Comments received on poems by _jyotsna27
Falling Down
sorenbarrett said:
Love metaphors and this is definitely one. The cave could be many things (darkness, mystery, a birth canal, transformation, protection) the flame (spiritual awakening, passion, cleansing, purification) I take it that the author was in transformation of passion but this went out and even in knowledge of this (light) it is not regained either due to fear or loss of heart. Very nicely felt.
March 8th, 2025 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
Love metaphors and this is definitely one. The cave could be many things (darkness, mystery, a birth canal, transformation, protection) the flame (spiritual awakening, passion, cleansing, purification) I take it that the author was in transformation of passion but this went out and even in knowledge of this (light) it is not regained either due to fear or loss of heart. Very nicely felt.
March 8th, 2025 09:12
Randomness
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes to much thought is a bad thing and to be random is better, enjoyed the read
January 11th, 2025 06:33
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes to much thought is a bad thing and to be random is better, enjoyed the read
January 11th, 2025 06:33
Lessons Learned
sorenbarrett said:
The hard knocks of experience sometime teach us best. Nicely done
August 25th, 2024 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
The hard knocks of experience sometime teach us best. Nicely done
August 25th, 2024 10:46
Knowing vs Not Knowing
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical it speaks to the unknown through the known. Well done
July 29th, 2024 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical it speaks to the unknown through the known. Well done
July 29th, 2024 15:39
The Answer I Received
John said:
Great poem....I really like your first paragraph, I presume it\'s about something you studied or read, but I took it in a different way, about a relationship,it really resonated with me, thanks for your words
January 28th, 2024 10:26
John said:
Great poem....I really like your first paragraph, I presume it\'s about something you studied or read, but I took it in a different way, about a relationship,it really resonated with me, thanks for your words
January 28th, 2024 10:26