Comments received on poems by Daisie-Lyn Fuller
The Green Eyed Sorcerer - Daisie-Lyn Fuller
Pop64 said:
I agree with darkfragrance, someone new, better will be there on a different path. This speaks clearly of the pain in the separation. Keep writing, it helps.
October 5th, 2023 13:35
Pop64 said:
I agree with darkfragrance, someone new, better will be there on a different path. This speaks clearly of the pain in the separation. Keep writing, it helps.
October 5th, 2023 13:35
The Green Eyed Sorcerer - Daisie-Lyn Fuller
Lorenz said:
A new sorcerer awaits you on the path but this one will have blue eyes...
October 5th, 2023 10:44
Lorenz said:
A new sorcerer awaits you on the path but this one will have blue eyes...
October 5th, 2023 10:44
No Response - Daisie-Lyn Fuller
hpoetry said:
I love this, the structure is interesting - how every stanza ends the same, I especially love how the penultimate line of the first and last stanzas rhyme with each other with that ‘ed’ sound (‘I called you instead’ / ‘leaving me for dead’) - not sure if that was intentional but either way I love how it ties the whole story together!
April 13th, 2023 05:19
hpoetry said:
I love this, the structure is interesting - how every stanza ends the same, I especially love how the penultimate line of the first and last stanzas rhyme with each other with that ‘ed’ sound (‘I called you instead’ / ‘leaving me for dead’) - not sure if that was intentional but either way I love how it ties the whole story together!
April 13th, 2023 05:19
No Response - Daisie-Lyn Fuller
orchidee said:
I thought I phoned you! (heehee). Was it me you were waiting for? lol.
April 13th, 2023 02:33
orchidee said:
I thought I phoned you! (heehee). Was it me you were waiting for? lol.
April 13th, 2023 02:33
Attached - Daisie-Lyn Fuller
tallisman said:
Hi DLF, good write! A difficult subject , painful. Well done.
April 12th, 2023 00:35
tallisman said:
Hi DLF, good write! A difficult subject , painful. Well done.
April 12th, 2023 00:35
Attached - Daisie-Lyn Fuller
David Wakeling said:
This is quite an accurate look most failed relationships.They are disasters
April 11th, 2023 00:25
David Wakeling said:
This is quite an accurate look most failed relationships.They are disasters
April 11th, 2023 00:25
Hanging On - Daisie-Lyn Fuller
hzugman said:
Deep thoughts DLF. The road to happiness is taken one step at a time. I\'m 83 and still have stuff to work on. Nice poem.
April 9th, 2023 09:51
hzugman said:
Deep thoughts DLF. The road to happiness is taken one step at a time. I\'m 83 and still have stuff to work on. Nice poem.
April 9th, 2023 09:51
Save me - Daisie-Lyn Fuller
Bobby O said:
Starkly honest and inspires an almost visceral enjoined participation even though my immersion was only thirty seconds. That , my friend, is strong success of message.
April 7th, 2023 04:26
Bobby O said:
Starkly honest and inspires an almost visceral enjoined participation even though my immersion was only thirty seconds. That , my friend, is strong success of message.
April 7th, 2023 04:26
Save me - Daisie-Lyn Fuller
L. B. Mek said:
(please forgive my overzealous words below
try to imagine i meant well)
control is a strange concept to contemplate
we assume, love as having correlation
with us sacrificing
what control we have in our life
it doesn\'t, it can never
if you find your love
is being manipulated as a tool of subjugation
you need only realise
\'IT\'s NOT YOUR FAULT!\'
you did not Fail, in any way
neither did you fail yourself or your partner!
you chose, to Trust
and that\'s commendable and brave
and that partner, \'chose\' to abuse
that trust and warp your loyalty;
dear Poet kin
you do not need saving
you need only forgive yourself
remind yourself, you\'re only
just another fallible human
perfection is not something any of us
can attain!
so, please
find your resolve
look deep in that mirror reflection
and remind yourself
of that power you once, wielded
in your life
dig deep, excavate it
from that cave you tried to hide within
allow yourself, a little levity
laugh at the absurdity
of anyone making you feel
like you\'re helpless, when within
you wield enough power
to shatter a heart
in but an indifferent, blink...
then gather your strength
make your choice
and once more walk that path
where only, You
get to control
your perspective of life!
stay strong,
I wish you all the best
April 7th, 2023 02:29
L. B. Mek said:
(please forgive my overzealous words below
try to imagine i meant well)
control is a strange concept to contemplate
we assume, love as having correlation
with us sacrificing
what control we have in our life
it doesn\'t, it can never
if you find your love
is being manipulated as a tool of subjugation
you need only realise
\'IT\'s NOT YOUR FAULT!\'
you did not Fail, in any way
neither did you fail yourself or your partner!
you chose, to Trust
and that\'s commendable and brave
and that partner, \'chose\' to abuse
that trust and warp your loyalty;
dear Poet kin
you do not need saving
you need only forgive yourself
remind yourself, you\'re only
just another fallible human
perfection is not something any of us
can attain!
so, please
find your resolve
look deep in that mirror reflection
and remind yourself
of that power you once, wielded
in your life
dig deep, excavate it
from that cave you tried to hide within
allow yourself, a little levity
laugh at the absurdity
of anyone making you feel
like you\'re helpless, when within
you wield enough power
to shatter a heart
in but an indifferent, blink...
then gather your strength
make your choice
and once more walk that path
where only, You
get to control
your perspective of life!
stay strong,
I wish you all the best
April 7th, 2023 02:29
Save me - Daisie-Lyn Fuller
MysteryGhost said:
This is a great poem! The repetition of the words \"Save me\" really help further the sense of desperation. The sense of being trapped and not being able to do what you want is an uncomfortable topic which really helps the poem. Stoatin\' wirk!
April 6th, 2023 15:42
MysteryGhost said:
This is a great poem! The repetition of the words \"Save me\" really help further the sense of desperation. The sense of being trapped and not being able to do what you want is an uncomfortable topic which really helps the poem. Stoatin\' wirk!
April 6th, 2023 15:42
Sharp - Daisie-Lyn Fuller
-The poet in me said:
\"I am stronger than thee\"
Really got to me
These words are very strong
Do what is right
With all your might
In spite of what was wrong
March 13th, 2023 13:53
-The poet in me said:
\"I am stronger than thee\"
Really got to me
These words are very strong
Do what is right
With all your might
In spite of what was wrong
March 13th, 2023 13:53
