Comments received on poems by MysteryGhost
Solitude
hzugman said:
Nice poem about the unthinkable. Sea life will probably survive and perhaps make another journey to land eventually - or maybe not.
April 24th, 2023 12:38
hzugman said:
Nice poem about the unthinkable. Sea life will probably survive and perhaps make another journey to land eventually - or maybe not.
April 24th, 2023 12:38
The City
Neville said:
I guess it pays to keep one\'s eyes open in the city .. otherwise, just look at what one might miss .. Enjoy the break .. Neville
April 6th, 2023 08:39
Neville said:
I guess it pays to keep one\'s eyes open in the city .. otherwise, just look at what one might miss .. Enjoy the break .. Neville
April 6th, 2023 08:39
A Poem About Spring
Micalina said:
I like your poem when you describe the death of the patient and the comparison to the young boys basketball. It is very real and from the heart. The ending was happy metaphorically speaking when the ball gets into the hoop. great poem all the best Micalina
April 6th, 2023 08:37
Micalina said:
I like your poem when you describe the death of the patient and the comparison to the young boys basketball. It is very real and from the heart. The ending was happy metaphorically speaking when the ball gets into the hoop. great poem all the best Micalina
April 6th, 2023 08:37
A Poem About Spring
Neville said:
a fine, but clearly very sad observation on what might otherwise be, just another sunny spring day .. 🖤
April 6th, 2023 08:32
Neville said:
a fine, but clearly very sad observation on what might otherwise be, just another sunny spring day .. 🖤
April 6th, 2023 08:32
The City
Rocky Lagou said:
Such a thoughtful poem, truly represents the times we\'re living in.
April 6th, 2023 08:29
Rocky Lagou said:
Such a thoughtful poem, truly represents the times we\'re living in.
April 6th, 2023 08:29
The City
MysteryGhost said:
Tune in Wednesday after next at 10:00 PM GMT for the next poem!
April 6th, 2023 07:43
MysteryGhost said:
Tune in Wednesday after next at 10:00 PM GMT for the next poem!
April 6th, 2023 07:43
A Poem About Spring
MendedFences27 said:
Outside it is a sunny springtime day with children playing. Inside the hospital the mood is dark and grim as a man lies dying. A great contrast and ending. enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
April 5th, 2023 15:20
MendedFences27 said:
Outside it is a sunny springtime day with children playing. Inside the hospital the mood is dark and grim as a man lies dying. A great contrast and ending. enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
April 5th, 2023 15:20
A Poem About Spring
sorenbarrett said:
A great pairing of elements and the metaphor of the children\'s last cfhance for warm weather makes a lot of sense. It ends well with the ball through the hoop. It can mean the end of the game either way but it is positive in that points are scored. Well done
April 5th, 2023 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
A great pairing of elements and the metaphor of the children\'s last cfhance for warm weather makes a lot of sense. It ends well with the ball through the hoop. It can mean the end of the game either way but it is positive in that points are scored. Well done
April 5th, 2023 09:23
