Comments received on poems by Chiki1601



A fresh start
Bobby O said:

In the tapestry of dawn , dreams restart.
What a powerful and hopeful line.
Nice write good read

December 15th, 2023 08:13

A fresh start
2781 said:

Not sure why the category is fantasy?

December 15th, 2023 01:34

Lost love
RSM0812 said:

I really like your use of vocabulary and rhyme. It reminds me of a one sided broken heart.

December 13th, 2023 14:46

Last Chance
GODisreal said:

Wisdom

December 8th, 2023 16:56

Confess
Lorenz said:

the best of chat GPT !

December 6th, 2023 13:30

What happens happens
Lorenz said:

karmic tragedy or comedy...

December 6th, 2023 13:25

The bond of friendship
Bragee said:

Nothing compares to having such a friend

December 6th, 2023 06:29

The bond of friendship
Lorenz said:

Friendshop !

December 6th, 2023 04:19

New Year New Beginning
2781 said:

Why wait?
Today is the day.

December 4th, 2023 06:32

Fine in Vine
Parisab said:

Describing nature in classic terms never goes out of style! Well done! Visit my “you Qunech My Thirst” in the same spirit

December 1st, 2023 11:23

Fine in Vine
2781 said:

I liked it.

December 1st, 2023 01:06

Light from the stars
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful picture. Thoroughly enjoyed.

November 1st, 2023 07:19

Periple
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic

October 26th, 2023 05:56

Lost stars
Natalie Gladmir said:

So nice and romantic! Ready lyrics for the song. Where is a composer?

October 10th, 2023 05:49

Hidden memories
NinjaGirl said:

Beautiful! Such a great description! You\'re very poetic!

October 7th, 2023 12:41

Unrevealed secrets
Pop64 said:

A beautiful piece that so well paints the picture of the secrets only the heart knows.

October 6th, 2023 06:09

Lost promise
Pop64 said:

This has such a smooth flow to the read and while containing a subject of what appears to be lost love or the breaking of promises, I still recognize the chance of hope at the end. Beautiful

October 5th, 2023 13:23

Darkness
Pop64 said:

The imagery and rhyme within this is truly beautiful. Love the line, \"Fear not the dark, embrace its art\".

October 4th, 2023 15:02

Darkness
Soman Ragavan said:

My comments on the poem \"Darkness” by Chiki1601

“whispers…
Concealing tales, out of sight…
The night, a cloak…
In darkness, where dreams belong…
In the realm of shadows, stark…”

The words also apply to other circumstances, in a Chaucerian way…

See the poem “Whispers of the Pleasure District: A Tale of Lahore’s After-Dark Secrets” by Laraib Fatima on this site.

Soman Ragavan. 4 October, 2023. //
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October 4th, 2023 00:51

Darkness
2781 said:

If I go up to the heavens, you are there; if I make my bed in the depths, you are there.

October 4th, 2023 00:36

Reach
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully empowering message
thank you dear poet

September 22nd, 2023 05:59

Teenage days
mvvenkataraman said:

This poem is extraordinarily superb,

The poet has given actually a feast,

It is written in a wonderful manner,

The poet must be a great scholar,

I wonder how he could write so well,

In fact, I envy the poet\'s dexterity

In handling the words so smoothly,

All the best dear poet for this beauty!

September 20th, 2023 08:58

Enchanted moments
David Wakeling said:

This is wonderful.certainly filled with joy and happiness.I loved the rhyme.Well done

September 16th, 2023 00:25

Maybe I was born to hold you my love!
Suetah said:

You are amazing with your words and verses! Your story flows and I feel as though I am in it. Beautiful poem! :)

September 14th, 2023 01:56

Remember me?!
Suetah said:

Very nice, description - loving your verses! :)

September 14th, 2023 01:54

Dosti
David Wakeling said:

This is wonderful.I loved the rhyme and the skillful cadence.A masterpiece

July 19th, 2023 03:09

One sided love
peto said:

Flows so sweetly and great rhyme
They who can love are always the winners
Returned or not
Delightful write

July 15th, 2023 04:26

Maybe I was born to hold you my love!
L. B. Mek said:

rich in classic imagery and sincerity
a lovely read, thank you for sharing

July 14th, 2023 04:52

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