Comments received on poems by Chiki1601
Oath of October
peto said:
Couldn\'t agree more with last comment
Tremendous rhyme
April 28th, 2024 11:13
peto said:
Couldn\'t agree more with last comment
Tremendous rhyme
April 28th, 2024 11:13
Oath of October
mvvenkataraman said:
A marvelous poem with an extraordinary meaning and also an excellent rhyming !
April 28th, 2024 09:16
mvvenkataraman said:
A marvelous poem with an extraordinary meaning and also an excellent rhyming !
April 28th, 2024 09:16
Climate Change
Doggerel Dave said:
I found that a neat well written piece.
Couldn\'t agree more, but why did you classify it as \'Fantasy\'?
You must have put in much time constructing a strong poem, and then tell me it is rubbish?
February 27th, 2024 05:14
Doggerel Dave said:
I found that a neat well written piece.
Couldn\'t agree more, but why did you classify it as \'Fantasy\'?
You must have put in much time constructing a strong poem, and then tell me it is rubbish?
February 27th, 2024 05:14
Writing with emotions
arial said:
It\'s so beautiful..the rhyming the essence the soul ...bravo dear poet...
February 15th, 2024 11:40
arial said:
It\'s so beautiful..the rhyming the essence the soul ...bravo dear poet...
February 15th, 2024 11:40
Jasmine
Cassie58 said:
Enchanting imagery. Scent of jasmine intoxicating my memory. We have jasmine climbing against a trellis in our garden. Add some moonlight and you have a perfect setting for romance. I enjoyed your poem.
January 25th, 2024 18:46
Cassie58 said:
Enchanting imagery. Scent of jasmine intoxicating my memory. We have jasmine climbing against a trellis in our garden. Add some moonlight and you have a perfect setting for romance. I enjoyed your poem.
January 25th, 2024 18:46
Jasmine
Olaf Gatermann said:
Wow! Very poetic! I can see and smell your garden in far away Germany...!
January 25th, 2024 11:03
Olaf Gatermann said:
Wow! Very poetic! I can see and smell your garden in far away Germany...!
January 25th, 2024 11:03
Mothers
Destined Perspectives said:
This is very beautiful! Your rhythm and flow of words is like a lullaby! Thank you for sharing with us your beautiful poetic portrait of a mother!
January 22nd, 2024 12:15
Destined Perspectives said:
This is very beautiful! Your rhythm and flow of words is like a lullaby! Thank you for sharing with us your beautiful poetic portrait of a mother!
January 22nd, 2024 12:15
Mothers
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem. A mother’s love both unconditional and eternal. A poem to celebrate motherhood. Have a lovely day.
January 22nd, 2024 04:15
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem. A mother’s love both unconditional and eternal. A poem to celebrate motherhood. Have a lovely day.
January 22nd, 2024 04:15
Kindness
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem from a soul who understands the importance of kindness. It costs nothing. Have a lovely day.
January 20th, 2024 06:55
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem from a soul who understands the importance of kindness. It costs nothing. Have a lovely day.
January 20th, 2024 06:55
Kindness
Olaf Gatermann said:
Very touchkng! Was this written in Hindi originally? Because the translation (if it is one) renders the rhyme nicely
January 19th, 2024 11:59
Olaf Gatermann said:
Very touchkng! Was this written in Hindi originally? Because the translation (if it is one) renders the rhyme nicely
January 19th, 2024 11:59
Kindness
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem from a soul who understands the importance of kindness. It costs nothing. Have a lovely day.
January 19th, 2024 06:18
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem from a soul who understands the importance of kindness. It costs nothing. Have a lovely day.
January 19th, 2024 06:18
सपनों की दुनिया
Olaf Gatermann said:
I fed your poem to the AI translator DeepL but it does not speak Hindi yet...
January 18th, 2024 09:28
Olaf Gatermann said:
I fed your poem to the AI translator DeepL but it does not speak Hindi yet...
January 18th, 2024 09:28
Fragile threads
jarcher54 said:
Yes, the tapestry of life is strong and resilient in places, but fragile as a spider\'s web in some. Lovely song.
January 18th, 2024 02:01
jarcher54 said:
Yes, the tapestry of life is strong and resilient in places, but fragile as a spider\'s web in some. Lovely song.
January 18th, 2024 02:01
सपनों की दुनिया
jarcher54 said:
I have no Hindi (though I studied a little Sanskrit in grad school decades ago in comparative linguistics) but pulled up several translations in English. I wish I could hear you chant this little piece, which is a sort of dream to the reader. I suspect it is melodic. The phrases are sweet and enchanting.
January 18th, 2024 01:59
jarcher54 said:
I have no Hindi (though I studied a little Sanskrit in grad school decades ago in comparative linguistics) but pulled up several translations in English. I wish I could hear you chant this little piece, which is a sort of dream to the reader. I suspect it is melodic. The phrases are sweet and enchanting.
January 18th, 2024 01:59
Winter
Forrest said:
So beautiful!!! My town had a snow storm today so this poem is resonating with me :) Love it!
January 10th, 2024 01:35
Forrest said:
So beautiful!!! My town had a snow storm today so this poem is resonating with me :) Love it!
January 10th, 2024 01:35
પ્રેમ દીવાની
Norman Flagtea said:
Dear poet, we\'d appreciate a translation. Thank you...
January 9th, 2024 11:04
Norman Flagtea said:
Dear poet, we\'d appreciate a translation. Thank you...
January 9th, 2024 11:04
All I want is you
Cassie58 said:
All I want is you, now that is a very special love. Your couplets tell me so. I enjoyed the read.
January 4th, 2024 07:19
Cassie58 said:
All I want is you, now that is a very special love. Your couplets tell me so. I enjoyed the read.
January 4th, 2024 07:19
Krishna
2781 said:
And they overcame him by the blood of the Lamb, and by the word of their testimony; and they loved not their lives unto death.
January 3rd, 2024 01:56
2781 said:
And they overcame him by the blood of the Lamb, and by the word of their testimony; and they loved not their lives unto death.
January 3rd, 2024 01:56
Greens Horizons
Rocky Lagou said:
Your imagery is amazing, so picturesque. Nature is beautiful, and I like how you captured that in this poem. Happy New Year.
January 1st, 2024 03:27
Rocky Lagou said:
Your imagery is amazing, so picturesque. Nature is beautiful, and I like how you captured that in this poem. Happy New Year.
January 1st, 2024 03:27
Echoes of the past
sorenbarrett said:
A great way of introcucing the interweaving of intricacies in history. Nicely written.
December 28th, 2023 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
A great way of introcucing the interweaving of intricacies in history. Nicely written.
December 28th, 2023 09:08
Dear Sweetheart
mvvenkataraman said:
A lovely love poem
It sparkles like a gem,
For lovers an asylum,
It is pretty handsome!
December 22nd, 2023 09:31
mvvenkataraman said:
A lovely love poem
It sparkles like a gem,
For lovers an asylum,
It is pretty handsome!
December 22nd, 2023 09:31
Dear Sweetheart
Cassie58 said:
A love poem to the muse. That’s how I read your stanzas. Beautifully penned I might add.
December 22nd, 2023 01:42
Cassie58 said:
A love poem to the muse. That’s how I read your stanzas. Beautifully penned I might add.
December 22nd, 2023 01:42
Windows to the soul
John Lee said:
No comment here except this opened my windows to let in a moment\'s breeze.. very beautiful!
December 21st, 2023 18:59
John Lee said:
No comment here except this opened my windows to let in a moment\'s breeze.. very beautiful!
December 21st, 2023 18:59
Windows to the soul
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Windows to the soul” by Chiki1601
1st stanza. Thus, as the poem says, the eyes are not only windows to the soul, but even to the whole expanse of that soul. We have no control over our eyes. Sometimes we try to avert our gaze, but we can’t do it completely. In one second, our eyes have given out messages, and this is beyond our control. The eyes reveal our emotions, our truths, our stories. We cannot hide from our eyes; we cannot prevent our eyes from revealing our hidden, inner selves.
2nd stanza. In the eyes, secrets spread out, beyond our control. Our body might try to pass off some fake information, but the eyes speak the truth, and give the lie to the lie we are trying to pass off. The eyes are mirrors of the soul, and they permanently say openly our most secret thoughts. Our body may twitch to give off some fake impression, but the eyes unfailingly say the truth. Emotions leave the body through the eyes. They also do so through the body, but we may try to suppress some of the body language. The eyes speak a silent language. They speak words that the mouth and the body cannot reveal.
3rd stanza. The eyes extend to the frontiers of the hidden soul. The “universe within” is the real one, the one we try to hide, but the eyes betray us by revealing our inner thoughts. Feelings may begin with the eyes and the heart. Indeed, it is the eyes that are the first point of contact, and they pass on information to the heart. The heart and the mind generate thoughts and feelings and may try to hide these, but the eyes give the game away.
4th stanza. The eyes are described as storytellers. They tell volumes without making a sound. The eyes are said to be a connection with the heart and the soul.
Thus, our eyes rule us, feed our feelings, and disclose what we want to hide. They also say that for which we find no words. They are beyond our control. Soman Ragavan, 21 December, 2023.
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December 21st, 2023 09:16
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Windows to the soul” by Chiki1601
1st stanza. Thus, as the poem says, the eyes are not only windows to the soul, but even to the whole expanse of that soul. We have no control over our eyes. Sometimes we try to avert our gaze, but we can’t do it completely. In one second, our eyes have given out messages, and this is beyond our control. The eyes reveal our emotions, our truths, our stories. We cannot hide from our eyes; we cannot prevent our eyes from revealing our hidden, inner selves.
2nd stanza. In the eyes, secrets spread out, beyond our control. Our body might try to pass off some fake information, but the eyes speak the truth, and give the lie to the lie we are trying to pass off. The eyes are mirrors of the soul, and they permanently say openly our most secret thoughts. Our body may twitch to give off some fake impression, but the eyes unfailingly say the truth. Emotions leave the body through the eyes. They also do so through the body, but we may try to suppress some of the body language. The eyes speak a silent language. They speak words that the mouth and the body cannot reveal.
3rd stanza. The eyes extend to the frontiers of the hidden soul. The “universe within” is the real one, the one we try to hide, but the eyes betray us by revealing our inner thoughts. Feelings may begin with the eyes and the heart. Indeed, it is the eyes that are the first point of contact, and they pass on information to the heart. The heart and the mind generate thoughts and feelings and may try to hide these, but the eyes give the game away.
4th stanza. The eyes are described as storytellers. They tell volumes without making a sound. The eyes are said to be a connection with the heart and the soul.
Thus, our eyes rule us, feed our feelings, and disclose what we want to hide. They also say that for which we find no words. They are beyond our control. Soman Ragavan, 21 December, 2023.
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December 21st, 2023 09:16
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