Comments received on poems by XJordanXVonXJaggedX
Misery Inside
Cheeky Missy said:
In a real sense it is so very true, for unless the Lord saves us, we are all truly dead (in sin). And miserable more often than not. I think you've excellently portrayed the situation. We are hopeless without God.
December 19th, 2010 15:25
Cheeky Missy said:
In a real sense it is so very true, for unless the Lord saves us, we are all truly dead (in sin). And miserable more often than not. I think you've excellently portrayed the situation. We are hopeless without God.
December 19th, 2010 15:25
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Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent....you've described the love-broken heart so well! If only truth would step in, take her hand, and lead her to the brighter day, instead of the lies that are taking her very life.
December 17th, 2010 12:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent....you've described the love-broken heart so well! If only truth would step in, take her hand, and lead her to the brighter day, instead of the lies that are taking her very life.
December 17th, 2010 12:25
Free Like Butterflies
Cheeky Missy said:
You expressed it very well....except screams are the opposite of lullabies, and time may heal the wound...somewhat.
December 14th, 2010 22:37
Cheeky Missy said:
You expressed it very well....except screams are the opposite of lullabies, and time may heal the wound...somewhat.
December 14th, 2010 22:37
In A Moment Of Weakness
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Nasty. You painted quite the scene of pain and hurt....and the vengeance that was due. I am sorry if this is true. You expressed it well poetically.
November 24th, 2010 21:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Nasty. You painted quite the scene of pain and hurt....and the vengeance that was due. I am sorry if this is true. You expressed it well poetically.
November 24th, 2010 21:36
