Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The dark days
arqios said:
Evolutionary poetry and survival of the wittiest, perhaps… and the thoughts begin to randomise… my fault, not yours!
November 7th, 2024 06:50
arqios said:
Evolutionary poetry and survival of the wittiest, perhaps… and the thoughts begin to randomise… my fault, not yours!
November 7th, 2024 06:50
The dark days
sorenbarrett said:
Creationism vs evolution the old science of faith issue. Nicely stated in great verse and clever wording. Nicely done.
November 7th, 2024 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Creationism vs evolution the old science of faith issue. Nicely stated in great verse and clever wording. Nicely done.
November 7th, 2024 03:46
The dark days
orchidee said:
I did see someone doing a chimp impression, but it didn\'t change my mind - I don\'t believe we evolved from apes.
November 7th, 2024 03:15
orchidee said:
I did see someone doing a chimp impression, but it didn\'t change my mind - I don\'t believe we evolved from apes.
November 7th, 2024 03:15
The Cat’s Tale.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, with age our minds still think we can do the things we used to but nowadays it is just wishful thinking David.
Andy
November 7th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, with age our minds still think we can do the things we used to but nowadays it is just wishful thinking David.
Andy
November 7th, 2024 02:25
The Cat’s Tale.
arqios said:
On the human side of things it’s hard to explain but the cat’s tale covered the most salient bases.
November 6th, 2024 06:56
arqios said:
On the human side of things it’s hard to explain but the cat’s tale covered the most salient bases.
November 6th, 2024 06:56
The Cat’s Tale.
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor of age but even as personification alone it holds its own. Lovely
November 6th, 2024 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor of age but even as personification alone it holds its own. Lovely
November 6th, 2024 06:23
Sugar and Salt
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people are just not grateful in life David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people are just not grateful in life David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:58
The Battle and the Baby
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of new life is so appealing David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of new life is so appealing David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:48
AVARICE.
NafisaSB said:
a poignant poem with a beautiful and true message - well done
November 5th, 2024 00:44
NafisaSB said:
a poignant poem with a beautiful and true message - well done
November 5th, 2024 00:44
The Battle and the Baby
sorenbarrett said:
Inocense is most aluring and draws a great deal of support. A most lovely write.
November 4th, 2024 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Inocense is most aluring and draws a great deal of support. A most lovely write.
November 4th, 2024 04:32
AVARICE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, the avarice in our world is getting worse each moment in our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, the avarice in our world is getting worse each moment in our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:48
AVARICE.
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! This is so beautifully rendered I\'m on the fence over whether it\'s what it seems at first glance or a grand and damning metaphor. With a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, this is too lovely, despite its ghastliness. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 12:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! This is so beautifully rendered I\'m on the fence over whether it\'s what it seems at first glance or a grand and damning metaphor. With a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, this is too lovely, despite its ghastliness. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 12:19
AVARICE.
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic write of the avarice of men and the callousness toward others in their quest. So well worded and rhymed a masterpiece
November 3rd, 2024 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic write of the avarice of men and the callousness toward others in their quest. So well worded and rhymed a masterpiece
November 3rd, 2024 09:18
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things that we can do in life pushes away the darkness David, Good write.
Andy
November 3rd, 2024 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things that we can do in life pushes away the darkness David, Good write.
Andy
November 3rd, 2024 02:28
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
sorenbarrett said:
The sad aspects of aging depicted well in attempts to live one\'s dreams with incapacitation. Well composed in solid verse
November 2nd, 2024 19:47
sorenbarrett said:
The sad aspects of aging depicted well in attempts to live one\'s dreams with incapacitation. Well composed in solid verse
November 2nd, 2024 19:47
Salute
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message that I wish we all could adhere to. The last line is my favorite and I wish all would honor.
November 2nd, 2024 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message that I wish we all could adhere to. The last line is my favorite and I wish all would honor.
November 2nd, 2024 10:05
Salute
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write David and that last line is so meaningful, if only we all could find kindness.
Andy
November 2nd, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write David and that last line is so meaningful, if only we all could find kindness.
Andy
November 2nd, 2024 02:21
The Ghost that saves
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept, the ghost of love, makes one ponder. I love when a new thought comes in a poem. Very creative.
November 1st, 2024 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept, the ghost of love, makes one ponder. I love when a new thought comes in a poem. Very creative.
November 1st, 2024 03:51
The Ghost that saves
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there for you David.
Andy
November 1st, 2024 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there for you David.
Andy
November 1st, 2024 02:04
The Days of Rock and Roll.
Bobby O said:
They Day with you and happiness and I imagine especially because of the title soundtrack. It is even adjusted by volume as you move around cause it’s gotta hit you right she comes Kathy’s clown. I like Ray Davis. Will you tell me your name?
October 31st, 2024 02:49
Bobby O said:
They Day with you and happiness and I imagine especially because of the title soundtrack. It is even adjusted by volume as you move around cause it’s gotta hit you right she comes Kathy’s clown. I like Ray Davis. Will you tell me your name?
October 31st, 2024 02:49
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