Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.Thanks for reading
March 1st, 2023 05:14
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.Thanks for reading
March 1st, 2023 05:14
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, we all have our way of making our day.
Andy
March 1st, 2023 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, we all have our way of making our day.
Andy
March 1st, 2023 02:49
The Sun did not rise this morning
David Wakeling said:
What a coincidence.Great minds think alike
February 28th, 2023 05:15
David Wakeling said:
What a coincidence.Great minds think alike
February 28th, 2023 05:15
The Sun did not rise this morning
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words David, it reminded me of a poem I wrote a few years ago.
Andy
Walking Home.
Andy Brister (Goldfinch60) – August 2019.
There I was last night
Walking home,
Lost in thought.
I was heading passed the cemetery.
Three young girls were in front of me,
Chatting,
Looking frightened.
They said they were scared,
Scared to walk passed the cemetery,
Could they walk with me.
I said of course you can,
I can understand how you feel,
I too used to be scared
Scared of walking passed the cemetery,
When I was alive.
February 28th, 2023 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words David, it reminded me of a poem I wrote a few years ago.
Andy
Walking Home.
Andy Brister (Goldfinch60) – August 2019.
There I was last night
Walking home,
Lost in thought.
I was heading passed the cemetery.
Three young girls were in front of me,
Chatting,
Looking frightened.
They said they were scared,
Scared to walk passed the cemetery,
Could they walk with me.
I said of course you can,
I can understand how you feel,
I too used to be scared
Scared of walking passed the cemetery,
When I was alive.
February 28th, 2023 02:31
Joseph and the last orange
sorenbarrett said:
Misunderstood intentions, over reaction, exageration all great ways of creating tragedy, humor and good stories.
February 27th, 2023 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Misunderstood intentions, over reaction, exageration all great ways of creating tragedy, humor and good stories.
February 27th, 2023 05:30
Joseph and the last orange
Goldfinch60 said:
I found these words very meaningful David.
Andy
February 27th, 2023 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
I found these words very meaningful David.
Andy
February 27th, 2023 02:58
Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you Much appreciated
February 25th, 2023 05:07
David Wakeling said:
Thank you Much appreciated
February 25th, 2023 05:07
Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words David.
Andy
February 25th, 2023 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words David.
Andy
February 25th, 2023 02:16
My name is Mary Judith MaCallister
David Wakeling said:
No can do amigo no can do.Thanks for reading
February 21st, 2023 16:01
David Wakeling said:
No can do amigo no can do.Thanks for reading
February 21st, 2023 16:01
My name is Mary Judith MaCallister
Doggerel Dave said:
Surely this piece is deserving of at least a short commentary by you.
I\'m interested, but not enough to commit without some background.
February 21st, 2023 07:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Surely this piece is deserving of at least a short commentary by you.
I\'m interested, but not enough to commit without some background.
February 21st, 2023 07:26
Mr Bellmeister catches the bus.
Olaf Gatermann said:
Sad story in a fine poem! Touching narrative...
February 20th, 2023 03:33
Olaf Gatermann said:
Sad story in a fine poem! Touching narrative...
February 20th, 2023 03:33
Mr Bellmeister catches the bus.
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.Thanks for your comments
February 19th, 2023 15:39
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.Thanks for your comments
February 19th, 2023 15:39
Mr Bellmeister catches the bus.
Doggerel Dave said:
A satisfying story well written - Thanks.
Since we all must go in the end, this was a good and easy option.
February 19th, 2023 05:05
Doggerel Dave said:
A satisfying story well written - Thanks.
Since we all must go in the end, this was a good and easy option.
February 19th, 2023 05:05
The Train to Treblinka.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you for your comments.Much appreciated
February 18th, 2023 02:15
David Wakeling said:
Thank you for your comments.Much appreciated
February 18th, 2023 02:15
The Train to Treblinka.
L. B. Mek said:
(we Must never forget
and those words, that bravely
spotlight horror\'s reality
we Must
encourage, share and keep alive
in the hope, we never allow
a repeat, of such atrocities)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 17th, 2023 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
(we Must never forget
and those words, that bravely
spotlight horror\'s reality
we Must
encourage, share and keep alive
in the hope, we never allow
a repeat, of such atrocities)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 17th, 2023 05:06
Little Davy Blue Eyes.
David Wakeling said:
Joy....do you need the definiton
February 17th, 2023 00:26
David Wakeling said:
Joy....do you need the definiton
February 17th, 2023 00:26
Little Davy Blue Eyes.
Ryszard said:
Ouch, dripping with cliché\'s and emotional drivel. Painful read.
February 16th, 2023 17:54
Ryszard said:
Ouch, dripping with cliché\'s and emotional drivel. Painful read.
February 16th, 2023 17:54
We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you for your comments.Much apreciated
February 15th, 2023 05:38
David Wakeling said:
Thank you for your comments.Much apreciated
February 15th, 2023 05:38
We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home.
Iva Hotko said:
Tenderness and love coated with strength and determination worded in such a beautiful way. Thank you for sharing this poem :)
February 15th, 2023 03:51
Iva Hotko said:
Tenderness and love coated with strength and determination worded in such a beautiful way. Thank you for sharing this poem :)
February 15th, 2023 03:51
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