Comments received on poems by Keith Jeffries
The Tide of Minimalism
2781 said:
I know a girl, doing a masters in architecture.
Top marks for designing a dwelling without a kitchen, Another for creating a space that resembles a vagina.
Apparently the enemy is the nuclear family, whatever that is?
May 26th, 2023 16:47
2781 said:
I know a girl, doing a masters in architecture.
Top marks for designing a dwelling without a kitchen, Another for creating a space that resembles a vagina.
Apparently the enemy is the nuclear family, whatever that is?
May 26th, 2023 16:47
Charing Cross Station
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
I used to work on trains, and indeed
this beautiful love song to
our much maligned Blighty
\'brings back fond memories\'
thank you for sharing, dear poet
May 19th, 2023 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
I used to work on trains, and indeed
this beautiful love song to
our much maligned Blighty
\'brings back fond memories\'
thank you for sharing, dear poet
May 19th, 2023 03:32
Faces in Shadows
Bobby O said:
Really nice. “Purposeful gait of intent”
“Welcome the night delay”
What a cool way to evoke mood and motion bringing me to that point of the Eve. You have nice talent and an ability to combine phrase in a way I wish I could.
May 16th, 2023 14:12
Bobby O said:
Really nice. “Purposeful gait of intent”
“Welcome the night delay”
What a cool way to evoke mood and motion bringing me to that point of the Eve. You have nice talent and an ability to combine phrase in a way I wish I could.
May 16th, 2023 14:12
Tenuous
Bobby O said:
No matter what. It seems to say don’t hide emotion and take the present as precious as the future is not assured. I like it
May 9th, 2023 23:22
Bobby O said:
No matter what. It seems to say don’t hide emotion and take the present as precious as the future is not assured. I like it
May 9th, 2023 23:22
