Comments received on poems by Sandra
Excuse the Drama
FredPeyer said:
Sandra, a well constructed, well written poem. Sad, but with a little hope at the end. You know, when you are at the bottom, the only remaining way is up!
November 7th, 2017 22:05
FredPeyer said:
Sandra, a well constructed, well written poem. Sad, but with a little hope at the end. You know, when you are at the bottom, the only remaining way is up!
November 7th, 2017 22:05
Miles
Fay Slimm. said:
The agony of not knowing you write with honesty Sandra - -love can leap over miles - I love the final three lines of real poignancy.
October 31st, 2017 14:00
Fay Slimm. said:
The agony of not knowing you write with honesty Sandra - -love can leap over miles - I love the final three lines of real poignancy.
October 31st, 2017 14:00
Miles
FredPeyer said:
How can I ever understand somebody else if I don\'t even understand myself? Like the Seuss and Thoreau comparison! Well written, Sandra!
October 31st, 2017 12:54
FredPeyer said:
How can I ever understand somebody else if I don\'t even understand myself? Like the Seuss and Thoreau comparison! Well written, Sandra!
October 31st, 2017 12:54
Deaf and Blind
FredPeyer said:
Ah well, Sandra, I figured I might as well read all three of your poems.
Again, like the two others, I do like this poem because it is so well written. You wrote about being blind and deaf, so let me conclude with a quote by Helen Keller:
Once I knew only darkness and stillness... my life was without past or future... but a little word from the fingers of another fell into my hand that clutched at emptiness, and my heart leaped to the rapture of living.
Helen Keller
October 26th, 2017 22:33
FredPeyer said:
Ah well, Sandra, I figured I might as well read all three of your poems.
Again, like the two others, I do like this poem because it is so well written. You wrote about being blind and deaf, so let me conclude with a quote by Helen Keller:
Once I knew only darkness and stillness... my life was without past or future... but a little word from the fingers of another fell into my hand that clutched at emptiness, and my heart leaped to the rapture of living.
Helen Keller
October 26th, 2017 22:33
I Know
FredPeyer said:
Sandra, after reading \'Heartache\' I checked your page and found this older poem.
I do like your straight forward, kind of minimalist style of writing. You have that rare capability to express a lot with only a few words. Kudos!
October 26th, 2017 22:27
FredPeyer said:
Sandra, after reading \'Heartache\' I checked your page and found this older poem.
I do like your straight forward, kind of minimalist style of writing. You have that rare capability to express a lot with only a few words. Kudos!
October 26th, 2017 22:27
Heartache Has a Name
FredPeyer said:
Sandra, I do like your poem. Even though it is sad, it is so well written, expressing the whole gamut of emotions created by a broken love in just a few short sentences.
And btw, since I live on an island, I think I do have a few life rings around somewhere, could try to throw you one! :-)
October 26th, 2017 22:24
FredPeyer said:
Sandra, I do like your poem. Even though it is sad, it is so well written, expressing the whole gamut of emotions created by a broken love in just a few short sentences.
And btw, since I live on an island, I think I do have a few life rings around somewhere, could try to throw you one! :-)
October 26th, 2017 22:24
Deaf and Blind
Yorke said:
Excellent descriptions, I love how direct this piece is, a sense of acceptance. Much enjoyed.
November 15th, 2015 15:23
Yorke said:
Excellent descriptions, I love how direct this piece is, a sense of acceptance. Much enjoyed.
November 15th, 2015 15:23
