Comments received on poems by Keith Jeffries
Bleeding Hands
Keith Jeffries said:
Thank you. I have friends in East Jerusalem with whom I am in daily contact. They live in constant fear.
March 7th, 2024 22:04
Keith Jeffries said:
Thank you. I have friends in East Jerusalem with whom I am in daily contact. They live in constant fear.
March 7th, 2024 22:04
Bleeding Hands
Parisab said:
Very sensitive and sincere write! I can see that you empathize with the victim of war’s trauma and loss, as a journalist re riding the event …
March 7th, 2024 11:18
Parisab said:
Very sensitive and sincere write! I can see that you empathize with the victim of war’s trauma and loss, as a journalist re riding the event …
March 7th, 2024 11:18
A Boy from another Gaza
Doggerel Dave said:
Born 1941 East End of London - the Anderson shelter - I slept there. Nothing more to add.
Good work.
February 7th, 2024 21:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Born 1941 East End of London - the Anderson shelter - I slept there. Nothing more to add.
Good work.
February 7th, 2024 21:39
A Boy from another Gaza
Lorenz said:
Memory of those oceans where no ships casts ink any more ...
February 7th, 2024 15:23
Lorenz said:
Memory of those oceans where no ships casts ink any more ...
February 7th, 2024 15:23
Leafy Warwickshire
Keith Jeffries said:
Soman, Thank you indeed for your comment and also for information concerning your book on Shakespeare. I shall take note of this. Keith
February 7th, 2024 04:03
Keith Jeffries said:
Soman, Thank you indeed for your comment and also for information concerning your book on Shakespeare. I shall take note of this. Keith
February 7th, 2024 04:03
Leafy Warwickshire
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Leafy Warwickshire” by Keith Jeffries
As you mention Shakespeare in your poem, do read my poem : “Jabbing Shakespeare” on this site. Here is the link :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-173423
Soman Ragavan. 7 February, 2024.
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February 6th, 2024 19:39
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Leafy Warwickshire” by Keith Jeffries
As you mention Shakespeare in your poem, do read my poem : “Jabbing Shakespeare” on this site. Here is the link :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-173423
Soman Ragavan. 7 February, 2024.
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February 6th, 2024 19:39
Poets Speak Out
Doggerel Dave said:
Some can be........not sure all are......
Like your style.
September 20th, 2023 17:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Some can be........not sure all are......
Like your style.
September 20th, 2023 17:30
Charing Cross Station
Doggerel Dave said:
Bought back some ancient memories of my homeland and stamping ground...and some slightly more recent memories related to return visits. Thanks. Nostalgia ain\'t wot it used to be......
September 20th, 2023 17:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Bought back some ancient memories of my homeland and stamping ground...and some slightly more recent memories related to return visits. Thanks. Nostalgia ain\'t wot it used to be......
September 20th, 2023 17:27
Our Greatest Enemy
Doggerel Dave said:
Worth a second, third or so read. I must keep this short, otherwise I will slip into a rant (apathy rules at MPS, I fear except for some small isolated pockets).
You have the crux of the problem clearly laid out in smooth verse.
I\'m away to find out what else you have here. In the meantime keep \'em coming.
September 20th, 2023 17:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Worth a second, third or so read. I must keep this short, otherwise I will slip into a rant (apathy rules at MPS, I fear except for some small isolated pockets).
You have the crux of the problem clearly laid out in smooth verse.
I\'m away to find out what else you have here. In the meantime keep \'em coming.
September 20th, 2023 17:16
The Tide of Minimalism
2781 said:
I know a girl, doing a masters in architecture.
Top marks for designing a dwelling without a kitchen, Another for creating a space that resembles a vagina.
Apparently the enemy is the nuclear family, whatever that is?
May 26th, 2023 16:47
2781 said:
I know a girl, doing a masters in architecture.
Top marks for designing a dwelling without a kitchen, Another for creating a space that resembles a vagina.
Apparently the enemy is the nuclear family, whatever that is?
May 26th, 2023 16:47
Charing Cross Station
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
I used to work on trains, and indeed
this beautiful love song to
our much maligned Blighty
\'brings back fond memories\'
thank you for sharing, dear poet
May 19th, 2023 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
I used to work on trains, and indeed
this beautiful love song to
our much maligned Blighty
\'brings back fond memories\'
thank you for sharing, dear poet
May 19th, 2023 03:32
Faces in Shadows
Bobby O said:
Really nice. “Purposeful gait of intent”
“Welcome the night delay”
What a cool way to evoke mood and motion bringing me to that point of the Eve. You have nice talent and an ability to combine phrase in a way I wish I could.
May 16th, 2023 14:12
Bobby O said:
Really nice. “Purposeful gait of intent”
“Welcome the night delay”
What a cool way to evoke mood and motion bringing me to that point of the Eve. You have nice talent and an ability to combine phrase in a way I wish I could.
May 16th, 2023 14:12
Tenuous
Bobby O said:
No matter what. It seems to say don’t hide emotion and take the present as precious as the future is not assured. I like it
May 9th, 2023 23:22
Bobby O said:
No matter what. It seems to say don’t hide emotion and take the present as precious as the future is not assured. I like it
May 9th, 2023 23:22
