Comments received on poems by cerry



PLEASE DON\'T LEAVE ME...
L. B. Mek said:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lA6fOVIu3SA

March 3rd, 2023 07:08

UNTITLED...
mvvenkataraman said:

Out of 800 Billion people in the world,
You are standing as the only one,
We must love ourselves deeply,
Others will love us for money
Or our body for sheer lust,
Love yourself deeply please,
Take care of your health wisely,
Dress neatly and appealingly,
You will have many well-wishers
And think of them and feel happy,
Your mom and dad and friends
Are always there to love you,
When I was in my tenth standard,
Two elderly boy commented adversely
About my cheeks as hollow,
I became a psychological wreck,
I artificially tried to cover it,
Later I came to know clearly
That Westerners had such a cheek
And call it stylishly as angular cheeks,
After that I never bothered about my cheeks,
Till today, my cheeks aren\'t chubby,
As this is a decent site
I didn\'t mention certain things,
Those two elderly boys observed
Which made me fear a lot,
What they said is suppressed by me,
As I must respect the site always,
Be cheerful dear friend, be happy!


March 2nd, 2023 05:37

I WAS THIRTEEN...
Christina8 said:

Very nice poem. I think it\'s wonderful to be a proud black accomplished woman! Good for you for overcoming all obstacles.....Christina

February 8th, 2023 07:06

I WAS THIRTEEN...
2781 said:

Hint: God and pride don\'t go well together, humility is our endeavour.

February 8th, 2023 05:46

I\'M BLACK...IS THAT SO WRONG?
Sakwa Franc said:

Wow I was looking for this dear brother from another mother somewhere in Africa 😂😂

\"I am black\"
Proud to be a black man
Good work brother

February 7th, 2023 07:27

I\'M BLACK...IS THAT SO WRONG?
Rocky Lagou said:

Omg this is fu$%ing LEGENDARY!!!
Thank you for this poem and declaration and grievance and prayer!
Human rights is pivotal for me, that\'s why most of my poems center on it, and this poem is so forthright and interrogative.
Just know that your are loved, regardless of the color of your skin.
Black people are some of the realest and kindest people I have ever met!
Amen and hallelujah to this message for equality!


January 9th, 2023 14:33

I\'M BLACK...IS THAT SO WRONG?
L. B. Mek said:

(in the words of that wise sister, India Arie:
\'Hey (hey)
I am not my hair
I am not this skin
I am not your expectations, no (hey)
I am not my hair
I am not this skin
I am the soul that lives within\'
from the song \'I\'m not my hair\')
thanks for sharing
Happy New Year

January 9th, 2023 06:25

I\'M BLACK...IS THAT SO WRONG?
Goldfinch60 said:

In my many years of life I have treated all with respect no matter what colour, creed or sexuality. What matters is what is inside each person that comes out for others to see.
I do hope all will be good for you in your life.

Andy

January 9th, 2023 02:40

TOMORROW
Eugene S. said:

Wow! How thought provoking! I tend to dwell in the past when writing. My few forays into the future are usually of dread. I have to say this poem slapped me awake. I\'ll have to think more about this. Great poem!

December 20th, 2022 00:46

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