Comments received on poems by Shahla Latifi



Apple Orchard
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

This is a perfect LOVE POEM ~ SHAHLA ~ I trust and pray it is directed to someone in love with you ~ who deserves such sentiments. If not direct them to me ! Love BRIAN

September 25th, 2016 11:45

Apple Orchard
Tony36 said:

Great poem

September 25th, 2016 09:22

Apple Orchard
Augustus said:

Delightful.

September 25th, 2016 09:12

Currents Of Unfairness
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

September 17th, 2016 19:07

Currents Of Unfairness
Augustus said:

There are so many places in the world where women are mistreated, not respected, abused, etc. what is it about man that treats the fairer sex this way? Hugs.

September 17th, 2016 11:49

Raw Pleasure
Jeff said:

....I'm just going to say this is a great poem....VERY well written. Excellent job

September 14th, 2016 13:37

Raw Pleasure
Emile Dubois said:

A voyage into the sensuous, a sigh in anticipation. I could almost feel a pulsing heart. The imagery of a hummingbird is divine, yet the essence is indeed unrestrained raw pleasure. Amazing

September 14th, 2016 13:32

A Refugee Child
lysistrata said:

I find interesting your approach.
I adore the Photo-«Faces of Afghanistan», Peshawar, Pakistan- Afghan refugee by Steve McCurry.
I am currently crafting a Villanelle on the Same subject matter...
I am looking forward to your opinion... 😯



September 2nd, 2016 12:48

Transparent
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SHAHLA ~ for another perfect and pertinent poem. TRANSPARENCY is a beautiful trait ~ I guess you have nothing to hide. Love all the similes ! Crystal vase (elegant) ~ moonlight (gentle) ~ child's giggle (infectious) ~ wish (full of promise). Whenever I date a TRANSPARENT LADY ~ I'm never disappointed because what I SAW ~ I GOT ! YOURS ~ BRIAN Could you please check my latest poem INNOCENCE (another great trait !).

August 27th, 2016 03:16

Glory Of Lights
rrodriguez said:

Now this is beautiful. Personification and imagery in its best form.

July 31st, 2016 18:22

Restricted Traditional Afghan Society
rrodriguez said:

Bad situation!

July 31st, 2016 18:20

Raw Pleasure
rrodriguez said:

I can sense the passion in your poem. Steamy and enthralling in sensuality. Well written and melodic. I dove into it "in the majestic moment of relief. "

July 31st, 2016 18:17

Demands Of Sanity
rrodriguez said:

Very well written and very expressive. Take out the s in releases.

July 31st, 2016 18:11

Memories
rrodriguez said:

Memories good or bad buried in our minds. we all have them. I liked your poem.

July 31st, 2016 18:05

A Grand Poem
rrodriguez said:

Wow! What a command of the English language.

July 31st, 2016 17:58

The Heart Of Humanity
rrodriguez said:

I too have hope for humanity. I enjoyed your poem's yearning for a better state in life.

July 31st, 2016 14:24

Peace
rrodriguez said:

Awesome poem! I believe that peace must reign in the world.

July 31st, 2016 10:34

Surreal Reality
Tony36 said:

Love it

July 15th, 2016 15:14

Surreal Reality
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing SHALA. Love the structure of the poem and its message "Age doesn't define me"' I'm only one-third through my life but even people my age (33) are already age conscious and have lost their sparkle and libido ~ shame on them. In my experience those who are age conscious are old before their time. I have a great list of "things to do" most of which i should have done in my 20's ~ BUT ~ like you "Age doesn't define me". Yours BRIAN

July 15th, 2016 14:46

The Heart Of Humanity
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS SHAHLA ~ For a poem (in these gloomy times) that bursts with optimism and hope ! Each new stanza begins with I BELIEVE and that makes a powerful statement because it encourages ME to believe as well ! In love ~ goodness ~ returning strength ~ that children can smile once again ~ the morality of life ~ Is going to find its way to the heart of humanity ~ without boundary ! You are lovely for sharing this ~ I pray that all who read it will catch your positive vibes ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

July 1st, 2016 17:53

Age
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SHAHLA for a beautiful age-defying tribute to BIRTHDAYS ! I'll be 33 this year so I'm about one third through my life. As your poem suggests each "age" brings new horizons ~ new hope ~ new possibilities. Love the pensiveness and hope for the future in your lovely photo ~ thanks for sharing that ! Men don't mind being 30+ because that is when we grow up and we are in our prime from 30 to ? ! Thanks for carin' an' sharin' . Happy Birthday to a lovely lady ~ Love BRIAN X

June 16th, 2016 04:23

Raw Pleasure
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

PERFECT LOVE POEM SHAHLA - Rhythmic sensuality awesome imagery ! Swaying - trembling - smiling - tasting - feeling - consuming - touching - caressing - whispering - satisfying - BEAUTIFUL All the sensations we feel when we are truly loved and in love ! Thank you for sharing - BRIAN

May 23rd, 2016 04:35

Raw Pleasure
Samabama2324 said:

I absolutely love this poem! Fantastic imagery!

May 22nd, 2016 15:20

Women’s Rights in Afghanistan
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI SHAHLA - Lovve you list and all the points you make about WOMEN'S RIGHTS. The USA and the UK (where I live) are not PERFECT places for Ladies to live but we do our best. We do pray for Afghanistan - for peace and especially for equal rights for Ladies. Every blessing BRIAN

April 30th, 2016 11:18

Wings Of A Book
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:

Yes, beautiful.

With love
- M Karimy

February 24th, 2016 02:23

Girls Education Problem In Afghanistan
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:

it is very difficult to unravel the problem of education for girls in afghanistan. we all know about how they divested in knowledge and education.

With love,
M Karimy

February 24th, 2016 02:13

Light Of Wisdom
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:

Fantastic !

With love,
M karimy

February 24th, 2016 01:55

Love Is Kindness
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:

life without love is like a rose without its aroma.
Great poem as always dear Mrs. Latifi.

With love,
Milad Karimy

February 24th, 2016 01:52

When You Are A Mother
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:

and I am the only one son of my kind mother and I know how she is compassion. I cannot execute the rights which my mother has on me as much more I attempt I can't, therefor I can pray for my mother and ask from my almighty Allah to settle her in paradise (Janat).

February 21st, 2016 22:53

Short Poems-3
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:

Great !!! Mrs Shahla

February 21st, 2016 12:21

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