Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
In Old Egypt
arqios said:
A tragedy indeed. You spun that tale in verse so well DW!
December 16th, 2024 06:10
arqios said:
A tragedy indeed. You spun that tale in verse so well DW!
December 16th, 2024 06:10
In Old Egypt
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed reading this differently written love story, good read
December 16th, 2024 06:00
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed reading this differently written love story, good read
December 16th, 2024 06:00
In Old Egypt
sorenbarrett said:
As all great stories of drama extreem passion is accompanied by extreem actions and consequences. A love story well told with great use of names to make it authentic and the end with a most intriguing and thought provoking message
December 16th, 2024 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
As all great stories of drama extreem passion is accompanied by extreem actions and consequences. A love story well told with great use of names to make it authentic and the end with a most intriguing and thought provoking message
December 16th, 2024 05:18
Joti, a poor Punjabi girl makes her wedding vows.
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images with poetic words combined with a most romantic statement. Well written and well finished. Great ending line
December 15th, 2024 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images with poetic words combined with a most romantic statement. Well written and well finished. Great ending line
December 15th, 2024 04:10
Joti, a poor Punjabi girl makes her wedding vows.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful gifts to give David.
Andy
December 15th, 2024 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful gifts to give David.
Andy
December 15th, 2024 02:03
Joti, a poor Punjabi girl makes her wedding vows.
Poetic Licence said:
And that is all you need, enjoyed the read.
December 15th, 2024 02:01
Poetic Licence said:
And that is all you need, enjoyed the read.
December 15th, 2024 02:01
Go Nanna Go Nanna
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale David, it certainly drew me in.
Andy
December 15th, 2024 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale David, it certainly drew me in.
Andy
December 15th, 2024 01:58
Go Nanna Go Nanna
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem. Your words played out in pictures. I found it really moving and in some ways relatable. Thank you David.
December 14th, 2024 13:20
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem. Your words played out in pictures. I found it really moving and in some ways relatable. Thank you David.
December 14th, 2024 13:20
Go Nanna Go Nanna
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching poem riddled with emotional tugs, Good Read
December 14th, 2024 06:07
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching poem riddled with emotional tugs, Good Read
December 14th, 2024 06:07
Go Nanna Go Nanna
sorenbarrett said:
Love how you built up to the end of this poem by creating charters and emotions and then the final line of being left without knowing. And so it is with life itself we build and build and never know. A well constructed write
December 14th, 2024 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Love how you built up to the end of this poem by creating charters and emotions and then the final line of being left without knowing. And so it is with life itself we build and build and never know. A well constructed write
December 14th, 2024 04:49
DUSK.
sorenbarrett said:
Truly lovely this poem speaks to the heart about birds and also it’s metaphor. A true work of art.
December 13th, 2024 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Truly lovely this poem speaks to the heart about birds and also it’s metaphor. A true work of art.
December 13th, 2024 10:02
The Pearl Necklace.
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable and entertaining read with a twist, really enjoyed it
December 13th, 2024 00:00
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable and entertaining read with a twist, really enjoyed it
December 13th, 2024 00:00
The Pearl Necklace.
sorenbarrett said:
A most unexpected ending to this poem. Intriguing it kept attention to the end. Very nicely written
December 12th, 2024 17:16
sorenbarrett said:
A most unexpected ending to this poem. Intriguing it kept attention to the end. Very nicely written
December 12th, 2024 17:16
Not enough colours
arqios said:
I agree! There are so many different colourful things to colour in!
December 12th, 2024 01:50
arqios said:
I agree! There are so many different colourful things to colour in!
December 12th, 2024 01:50
Not enough colours
Poetic Licence said:
A very colourful and uplifting little poem, really enjoyed the read.
December 11th, 2024 16:56
Poetic Licence said:
A very colourful and uplifting little poem, really enjoyed the read.
December 11th, 2024 16:56
Not enough colours
sorenbarrett said:
The most colorful poem. It strikes the imagination and pulls the thoughts through the eye of a needle, expanding into a colonoscope of wonder. This is what poets do.
December 11th, 2024 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
The most colorful poem. It strikes the imagination and pulls the thoughts through the eye of a needle, expanding into a colonoscope of wonder. This is what poets do.
December 11th, 2024 15:59
The Gods of Sydney Town.
Bobby O said:
Gathering courage for hostilities—
What a great opening line.
Maybe they are gonna be watching Australian Rules Football?
December 10th, 2024 07:36
Bobby O said:
Gathering courage for hostilities—
What a great opening line.
Maybe they are gonna be watching Australian Rules Football?
December 10th, 2024 07:36
The Gods of Sydney Town.
arqios said:
Been there, done that, oh so glad to be rid of grease and grass stains that stay not only on your threads as well as your skin even after a couple of washes. Your aftershave more than a hint of 2-stroke fluid (or 4) and petrol… nicks and scrapes glaring out downing a stubby half out of your sane mind. Nothing quite like that buzz. So glad to be rid of it now!
December 10th, 2024 05:23
arqios said:
Been there, done that, oh so glad to be rid of grease and grass stains that stay not only on your threads as well as your skin even after a couple of washes. Your aftershave more than a hint of 2-stroke fluid (or 4) and petrol… nicks and scrapes glaring out downing a stubby half out of your sane mind. Nothing quite like that buzz. So glad to be rid of it now!
December 10th, 2024 05:23
The Gods of Sydney Town.
sorenbarrett said:
I think that this might be an international rite of passage. I have participated on many occasions myself, Nicely written it flows as smooth as a tuned up engine and a sharp cutting blade
December 10th, 2024 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
I think that this might be an international rite of passage. I have participated on many occasions myself, Nicely written it flows as smooth as a tuned up engine and a sharp cutting blade
December 10th, 2024 04:51
The Gods of Sydney Town.
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining and funny read, giving us a tongue in cheek look into the daily lives of a Sydney Man, enjoyed the read
December 10th, 2024 04:33
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining and funny read, giving us a tongue in cheek look into the daily lives of a Sydney Man, enjoyed the read
December 10th, 2024 04:33
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