. One never knows the value of life until one almost looses it.
January 26th, 2026 08:20
THE POTTER
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of deceit and craftiness that ends in sadness. Nicely written
January 25th, 2026 20:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of deceit and craftiness that ends in sadness. Nicely written
January 25th, 2026 20:50
THE FRAGRANCE OF YOUTH...
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that speaks to all that have left that age. Well done
December 27th, 2025 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that speaks to all that have left that age. Well done
December 27th, 2025 16:46
THE CRACK IN YOUR DOOR...
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unrequited love and the frustration and anger that accompanies it. There is a questioning of self both as to value and choices. Nicely written
September 24th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unrequited love and the frustration and anger that accompanies it. There is a questioning of self both as to value and choices. Nicely written
September 24th, 2025 04:23
THE CRACK IN YOUR DOOR...
Paul Bell said:
When you let them in, It\'s hard to get them out.
Now the power has shifted and the confusion embedded.
Time for a rethink.
September 24th, 2025 04:23
Paul Bell said:
When you let them in, It\'s hard to get them out.
Now the power has shifted and the confusion embedded.
Time for a rethink.
September 24th, 2025 04:23
NO CO-STAR...
sorenbarrett said:
A novel approach where all the world is a stage or at least that is what some old writer said. Well done
September 1st, 2025 13:18
sorenbarrett said:
A novel approach where all the world is a stage or at least that is what some old writer said. Well done
September 1st, 2025 13:18
THE CLOCK IS TICKING...
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes and seems to be accelerating its pace. The end nears and the joy of youth disappears. Very nicely written a fave
August 22nd, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes and seems to be accelerating its pace. The end nears and the joy of youth disappears. Very nicely written a fave
August 22nd, 2025 04:51
A CRY FOR HELP...
NinjaGirl said:
There\'s so much comfort in a world we make up. One where we can control things, what one said, what one did. It\'s difficult because these thoughts, our worlds, are often negative, but I find that\'s because I can control it. I only enjoy thinking of the negative because I can control it....all this to say I have the same problem. Keep praying, keep trusting, friend.
August 14th, 2025 20:06
NinjaGirl said:
There\'s so much comfort in a world we make up. One where we can control things, what one said, what one did. It\'s difficult because these thoughts, our worlds, are often negative, but I find that\'s because I can control it. I only enjoy thinking of the negative because I can control it....all this to say I have the same problem. Keep praying, keep trusting, friend.
August 14th, 2025 20:06
A CRY FOR HELP...
Poetic Licence said:
A very brave and honest write from someone crying out for help, I would say if you are of faith have a quick chat there for some advice and take it from there, there are many organisations out there that can help, wishing you all the best
August 14th, 2025 07:49
Poetic Licence said:
A very brave and honest write from someone crying out for help, I would say if you are of faith have a quick chat there for some advice and take it from there, there are many organisations out there that can help, wishing you all the best
August 14th, 2025 07:49
A CRY FOR HELP...
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a definite plea for help in this poem reaching out to a therapist or counselor, minister or priest may be a first step. Find one that you feel comfortable with. Very nicely written in clear and understandable form it makes its point. A courageous write.
August 14th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a definite plea for help in this poem reaching out to a therapist or counselor, minister or priest may be a first step. Find one that you feel comfortable with. Very nicely written in clear and understandable form it makes its point. A courageous write.
August 14th, 2025 05:45
AN UNINVITED GUEST...
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a clever write about controling those unwelcome thoughts, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 07:57
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a clever write about controling those unwelcome thoughts, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 07:57
AN UNINVITED GUEST...
sorenbarrett said:
Negativity often visits but is not welcome to stay. A fun approach to the issue and I have a restraining order against negative thoughts and my house is posted. A creative write
August 11th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Negativity often visits but is not welcome to stay. A fun approach to the issue and I have a restraining order against negative thoughts and my house is posted. A creative write
August 11th, 2025 04:02
DEAR DAD,
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt write relatable to many, finding it difficult to reconnect after a long absence, better to try than regret, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:12
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt write relatable to many, finding it difficult to reconnect after a long absence, better to try than regret, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:12
DEAR DAD,
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems not only from the poet but from many that do not reach out to fathers after being grown and on one\'s own. Nicely stated in verse
August 1st, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems not only from the poet but from many that do not reach out to fathers after being grown and on one\'s own. Nicely stated in verse
August 1st, 2025 05:09
DEAR DAD,
peto said:
Nobody\'s perfect eh
Perhaps as you are so creative you could write a letter, get all you wanted to say on it
Then burn it
Moving on is never easy but we usually find a way
Enjoyed reading
July 31st, 2025 22:39
peto said:
Nobody\'s perfect eh
Perhaps as you are so creative you could write a letter, get all you wanted to say on it
Then burn it
Moving on is never easy but we usually find a way
Enjoyed reading
July 31st, 2025 22:39
ME VS. ME
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and sad write reflection through their life and laying the blame all at their own door step. Building our self esteem is a long process when it is low, but we haft to value and appreciate ourselves before others can, wishing all the best and thank you for the Fav on wise man
June 17th, 2025 05:07
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and sad write reflection through their life and laying the blame all at their own door step. Building our self esteem is a long process when it is low, but we haft to value and appreciate ourselves before others can, wishing all the best and thank you for the Fav on wise man
June 17th, 2025 05:07
ME VS. ME
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of self deprecation. Building self esteem that does not become arrogance is a lifetime task of finding who one is and learning to love it. Nicely written
June 17th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of self deprecation. Building self esteem that does not become arrogance is a lifetime task of finding who one is and learning to love it. Nicely written
June 17th, 2025 04:00
THE UNSPOKEN WORDS OF A BROKEN PERSON, Pt 1
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of the mask we try to wear when inside we are falling apart and hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 00:24
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of the mask we try to wear when inside we are falling apart and hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 00:24
THE UNSPOKEN WORDS OF A BROKEN PERSON, Pt 1
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and most personal it rings with so many things that we all hide. A lovely write. Nicely done
June 13th, 2025 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and most personal it rings with so many things that we all hide. A lovely write. Nicely done
June 13th, 2025 14:21
FLAWS FLAWS FLAWS
Poetic Licence said:
A touching of beating one self up over what they perceive as flaws and faults, as the author says we are not meant to be perfect, nicely expressed write
June 12th, 2025 04:30
Poetic Licence said:
A touching of beating one self up over what they perceive as flaws and faults, as the author says we are not meant to be perfect, nicely expressed write
June 12th, 2025 04:30
FLAWS FLAWS FLAWS
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about being harder on ourselves than others and the need to be forgiving of self flaws. A most interesting poem
June 12th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about being harder on ourselves than others and the need to be forgiving of self flaws. A most interesting poem
June 12th, 2025 03:43
JUDGEMENT
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in soliloquy form that speaks to the reader to exercise compassion and reason in judging others. It is powerful in its reason and shows emotion in its words. Nicely composed
March 21st, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in soliloquy form that speaks to the reader to exercise compassion and reason in judging others. It is powerful in its reason and shows emotion in its words. Nicely composed
March 21st, 2025 03:43
WOE IS ME
Poetic Licence said:
It is only us who have the key to get us out the prison we put ourselves in, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
It is only us who have the key to get us out the prison we put ourselves in, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:13
THE JOURNEY OF A THOUSAND MILES
sorenbarrett said:
So true you only know if you try. A wonderful encouraging poem.
January 23rd, 2025 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
So true you only know if you try. A wonderful encouraging poem.
January 23rd, 2025 11:34
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