Miles to go
Poetic Licence said:

Very relatable write over the fear of the future and what is to come and in turn that effects our decision making process, nicely expressed and written

April 8th, 2025 10:50

Miles to go
Mourgana of the Fey said:

Hello,

This is a reflective insightful poem on the human condition and existentialism. There are a few moments where there was perhaps a struggle taking place. Be it an inner or outer struggle or both. This is often innate to us as humans. You are brave to write a confessional poem. Greetings and blessings,
R

April 8th, 2025 09:48

Falling Down
sorenbarrett said:

Love metaphors and this is definitely one. The cave could be many things (darkness, mystery, a birth canal, transformation, protection) the flame (spiritual awakening, passion, cleansing, purification) I take it that the author was in transformation of passion but this went out and even in knowledge of this (light) it is not regained either due to fear or loss of heart. Very nicely felt.

March 8th, 2025 09:12

Lessons Learned
sorenbarrett said:

The hard knocks of experience sometime teach us best. Nicely done

August 25th, 2024 10:46

Knowing vs Not Knowing
sorenbarrett said:

Deeply philosophical it speaks to the unknown through the known. Well done

July 29th, 2024 15:39

The Answer I Received
John said:

Great poem....I really like your first paragraph, I presume it\'s about something you studied or read, but I took it in a different way, about a relationship,it really resonated with me, thanks for your words

January 28th, 2024 10:26