Comments received on poems by Keith Jeffries

The Tide of Minimalism
2781 said:

I know a girl, doing a masters in architecture.
Top marks for designing a dwelling without a kitchen, Another for creating a space that resembles a vagina.
Apparently the enemy is the nuclear family, whatever that is?

May 26th, 2023 16:47

Charing Cross Station
L. B. Mek said:

I used to work on trains, and indeed
this beautiful love song to
our much maligned Blighty
\'brings back fond memories\'
thank you for sharing, dear poet

May 19th, 2023 03:32

Faces in Shadows
Bobby O said:

Really nice. “Purposeful gait of intent”
“Welcome the night delay”
What a cool way to evoke mood and motion bringing me to that point of the Eve. You have nice talent and an ability to combine phrase in a way I wish I could.

May 16th, 2023 14:12

Bobby O said:

No matter what. It seems to say don’t hide emotion and take the present as precious as the future is not assured. I like it

May 9th, 2023 23:22