Comments received on poems by a drop of mind



The ravines
a drop of mind said:

thanx a lot for your encouraging words.

February 4th, 2023 00:06

The ravines
L. B. Mek said:

\'and the frame just hanged
like a cobweb in my brain.\'
Brilliant!
what a talent, thank you
for choosing to share, dear Poet

February 3rd, 2023 05:57

Do I really deserve this garden
Caring dove said:

Interesting and nicely expressed writing )

January 18th, 2023 12:42

Do I really deserve this garden
Rocky Lagou said:

Omg. This reminds me of the Garden of Eden. Especially with the undertones of pride and arrogance; reminiscent of those that led Eve to bite the forbidden fruit. This is splendid.

January 18th, 2023 09:05

untitled
L. B. Mek said:

thanks for sharing, dear poet
a thought provoking read
(\'takes away the clarity you carry.
All the directions you weaved in patience\'
there be a reason why in antiquity
they first curated a deity
out of chaos,
that callous presence in all existence..
some call it change, some fate
nameless or branded, we all know it
in far more detail, than we ever wanted)

January 16th, 2023 02:30

the other me
jarcher54 said:

Very intriguing play of words and thought... good work... by both of you!

January 13th, 2023 22:03