Comments received on poems by cerry
IS THIS THE NARROW GATE?
sorenbarrett said:
Jubilant writing, although some confusion as to how one thinks or feels this poem, expresses a sense of joy and looking forward to the future lovely
September 4th, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Jubilant writing, although some confusion as to how one thinks or feels this poem, expresses a sense of joy and looking forward to the future lovely
September 4th, 2024 05:48
WE ARE NOT MEANT TO BE.
Qurrathul Ain said:
It happens the other way too. When all the pieces fit perfectly and clearly says that we are meant to be, but it still does not happen.
July 2nd, 2024 02:33
Qurrathul Ain said:
It happens the other way too. When all the pieces fit perfectly and clearly says that we are meant to be, but it still does not happen.
July 2nd, 2024 02:33
THE CHAINS OF HATRED
Lorenz said:
How many crimes committed in the name of love !
June 3rd, 2024 09:00
Lorenz said:
How many crimes committed in the name of love !
June 3rd, 2024 09:00
THE CHAINS OF HATRED
2781 said:
Hate the evil, and love the good, and established judgement in the gate:
June 3rd, 2024 06:01
2781 said:
Hate the evil, and love the good, and established judgement in the gate:
June 3rd, 2024 06:01
THE POWER OF WORDS
2781 said:
Death and life are in the power of the tongue: and they that love it shall eat the fruit thereof.
June 2nd, 2024 08:59
2781 said:
Death and life are in the power of the tongue: and they that love it shall eat the fruit thereof.
June 2nd, 2024 08:59
THE POWER OF WORDS
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s simple but true and said so well! Why we get lost in others and our own spell, watch our words then we can see... what\'s real or just a belief
Thanks for sharing
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
June 1st, 2024 09:52
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s simple but true and said so well! Why we get lost in others and our own spell, watch our words then we can see... what\'s real or just a belief
Thanks for sharing
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
June 1st, 2024 09:52
THE POWER OF WORDS
Neilton said:
You conveyed your message perfectly.Words are truly very powerful!
June 1st, 2024 04:47
Neilton said:
You conveyed your message perfectly.Words are truly very powerful!
June 1st, 2024 04:47
OH, HOW THE TIMES HAVE PASSED!
2781 said:
I think it\'s the percentages.
Your only young.
May 15th, 2024 04:12
2781 said:
I think it\'s the percentages.
Your only young.
May 15th, 2024 04:12
WHEN DID THE PREY BECOME THE ONE TO BLAME?
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “When did the prey become the one to blame ?” by Cerry.
This reminds us of one of the fables from the French writer La Fontaine (1621-1695), about the wolf who attacked a lamb who was drinking downstream, accusing it of muddying the water. The wolf itself was drinking UPSTREAM. The prey became the one to blame…
https://www.literature.com/book/the_wolf_and_the_lamb_2474
Soman Ragavan. 27 April 2024.
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April 27th, 2024 06:06
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “When did the prey become the one to blame ?” by Cerry.
This reminds us of one of the fables from the French writer La Fontaine (1621-1695), about the wolf who attacked a lamb who was drinking downstream, accusing it of muddying the water. The wolf itself was drinking UPSTREAM. The prey became the one to blame…
https://www.literature.com/book/the_wolf_and_the_lamb_2474
Soman Ragavan. 27 April 2024.
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April 27th, 2024 06:06
THE BOOK OF REVELATION
Parisab said:
Very good observation from the lens of “the book of revelation” I still have hope for the youth…
October 18th, 2023 02:21
Parisab said:
Very good observation from the lens of “the book of revelation” I still have hope for the youth…
October 18th, 2023 02:21
EVERYTHING IS MEANINGLESS
peto said:
Perhaps we could use the time we have to try to help others in their journey
It\'s in giving we receive most
Thoroughly enjoyed
See you at the end
October 15th, 2023 13:04
peto said:
Perhaps we could use the time we have to try to help others in their journey
It\'s in giving we receive most
Thoroughly enjoyed
See you at the end
October 15th, 2023 13:04
PLEASE DON\'T LET GO OF MY HAND
orchidee said:
Good write C.
Did I stay with you too?! heehee.
I wish I would shut up sometimes. lol.
August 27th, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
Good write C.
Did I stay with you too?! heehee.
I wish I would shut up sometimes. lol.
August 27th, 2023 01:47
WHEN YOU GET \"OLDER\"
2781 said:
As we age we have the wisdom of hindsight. It can\'t be taught, it can\'t be sold, it is the gift of getting old.
We all were young and felt the strain, and wish we had our time again!
June 1st, 2023 06:21
2781 said:
As we age we have the wisdom of hindsight. It can\'t be taught, it can\'t be sold, it is the gift of getting old.
We all were young and felt the strain, and wish we had our time again!
June 1st, 2023 06:21
WHEN YOU GET \"OLDER\"
somethingdeep said:
I agree with your thought on this. Even if someone younger has problems that are\'t the end of the world as an adult it is still not right to dismiss them. It just shows a lack of understaning. Which doesn\'t really scream maturity
June 1st, 2023 04:30
somethingdeep said:
I agree with your thought on this. Even if someone younger has problems that are\'t the end of the world as an adult it is still not right to dismiss them. It just shows a lack of understaning. Which doesn\'t really scream maturity
June 1st, 2023 04:30
IF YOU COULD MEET YOUR YOUNG SELF WHAT WOULD YOU SAY?
Accidental Poet said:
Something here I think everyone must sooner or later think about. Personally, I think I would tell my younger self to listen to my dad more than I do, as I found him to know what I needed for the long haul. Excellent write.
April 26th, 2023 01:03
Accidental Poet said:
Something here I think everyone must sooner or later think about. Personally, I think I would tell my younger self to listen to my dad more than I do, as I found him to know what I needed for the long haul. Excellent write.
April 26th, 2023 01:03
IF YOU COULD MEET YOUR YOUNG SELF WHAT WOULD YOU SAY?
L. B. Mek said:
a very relatable theme
written really well, thank you
(personally I think, I would say
something encouraging, but
as like then, even now
I wouldn\'t know how to word it
for it to stand out
above, everything else I heard
back then
and foolishly, chose to ignore...)
April 24th, 2023 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
a very relatable theme
written really well, thank you
(personally I think, I would say
something encouraging, but
as like then, even now
I wouldn\'t know how to word it
for it to stand out
above, everything else I heard
back then
and foolishly, chose to ignore...)
April 24th, 2023 06:57
IF YOU COULD MEET YOUR YOUNG SELF WHAT WOULD YOU SAY?
Audrey A. said:
I\'m sorry I ever put you away.
April 24th, 2023 05:53
Audrey A. said:
I\'m sorry I ever put you away.
April 24th, 2023 05:53
THE CORNER OF COMFORT....
Bobby O said:
I think it’s understandable to seek or revisit that place and while I detect a touch of resignation , I propose instead, it may be just a regrouping to gather the strength to bounce back w vigor ? Nice piece. Nice read
April 23rd, 2023 04:46
Bobby O said:
I think it’s understandable to seek or revisit that place and while I detect a touch of resignation , I propose instead, it may be just a regrouping to gather the strength to bounce back w vigor ? Nice piece. Nice read
April 23rd, 2023 04:46
I GAVE YOU MY EVERYTHING
Doggerel Dave said:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
March 22nd, 2023 07:16
Doggerel Dave said:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
March 22nd, 2023 07:16
PLEASE DON\'T LEAVE ME...
Abby1234 said:
This poem is so true. I understand it.
March 3rd, 2023 15:05
Abby1234 said:
This poem is so true. I understand it.
March 3rd, 2023 15:05
PLEASE DON\'T LEAVE ME...
L. B. Mek said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lA6fOVIu3SA
March 3rd, 2023 07:08
L. B. Mek said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lA6fOVIu3SA
March 3rd, 2023 07:08
UNTITLED...
mvvenkataraman said:
Out of 800 Billion people in the world,
You are standing as the only one,
We must love ourselves deeply,
Others will love us for money
Or our body for sheer lust,
Love yourself deeply please,
Take care of your health wisely,
Dress neatly and appealingly,
You will have many well-wishers
And think of them and feel happy,
Your mom and dad and friends
Are always there to love you,
When I was in my tenth standard,
Two elderly boy commented adversely
About my cheeks as hollow,
I became a psychological wreck,
I artificially tried to cover it,
Later I came to know clearly
That Westerners had such a cheek
And call it stylishly as angular cheeks,
After that I never bothered about my cheeks,
Till today, my cheeks aren\'t chubby,
As this is a decent site
I didn\'t mention certain things,
Those two elderly boys observed
Which made me fear a lot,
What they said is suppressed by me,
As I must respect the site always,
Be cheerful dear friend, be happy!
March 2nd, 2023 05:37
mvvenkataraman said:
Out of 800 Billion people in the world,
You are standing as the only one,
We must love ourselves deeply,
Others will love us for money
Or our body for sheer lust,
Love yourself deeply please,
Take care of your health wisely,
Dress neatly and appealingly,
You will have many well-wishers
And think of them and feel happy,
Your mom and dad and friends
Are always there to love you,
When I was in my tenth standard,
Two elderly boy commented adversely
About my cheeks as hollow,
I became a psychological wreck,
I artificially tried to cover it,
Later I came to know clearly
That Westerners had such a cheek
And call it stylishly as angular cheeks,
After that I never bothered about my cheeks,
Till today, my cheeks aren\'t chubby,
As this is a decent site
I didn\'t mention certain things,
Those two elderly boys observed
Which made me fear a lot,
What they said is suppressed by me,
As I must respect the site always,
Be cheerful dear friend, be happy!
March 2nd, 2023 05:37
I WAS THIRTEEN...
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. I think it\'s wonderful to be a proud black accomplished woman! Good for you for overcoming all obstacles.....Christina
February 8th, 2023 07:06
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. I think it\'s wonderful to be a proud black accomplished woman! Good for you for overcoming all obstacles.....Christina
February 8th, 2023 07:06
I WAS THIRTEEN...
2781 said:
Hint: God and pride don\'t go well together, humility is our endeavour.
February 8th, 2023 05:46
2781 said:
Hint: God and pride don\'t go well together, humility is our endeavour.
February 8th, 2023 05:46
I\'M BLACK...IS THAT SO WRONG?
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow I was looking for this dear brother from another mother somewhere in Africa 😂😂
\"I am black\"
Proud to be a black man
Good work brother
February 7th, 2023 07:27
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow I was looking for this dear brother from another mother somewhere in Africa 😂😂
\"I am black\"
Proud to be a black man
Good work brother
February 7th, 2023 07:27
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