Comments received on poems by Chiki1601
A time to say Hello
Cassie58 said:
A lovely new year poem. A hope for a fresh start. A chance to improve on what has gone before. This year has been filled with conflict. Next year has to be better. Fingers crossed.
December 19th, 2023 12:06
Cassie58 said:
A lovely new year poem. A hope for a fresh start. A chance to improve on what has gone before. This year has been filled with conflict. Next year has to be better. Fingers crossed.
December 19th, 2023 12:06
A fresh start
Bobby O said:
In the tapestry of dawn , dreams restart.
What a powerful and hopeful line.
Nice write good read
December 15th, 2023 08:13
Bobby O said:
In the tapestry of dawn , dreams restart.
What a powerful and hopeful line.
Nice write good read
December 15th, 2023 08:13
Lost love
RSM0812 said:
I really like your use of vocabulary and rhyme. It reminds me of a one sided broken heart.
December 13th, 2023 14:46
RSM0812 said:
I really like your use of vocabulary and rhyme. It reminds me of a one sided broken heart.
December 13th, 2023 14:46
The bond of friendship
Bragee said:
Nothing compares to having such a friend
December 6th, 2023 06:29
Bragee said:
Nothing compares to having such a friend
December 6th, 2023 06:29
Fine in Vine
Parisab said:
Describing nature in classic terms never goes out of style! Well done! Visit my “you Qunech My Thirst” in the same spirit
December 1st, 2023 11:23
Parisab said:
Describing nature in classic terms never goes out of style! Well done! Visit my “you Qunech My Thirst” in the same spirit
December 1st, 2023 11:23
Light from the stars
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful picture. Thoroughly enjoyed.
November 1st, 2023 07:19
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful picture. Thoroughly enjoyed.
November 1st, 2023 07:19
Lost stars
Natalie Gladmir said:
So nice and romantic! Ready lyrics for the song. Where is a composer?
October 10th, 2023 05:49
Natalie Gladmir said:
So nice and romantic! Ready lyrics for the song. Where is a composer?
October 10th, 2023 05:49
Hidden memories
NinjaGirl said:
Beautiful! Such a great description! You\'re very poetic!
October 7th, 2023 12:41
NinjaGirl said:
Beautiful! Such a great description! You\'re very poetic!
October 7th, 2023 12:41
Unrevealed secrets
Pop64 said:
A beautiful piece that so well paints the picture of the secrets only the heart knows.
October 6th, 2023 06:09
Pop64 said:
A beautiful piece that so well paints the picture of the secrets only the heart knows.
October 6th, 2023 06:09
Lost promise
Pop64 said:
This has such a smooth flow to the read and while containing a subject of what appears to be lost love or the breaking of promises, I still recognize the chance of hope at the end. Beautiful
October 5th, 2023 13:23
Pop64 said:
This has such a smooth flow to the read and while containing a subject of what appears to be lost love or the breaking of promises, I still recognize the chance of hope at the end. Beautiful
October 5th, 2023 13:23
Darkness
Pop64 said:
The imagery and rhyme within this is truly beautiful. Love the line, \"Fear not the dark, embrace its art\".
October 4th, 2023 15:02
Pop64 said:
The imagery and rhyme within this is truly beautiful. Love the line, \"Fear not the dark, embrace its art\".
October 4th, 2023 15:02
Darkness
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Darkness” by Chiki1601
“whispers…
Concealing tales, out of sight…
The night, a cloak…
In darkness, where dreams belong…
In the realm of shadows, stark…”
The words also apply to other circumstances, in a Chaucerian way…
See the poem “Whispers of the Pleasure District: A Tale of Lahore’s After-Dark Secrets” by Laraib Fatima on this site.
Soman Ragavan. 4 October, 2023. //
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October 4th, 2023 00:51
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Darkness” by Chiki1601
“whispers…
Concealing tales, out of sight…
The night, a cloak…
In darkness, where dreams belong…
In the realm of shadows, stark…”
The words also apply to other circumstances, in a Chaucerian way…
See the poem “Whispers of the Pleasure District: A Tale of Lahore’s After-Dark Secrets” by Laraib Fatima on this site.
Soman Ragavan. 4 October, 2023. //
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October 4th, 2023 00:51
Darkness
2781 said:
If I go up to the heavens, you are there; if I make my bed in the depths, you are there.
October 4th, 2023 00:36
2781 said:
If I go up to the heavens, you are there; if I make my bed in the depths, you are there.
October 4th, 2023 00:36
Teenage days
mvvenkataraman said:
This poem is extraordinarily superb,
The poet has given actually a feast,
It is written in a wonderful manner,
The poet must be a great scholar,
I wonder how he could write so well,
In fact, I envy the poet\'s dexterity
In handling the words so smoothly,
All the best dear poet for this beauty!
September 20th, 2023 08:58
mvvenkataraman said:
This poem is extraordinarily superb,
The poet has given actually a feast,
It is written in a wonderful manner,
The poet must be a great scholar,
I wonder how he could write so well,
In fact, I envy the poet\'s dexterity
In handling the words so smoothly,
All the best dear poet for this beauty!
September 20th, 2023 08:58
Enchanted moments
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful.certainly filled with joy and happiness.I loved the rhyme.Well done
September 16th, 2023 00:25
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful.certainly filled with joy and happiness.I loved the rhyme.Well done
September 16th, 2023 00:25
Maybe I was born to hold you my love!
Suetah said:
You are amazing with your words and verses! Your story flows and I feel as though I am in it. Beautiful poem! :)
September 14th, 2023 01:56
Suetah said:
You are amazing with your words and verses! Your story flows and I feel as though I am in it. Beautiful poem! :)
September 14th, 2023 01:56
Remember me?!
Suetah said:
Very nice, description - loving your verses! :)
September 14th, 2023 01:54
Suetah said:
Very nice, description - loving your verses! :)
September 14th, 2023 01:54
Dosti
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful.I loved the rhyme and the skillful cadence.A masterpiece
July 19th, 2023 03:09
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful.I loved the rhyme and the skillful cadence.A masterpiece
July 19th, 2023 03:09
One sided love
peto said:
Flows so sweetly and great rhyme
They who can love are always the winners
Returned or not
Delightful write
July 15th, 2023 04:26
peto said:
Flows so sweetly and great rhyme
They who can love are always the winners
Returned or not
Delightful write
July 15th, 2023 04:26
Maybe I was born to hold you my love!
L. B. Mek said:
rich in classic imagery and sincerity
a lovely read, thank you for sharing
July 14th, 2023 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
rich in classic imagery and sincerity
a lovely read, thank you for sharing
July 14th, 2023 04:52
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