Pamela Strong and the Lemon Meringue Pie.
sorenbarrett said:

Very home like and domestic.

March 30th, 2023 17:29

Puppa goes on a Yacht.
Norman Flagtea said:

Dear David! Does it offend you if I said that this would make a lovely children\'s picture book?

March 28th, 2023 15:26

The Rain Over Kiama.
Doggerel Dave said:

David: I feel you are not explicit enough re location. I may know where Kiama is, but the great majority of punters (sorry - poets) here, I would hazard, don\'t. Now while not knowing doesn\'t detract from an otherwise rich piece, it could be a slight distraction....

March 25th, 2023 15:46

There was a time
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes David, there was a time.

Andy

March 24th, 2023 02:23

Same Sky Different Rain.
ForeverAbi said:

Without names the reader is not engaged.No-one knows who is talking to whom and why.Unfinished

March 23rd, 2023 16:32

Psalm 2
Nature said:

Its very nice.


March 23rd, 2023 05:50

Psalm 2
David Wakeling said:

Thank you so much.

March 23rd, 2023 02:04

Psalm 2
Samprikta Paul said:

Amen! Love and blessings be showered upon

March 23rd, 2023 01:12

Salute
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words David, Kindness is within us all.

Andy

March 22nd, 2023 03:47

The Days of Milk and Marmalade.
David Wakeling said:

Regrets are all we have

March 21st, 2023 16:04

Same Sky Different Rain.
Doggerel Dave said:

Hope it is as good as that for our First Nations now...they\'ve been shat upon for too long.

March 21st, 2023 05:55

The Lady Who Liked Mangos.           
Doggerel Dave said:

Where\'s Monash Street....? \'Sorry I\'m a bit lost....George St? Opera House? Gotta find my way home....

March 21st, 2023 05:45

Same Sky Different Rain.
orchidee said:

Me next poem is: Same rain, different sky! lol.

March 21st, 2023 03:25

The Battle and the Baby
David Wakeling said:

Thank you so much.

March 16th, 2023 05:38

The Good don’t die young.
jarcher54 said:

Lots of richly conflicting images but fun to read!

March 14th, 2023 11:25