Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Joseph and the last orange.
arqios said:
Another one that would’ve been transported to the penal colony, back in the day. “Alms. Alms. Spare me a piece of bread. Spare me your mercy.”
February 5th, 2025 06:34
arqios said:
Another one that would’ve been transported to the penal colony, back in the day. “Alms. Alms. Spare me a piece of bread. Spare me your mercy.”
February 5th, 2025 06:34
Joseph and the last orange.
Poetic Licence said:
Made me think this one because it is not to much to just want an orange, but then it is the way you go about that and they way it is received. Social as well as moral issues made an interesting and enjoyable read.
February 5th, 2025 04:56
Poetic Licence said:
Made me think this one because it is not to much to just want an orange, but then it is the way you go about that and they way it is received. Social as well as moral issues made an interesting and enjoyable read.
February 5th, 2025 04:56
Joseph and the last orange.
sorenbarrett said:
There may be a meta metaphor here. Poverty asks for justice of which there is none and comes up empty handed. The only escape in a power driven world is death the only true justice dispensed to all. How\'s that for a cynic\'s review? Good write my friend
February 5th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
There may be a meta metaphor here. Poverty asks for justice of which there is none and comes up empty handed. The only escape in a power driven world is death the only true justice dispensed to all. How\'s that for a cynic\'s review? Good write my friend
February 5th, 2025 04:41
Alison\'s first time.
Poetic Licence said:
A gift from the heart is a true gift, it is not giving thinking how it will be received, so sometime we can have regrets after but not at the time of giving. An interesting write that makes you have a think, enjoyed reading.
February 4th, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
A gift from the heart is a true gift, it is not giving thinking how it will be received, so sometime we can have regrets after but not at the time of giving. An interesting write that makes you have a think, enjoyed reading.
February 4th, 2025 05:59
Alison\'s first time.
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem that makes one ponder. One should never give a gift that one regrets. A gift is from the heart freely given with no regret regardless of what is done with it anything else is but a ransom. A wonderful write nicely worded and structured
February 4th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem that makes one ponder. One should never give a gift that one regrets. A gift is from the heart freely given with no regret regardless of what is done with it anything else is but a ransom. A wonderful write nicely worded and structured
February 4th, 2025 03:55
Alison\'s first time.
arqios said:
At best life can be overwhelming for seasoned travellers but can be so much more 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
February 4th, 2025 01:38
arqios said:
At best life can be overwhelming for seasoned travellers but can be so much more 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
February 4th, 2025 01:38
The Kiama Rock-Hoppers Club
sorenbarrett said:
Child or adult we often do foolish things that have bad results. Things we never intended but in our ignorance or neglect we are responsible and have to live with it. A wonderfully written piece set up well and well told with a sinking feeling at the end.
February 3rd, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Child or adult we often do foolish things that have bad results. Things we never intended but in our ignorance or neglect we are responsible and have to live with it. A wonderfully written piece set up well and well told with a sinking feeling at the end.
February 3rd, 2025 04:11
The Kiama Rock-Hoppers Club
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and sad read, reminding me of events we have had here over the years very much like this.
February 3rd, 2025 03:07
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and sad read, reminding me of events we have had here over the years very much like this.
February 3rd, 2025 03:07
The Kiama Rock-Hoppers Club
arqios said:
We have our own version in the West Moreton region, the Walloon sisters who both drowned in their backyard dam. So sad. 🕊
February 3rd, 2025 02:06
arqios said:
We have our own version in the West Moreton region, the Walloon sisters who both drowned in their backyard dam. So sad. 🕊
February 3rd, 2025 02:06
The Water\'s Edge.
sorenbarrett said:
Some really great lines in this poem \"God is ill and his silence is a cage\" is one that evokes a great deal of thought. Very nicely done David.
February 2nd, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Some really great lines in this poem \"God is ill and his silence is a cage\" is one that evokes a great deal of thought. Very nicely done David.
February 2nd, 2025 04:47
The Water\'s Edge.
arqios said:
The words and lines come to me like a dance between hope and despair, love and fear. It resonates deeply, offering a powerful reflection on our collective journey. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 2nd, 2025 03:38
arqios said:
The words and lines come to me like a dance between hope and despair, love and fear. It resonates deeply, offering a powerful reflection on our collective journey. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 2nd, 2025 03:38
The Dawning Grace.
arqios said:
Love the heading, a beeline for the future shore! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 1st, 2025 07:08
arqios said:
Love the heading, a beeline for the future shore! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 1st, 2025 07:08
The Dawning Grace.
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful verse and near rhyme in a somewhat classical form that carries the reader through this world to the beyond. It floats effortlessly as a cloud through the sky. It leaves behind an etherial feel.
February 1st, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful verse and near rhyme in a somewhat classical form that carries the reader through this world to the beyond. It floats effortlessly as a cloud through the sky. It leaves behind an etherial feel.
February 1st, 2025 04:13
Australia, diamond, Australia,
arqios said:
Well now, have come across a patriotic poem this grand or this moving, mate! Sure fire like and Fave 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊🇦🇺
January 31st, 2025 06:54
arqios said:
Well now, have come across a patriotic poem this grand or this moving, mate! Sure fire like and Fave 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊🇦🇺
January 31st, 2025 06:54
Australia, diamond, Australia,
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful tribute and poem to a land. It rouses the heart with pride and calls for a sense of nationalism. Much to be proud of here in both the land and the poem full of images and history.
January 31st, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful tribute and poem to a land. It rouses the heart with pride and calls for a sense of nationalism. Much to be proud of here in both the land and the poem full of images and history.
January 31st, 2025 04:00
Australia, diamond, Australia,
Poetic Licence said:
Somewhere i have not had the pleasure to visit but have longed to go, really enjoyed the read. have a great weekend
January 31st, 2025 02:46
Poetic Licence said:
Somewhere i have not had the pleasure to visit but have longed to go, really enjoyed the read. have a great weekend
January 31st, 2025 02:46
Grandpa Doe
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a moral that we all have if we only take time to listen, Too many in todays society don\'t take the time to listen to others. Nicely written
January 30th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a moral that we all have if we only take time to listen, Too many in todays society don\'t take the time to listen to others. Nicely written
January 30th, 2025 04:31
Grandpa Doe
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful, touching and thoughtful piece of writing, really enjoyed it
January 30th, 2025 03:05
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful, touching and thoughtful piece of writing, really enjoyed it
January 30th, 2025 03:05
Grandpa Doe
arqios said:
Now there is a story worth telling and retelling… I wonder if the town was really Ballina NSW… just a random thought. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 30th, 2025 01:49
arqios said:
Now there is a story worth telling and retelling… I wonder if the town was really Ballina NSW… just a random thought. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 30th, 2025 01:49
Fire Earth Water Air.
arqios said:
Quite elemental and primordial even! A thrill of a tone to read 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:26
arqios said:
Quite elemental and primordial even! A thrill of a tone to read 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:26
Fire Earth Water Air.
Poetic Licence said:
The elements that give so much life yet at the same time away so much life, the power of nature, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:18
Poetic Licence said:
The elements that give so much life yet at the same time away so much life, the power of nature, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:18
Fire Earth Water Air.
sorenbarrett said:
Mythical in form, Biblical in sound, Apocalyptic as it reads, this poem shows a dark face. Very nice David
January 29th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Mythical in form, Biblical in sound, Apocalyptic as it reads, this poem shows a dark face. Very nice David
January 29th, 2025 04:16
WAU 1982.
Cassie58 said:
A somber poem. I am unsure what WAU 1982 represents, but it leaves me with a heavy heart. Some fine poetic lines contained in the stanzas, and the final line ends on a more optimistic note. The sun in the sky, is far better than a sunken sun. Fine poetry David.
January 29th, 2025 02:42
Cassie58 said:
A somber poem. I am unsure what WAU 1982 represents, but it leaves me with a heavy heart. Some fine poetic lines contained in the stanzas, and the final line ends on a more optimistic note. The sun in the sky, is far better than a sunken sun. Fine poetry David.
January 29th, 2025 02:42
WAU 1982.
arqios said:
Liked and Faved! Very sonorous both in language and meaning… have you been holding back this other side of you!? 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:32
arqios said:
Liked and Faved! Very sonorous both in language and meaning… have you been holding back this other side of you!? 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:32
WAU 1982.
Poetic Licence said:
I might well be wrong, i took this to about the civil war in Sudan (The Title), which was then followed by another war, apoligies if i am. It is still a very well crafted piece of writing, painting many a haunting image.
January 28th, 2025 04:24
Poetic Licence said:
I might well be wrong, i took this to about the civil war in Sudan (The Title), which was then followed by another war, apoligies if i am. It is still a very well crafted piece of writing, painting many a haunting image.
January 28th, 2025 04:24
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