Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Obsession.
peet said:
Such deep thoughts so well captured in a few lines. Great words my friend.
October 15th, 2024 13:11
peet said:
Such deep thoughts so well captured in a few lines. Great words my friend.
October 15th, 2024 13:11
The Light of Lucifer.
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words David, the world is so full of war, IT MUST BE STOPPED!!
Andy
October 14th, 2024 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words David, the world is so full of war, IT MUST BE STOPPED!!
Andy
October 14th, 2024 00:45
The Light of Lucifer.
sorenbarrett said:
Harsh words for dark deeds. Powerful writting
October 13th, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Harsh words for dark deeds. Powerful writting
October 13th, 2024 05:27
LOVE.
sorenbarrett said:
Our own sunglasses keepus from seeing the beauty of love. A poem worth reading more than once
October 13th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Our own sunglasses keepus from seeing the beauty of love. A poem worth reading more than once
October 13th, 2024 05:23
LOVE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is around us David all but many do not see it.
Andy
October 13th, 2024 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is around us David all but many do not see it.
Andy
October 13th, 2024 02:07
BETRAYAL.
Goldfinch60 said:
All the different types of organised religion are seeking this, perhaps it does not exist David.
Andy
October 12th, 2024 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
All the different types of organised religion are seeking this, perhaps it does not exist David.
Andy
October 12th, 2024 01:56
BETRAYAL.
sorenbarrett said:
Fear of the unknown is central. When we do not know ourselves is the worst unknown. Written so well it brings this to heart
October 11th, 2024 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
Fear of the unknown is central. When we do not know ourselves is the worst unknown. Written so well it brings this to heart
October 11th, 2024 07:56
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, \\i am sure that lady will always be in your mind.
Andy
October 11th, 2024 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, \\i am sure that lady will always be in your mind.
Andy
October 11th, 2024 01:56
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
sorenbarrett said:
The pheonix baptized in fire ashes to ashes and dust to dust then resurection. A great write
October 10th, 2024 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
The pheonix baptized in fire ashes to ashes and dust to dust then resurection. A great write
October 10th, 2024 20:25
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
Thomas W Case said:
This is such a well-done magical journey.
October 10th, 2024 17:42
Thomas W Case said:
This is such a well-done magical journey.
October 10th, 2024 17:42
Empathy, Sympathy and Compassion
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful and meaningful write David.
Andy
October 7th, 2024 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful and meaningful write David.
Andy
October 7th, 2024 01:18
Empathy, Sympathy and Compassion
sorenbarrett said:
A parable with inset menings. Nicely written it keeps the reader engagued and wanting more.
October 6th, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
A parable with inset menings. Nicely written it keeps the reader engagued and wanting more.
October 6th, 2024 05:50
Emily goes for a walk.
Hey! said:
This is like a puzzle, once you build it. It comes tumbling/ breaking down or apart, but there\'s a perk. You can always re-pair it. Wonderful work!!!
October 5th, 2024 22:32
Hey! said:
This is like a puzzle, once you build it. It comes tumbling/ breaking down or apart, but there\'s a perk. You can always re-pair it. Wonderful work!!!
October 5th, 2024 22:32
Emily goes for a walk.
sorenbarrett said:
As we take the walk through the maze of life we may loose our memory in its turns and find ourselves down a blind alley. I love how the symbolic use of flowers indicates the direction we are headed and the softness or the guide being gentle and kind whether leading us to past memories of love or present of death. Nicely done
October 5th, 2024 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
As we take the walk through the maze of life we may loose our memory in its turns and find ourselves down a blind alley. I love how the symbolic use of flowers indicates the direction we are headed and the softness or the guide being gentle and kind whether leading us to past memories of love or present of death. Nicely done
October 5th, 2024 06:06
Same Sky Different Rain.
Dan Williams said:
That\'s not a knife., THIS is a knife. I like it.
October 5th, 2024 00:10
Dan Williams said:
That\'s not a knife., THIS is a knife. I like it.
October 5th, 2024 00:10
Same Sky Different Rain.
sorenbarrett said:
This paints a beautiful picture in the mind and I picture dream in an aboriginal sense and the comming to life of trees and rocks. Very nicely done and deserves more reads.
October 4th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
This paints a beautiful picture in the mind and I picture dream in an aboriginal sense and the comming to life of trees and rocks. Very nicely done and deserves more reads.
October 4th, 2024 04:59
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