Comments received on poems by Shahla Latifi
Life
peto said:
This got me thinking
A challenge for most I guess
Can only speak for myself
Got to say compared to the alternative I\'d take it all day long
Enjoyed the read
February 1st, 2024 21:18
peto said:
This got me thinking
A challenge for most I guess
Can only speak for myself
Got to say compared to the alternative I\'d take it all day long
Enjoyed the read
February 1st, 2024 21:18
Time
2781 said:
Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about its own things. Sufficient for the day is its own trouble.
January 9th, 2024 23:39
2781 said:
Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about its own things. Sufficient for the day is its own trouble.
January 9th, 2024 23:39
My Own Shadow
Doggerel Dave said:
😀 Although the title was a give-away, your last line came as a surprise which I found funny in its truth. Thanks.
November 29th, 2023 18:35
Doggerel Dave said:
😀 Although the title was a give-away, your last line came as a surprise which I found funny in its truth. Thanks.
November 29th, 2023 18:35
Wild Things
Neville said:
\'Wild Things\' proved to be a most enjoyable introduction to your ink my friend .. I am glad I took to wandering around the pages of MPS this very early English morning .. All Good Things, Neville
February 4th, 2023 02:48
Neville said:
\'Wild Things\' proved to be a most enjoyable introduction to your ink my friend .. I am glad I took to wandering around the pages of MPS this very early English morning .. All Good Things, Neville
February 4th, 2023 02:48
If You Want Me
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow!! Dear poet can I use your poem in an excerpt in one of my writings?
Great work I love it 😍
January 31st, 2023 08:14
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow!! Dear poet can I use your poem in an excerpt in one of my writings?
Great work I love it 😍
January 31st, 2023 08:14
Glowing Light
L. B. Mek said:
\'The things that give me a feeling of fulfilment;
Like dancing with myself in harmony with my own\'
(wonderfully empowering words
dear poet, thanks for sharing
may I recommend you check out
the song \'Private Party\'
by the wise India Arie
from where this chorus lines
I borrowed:)
\'\'I\'m having a private party
Ain\'t nobody here but me, my angels, and my guitar, singin\'
\"Baby, look how far we\'ve come, yeah\"
I\'m havin\' a private party
Learning how to love me
Celebrating the woman I\'ve become, yeah\'\'
January 27th, 2023 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'The things that give me a feeling of fulfilment;
Like dancing with myself in harmony with my own\'
(wonderfully empowering words
dear poet, thanks for sharing
may I recommend you check out
the song \'Private Party\'
by the wise India Arie
from where this chorus lines
I borrowed:)
\'\'I\'m having a private party
Ain\'t nobody here but me, my angels, and my guitar, singin\'
\"Baby, look how far we\'ve come, yeah\"
I\'m havin\' a private party
Learning how to love me
Celebrating the woman I\'ve become, yeah\'\'
January 27th, 2023 04:49
Broken
rrodriguez said:
Shahla, the poem is finely written, but the tone is so somber. Please tell me is not you that\'s broken...
February 20th, 2022 11:54
rrodriguez said:
Shahla, the poem is finely written, but the tone is so somber. Please tell me is not you that\'s broken...
February 20th, 2022 11:54
Broken
Buzz Bray said:
Being broken is the most profound pain. I wish you healing in the new year.
January 3rd, 2022 11:20
Buzz Bray said:
Being broken is the most profound pain. I wish you healing in the new year.
January 3rd, 2022 11:20
Empty of Love
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is well writtrn but very sad..be careful about manifesting things by vocalizing. Or writing them beforehand..never worry about passing or what it may do to another..people need to get over themselvess when others pass on..it is a celebration time not a.sorrow ...it means we have come to end of a very difficult journey and that we now have the opportunity to ascend to a higjer frequency and thus have a better existence.energy never dies..it just changes form...nice work
March 1st, 2020 18:05
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is well writtrn but very sad..be careful about manifesting things by vocalizing. Or writing them beforehand..never worry about passing or what it may do to another..people need to get over themselvess when others pass on..it is a celebration time not a.sorrow ...it means we have come to end of a very difficult journey and that we now have the opportunity to ascend to a higjer frequency and thus have a better existence.energy never dies..it just changes form...nice work
March 1st, 2020 18:05
Empty of Love
dusk arising said:
A very moving piece from you. Is this the sadness held deep within one in a loveless relationship.
Beautifully written.
March 1st, 2020 13:17
dusk arising said:
A very moving piece from you. Is this the sadness held deep within one in a loveless relationship.
Beautifully written.
March 1st, 2020 13:17
Building my Self-Discipline
rrodriguez said:
You\'re an awesome woman and you have a story to share. You have the book in you....
January 10th, 2020 14:01
rrodriguez said:
You\'re an awesome woman and you have a story to share. You have the book in you....
January 10th, 2020 14:01
Strange Curiosity
dusk arising said:
You are right to look to where you see freedom and beauty for those are wholesome values which will hopefully bring forth the chance of enlightenment.
Lovely style in your writing.
October 1st, 2019 15:03
dusk arising said:
You are right to look to where you see freedom and beauty for those are wholesome values which will hopefully bring forth the chance of enlightenment.
Lovely style in your writing.
October 1st, 2019 15:03
Strange Curiosity
Laura🌻 said:
Shahla,
Wow!!
An exceptional poem!
The last stanza says it all!
~Laura~
October 1st, 2019 11:43
Laura🌻 said:
Shahla,
Wow!!
An exceptional poem!
The last stanza says it all!
~Laura~
October 1st, 2019 11:43
Red Lipstick
sylviasearcher said:
It felt like a woman growing and rising into her own skin. Great narrative piece
August 21st, 2019 04:07
sylviasearcher said:
It felt like a woman growing and rising into her own skin. Great narrative piece
August 21st, 2019 04:07
Red Lipstick
Neville said:
I really enjoyed this my friend and truly.......... write on.. Neville
August 21st, 2019 03:28
Neville said:
I really enjoyed this my friend and truly.......... write on.. Neville
August 21st, 2019 03:28
Inner Light
Laura🌻 said:
It’s your ‘strength’...
It’s your ‘wisdom’...
It’s that ‘inner-light within’ you that will set you free...
and ‘unwanted greed’ be damned!
An inspirational and thought provoking write!
Excellent!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 14:50
Laura🌻 said:
It’s your ‘strength’...
It’s your ‘wisdom’...
It’s that ‘inner-light within’ you that will set you free...
and ‘unwanted greed’ be damned!
An inspirational and thought provoking write!
Excellent!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 14:50
My Imagination
rrodriguez said:
The imagery is stupendous and the flow, magnificent. Excellent write...
February 9th, 2019 12:52
rrodriguez said:
The imagery is stupendous and the flow, magnificent. Excellent write...
February 9th, 2019 12:52
Uncaring Touch
Goldfinch60 said:
May your words comfort you as your sorrow and anger spill onto the page.
January 2nd, 2019 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
May your words comfort you as your sorrow and anger spill onto the page.
January 2nd, 2019 01:47
Uncaring Touch
Shahla Latifi said:
Dear Neville,
I accepted your friendly hug, and your thoughtfulness is beautiful.
January 1st, 2019 21:13
Shahla Latifi said:
Dear Neville,
I accepted your friendly hug, and your thoughtfulness is beautiful.
January 1st, 2019 21:13
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