Comments received on poems by David Wakeling



Crying out load
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 9th, 2024 07:24

The SLAYING.
Tony36 said:

Raw emotion, extremely well written

November 9th, 2024 07:17

The SLAYING.
Goldfinch60 said:

We will all go there in the end David, some more peacefully than others.

Andy

November 9th, 2024 02:48

The SLAYING.
sorenbarrett said:

Sharp raw and savage it’s sparkles with darkness. My favorite part is the last few lines that send a shiver down your spine.

November 8th, 2024 17:49

The dark days
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words David and that last verse could be me.

Andy

November 8th, 2024 02:41

The dark days
Dan Williams said:

This is just wonderful. There are some among us that can hear the violins, I can fortunately can. Thanks for this.

November 8th, 2024 01:31

The dark days
Lorenz said:

Does the monkey come down from the tree ?

November 7th, 2024 13:32

The dark days
Tony36 said:

Excellent

November 7th, 2024 10:53

The dark days
arqios said:

Evolutionary poetry and survival of the wittiest, perhaps… and the thoughts begin to randomise… my fault, not yours!

November 7th, 2024 06:50

The dark days
sorenbarrett said:

Creationism vs evolution the old science of faith issue. Nicely stated in great verse and clever wording. Nicely done.

November 7th, 2024 03:46

The dark days
orchidee said:

I did see someone doing a chimp impression, but it didn\'t change my mind - I don\'t believe we evolved from apes.

November 7th, 2024 03:15

The Cat’s Tale.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words, with age our minds still think we can do the things we used to but nowadays it is just wishful thinking David.

Andy

November 7th, 2024 02:25

The Cat’s Tale.
orchidee said:

Good write D.

November 6th, 2024 13:28

The Cat’s Tale.
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 6th, 2024 07:33

The Cat’s Tale.
arqios said:

On the human side of things it’s hard to explain but the cat’s tale covered the most salient bases.

November 6th, 2024 06:56

The Cat’s Tale.
sorenbarrett said:

Such a great metaphor of age but even as personification alone it holds its own. Lovely

November 6th, 2024 06:23

Sugar and Salt
arqios said:

Tables have turned and are continuing to do so.

November 5th, 2024 04:16

Sugar and Salt
Goldfinch60 said:

Some people are just not grateful in life David.

Andy

November 5th, 2024 02:58

The Battle and the Baby
Goldfinch60 said:

The innocence of new life is so appealing David.

Andy

November 5th, 2024 02:48

AVARICE.
NafisaSB said:

a poignant poem with a beautiful and true message - well done

November 5th, 2024 00:44

The Battle and the Baby
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

November 4th, 2024 16:05

The Battle and the Baby
sorenbarrett said:

Inocense is most aluring and draws a great deal of support. A most lovely write.

November 4th, 2024 04:32

AVARICE.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words David, the avarice in our world is getting worse each moment in our lives.

Andy

November 4th, 2024 02:48

AVARICE.
Cheeky Missy said:

Dang! This is so beautifully rendered I\'m on the fence over whether it\'s what it seems at first glance or a grand and damning metaphor. With a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, this is too lovely, despite its ghastliness. Thank you for sharing.

November 3rd, 2024 12:19

AVARICE.
sorenbarrett said:

A fantastic write of the avarice of men and the callousness toward others in their quest. So well worded and rhymed a masterpiece

November 3rd, 2024 09:18

Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Goldfinch60 said:

So many things that we can do in life pushes away the darkness David, Good write.

Andy

November 3rd, 2024 02:28

Salute
Dan Williams said:

Amen. Very nice.

November 2nd, 2024 23:48

Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
sorenbarrett said:

The sad aspects of aging depicted well in attempts to live one\'s dreams with incapacitation. Well composed in solid verse

November 2nd, 2024 19:47

Salute
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful message that I wish we all could adhere to. The last line is my favorite and I wish all would honor.

November 2nd, 2024 10:05

Salute
arqios said:

To be kind, that is the way!

November 2nd, 2024 08:16



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