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The Souls of White Folks
Ok Waleed said:

Depends how white we talking

February 20th, 2023 01:55

Roadwork
Eileen Clark said:

Hello, this is fun to read, it kept me reading right to the end because as I was reading I was second guessing how it would end.

February 15th, 2023 14:09

More
L. B. Mek said:

a cat that comes to greet at the door
didn\'t know they existed, lol
a lovely read, thanks for sharing

February 13th, 2023 06:04

At Last
[email protected] said:

Noir erotica......interesting term

February 12th, 2023 13:23

Live on the Line
[email protected] said:

Thanks again 🙂

February 12th, 2023 13:21

At Last
Neville said:



this is actually a little bit special .. kind of noir erotica if there is such a thing .... it sure sucked me in regardless ........ Neville


February 12th, 2023 12:21

Live on the Line
Neville said:



an intriguing post & a fine introduction to your ink ma\'am ...

February 12th, 2023 12:17

Live on the Line
[email protected] said:

Right

February 12th, 2023 06:21

Live on the Line
2781 said:

For the good that I would I do not: but the evil that which I would not, that I do. Now if I do what I would not, it is no more I that do it, but sin that dwelleth in me.

February 12th, 2023 01:43

Jazzing Me
Addy said:

Its nice! I like your style of writing

February 10th, 2023 02:30

It Is What It Is And It Ain\'t What It Ain\'t
Parisab said:

Courage’s tone! Sending love and respect-

February 9th, 2023 21:22

It Is What It Is And It Ain\'t What It Ain\'t
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

So True, Thank You Kespat. :)

February 9th, 2023 21:11

Gotta Love the Interweb
[email protected] said:

To paraphrase: be careful of looking into the abyss because the abyss is looking into you.........

February 5th, 2023 13:57

Gotta Love the Interweb
Ok Waleed said:

I like this, sadly we must learn from evil in order to not become evil

February 5th, 2023 10:26

Deserted
L. B. Mek said:

great imagery, really well executed
\'barren desert of an abandoned heart\'
thanks for sharing, stay strong!

February 3rd, 2023 04:24

At Last
jarcher54 said:

Thank goodness for the adult warning!

January 28th, 2023 02:20

Aight
jarcher54 said:

I like it more every time I read it.

January 28th, 2023 02:18

Does God Have Nipples
jarcher54 said:

If we were made in God\'s image, he needs all the prayers we can muster.

January 28th, 2023 02:16

At Last
jarcher54 said:

Your final couplet is brilliant.

January 28th, 2023 02:13

Aight
jarcher54 said:

Beautiful depiction of humanity. I am thankful I stumbled on this piece. You are a keen observer; you created a whole world and brought her to life in a few lines. Thank you.

January 28th, 2023 02:12

3 Miles to Nowhere
Neville said:


What an intriguing and once started, otherwise compelling read you have posted here for those of us that visit to enjoy .. I sincerely hope that others now will feel able to follow in the wake I have thus created ..

All Good Things,

Neville

January 26th, 2023 03:48

Does God Have Nipples
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ve writ this before (I\'m a boring old bugger):
Man made God it his own image, then reversed it. And the rest is history.

January 24th, 2023 19:54

Does God Have Nipples
Ok Waleed said:

I actually really love the title and I love the poem. You remind me of me

January 24th, 2023 19:44

Does God Have Nipples
charles69 said:

there is a lot of truth in your poem, and it is well expressed
do you believe in an after life ?
I am 77, in a nursing home, and think about the hereafter constantly
do you like, favor eastern religions ?

January 24th, 2023 11:56