Comments received on poems by Shahla Latifi
Transparent
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHAHLA ~ for another perfect and pertinent poem. TRANSPARENCY is a beautiful trait ~ I guess you have nothing to hide. Love all the similes ! Crystal vase (elegant) ~ moonlight (gentle) ~ child's giggle (infectious) ~ wish (full of promise). Whenever I date a TRANSPARENT LADY ~ I'm never disappointed because what I SAW ~ I GOT ! YOURS ~ BRIAN Could you please check my latest poem INNOCENCE (another great trait !).
August 27th, 2016 03:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHAHLA ~ for another perfect and pertinent poem. TRANSPARENCY is a beautiful trait ~ I guess you have nothing to hide. Love all the similes ! Crystal vase (elegant) ~ moonlight (gentle) ~ child's giggle (infectious) ~ wish (full of promise). Whenever I date a TRANSPARENT LADY ~ I'm never disappointed because what I SAW ~ I GOT ! YOURS ~ BRIAN Could you please check my latest poem INNOCENCE (another great trait !).
August 27th, 2016 03:16
Glory Of Lights
rrodriguez said:
Now this is beautiful. Personification and imagery in its best form.
July 31st, 2016 18:22
rrodriguez said:
Now this is beautiful. Personification and imagery in its best form.
July 31st, 2016 18:22
Raw Pleasure
rrodriguez said:
I can sense the passion in your poem. Steamy and enthralling in sensuality. Well written and melodic. I dove into it "in the majestic moment of relief. "
July 31st, 2016 18:17
rrodriguez said:
I can sense the passion in your poem. Steamy and enthralling in sensuality. Well written and melodic. I dove into it "in the majestic moment of relief. "
July 31st, 2016 18:17
Demands Of Sanity
rrodriguez said:
Very well written and very expressive. Take out the s in releases.
July 31st, 2016 18:11
rrodriguez said:
Very well written and very expressive. Take out the s in releases.
July 31st, 2016 18:11
Memories
rrodriguez said:
Memories good or bad buried in our minds. we all have them. I liked your poem.
July 31st, 2016 18:05
rrodriguez said:
Memories good or bad buried in our minds. we all have them. I liked your poem.
July 31st, 2016 18:05
The Heart Of Humanity
rrodriguez said:
I too have hope for humanity. I enjoyed your poem's yearning for a better state in life.
July 31st, 2016 14:24
rrodriguez said:
I too have hope for humanity. I enjoyed your poem's yearning for a better state in life.
July 31st, 2016 14:24
Peace
rrodriguez said:
Awesome poem! I believe that peace must reign in the world.
July 31st, 2016 10:34
rrodriguez said:
Awesome poem! I believe that peace must reign in the world.
July 31st, 2016 10:34
Surreal Reality
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing SHALA. Love the structure of the poem and its message "Age doesn't define me"' I'm only one-third through my life but even people my age (33) are already age conscious and have lost their sparkle and libido ~ shame on them. In my experience those who are age conscious are old before their time. I have a great list of "things to do" most of which i should have done in my 20's ~ BUT ~ like you "Age doesn't define me". Yours BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 14:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing SHALA. Love the structure of the poem and its message "Age doesn't define me"' I'm only one-third through my life but even people my age (33) are already age conscious and have lost their sparkle and libido ~ shame on them. In my experience those who are age conscious are old before their time. I have a great list of "things to do" most of which i should have done in my 20's ~ BUT ~ like you "Age doesn't define me". Yours BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 14:46
The Heart Of Humanity
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SHAHLA ~ For a poem (in these gloomy times) that bursts with optimism and hope ! Each new stanza begins with I BELIEVE and that makes a powerful statement because it encourages ME to believe as well ! In love ~ goodness ~ returning strength ~ that children can smile once again ~ the morality of life ~ Is going to find its way to the heart of humanity ~ without boundary ! You are lovely for sharing this ~ I pray that all who read it will catch your positive vibes ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 1st, 2016 17:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SHAHLA ~ For a poem (in these gloomy times) that bursts with optimism and hope ! Each new stanza begins with I BELIEVE and that makes a powerful statement because it encourages ME to believe as well ! In love ~ goodness ~ returning strength ~ that children can smile once again ~ the morality of life ~ Is going to find its way to the heart of humanity ~ without boundary ! You are lovely for sharing this ~ I pray that all who read it will catch your positive vibes ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 1st, 2016 17:53
Age
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHAHLA for a beautiful age-defying tribute to BIRTHDAYS ! I'll be 33 this year so I'm about one third through my life. As your poem suggests each "age" brings new horizons ~ new hope ~ new possibilities. Love the pensiveness and hope for the future in your lovely photo ~ thanks for sharing that ! Men don't mind being 30+ because that is when we grow up and we are in our prime from 30 to ? ! Thanks for carin' an' sharin' . Happy Birthday to a lovely lady ~ Love BRIAN X
June 16th, 2016 04:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHAHLA for a beautiful age-defying tribute to BIRTHDAYS ! I'll be 33 this year so I'm about one third through my life. As your poem suggests each "age" brings new horizons ~ new hope ~ new possibilities. Love the pensiveness and hope for the future in your lovely photo ~ thanks for sharing that ! Men don't mind being 30+ because that is when we grow up and we are in our prime from 30 to ? ! Thanks for carin' an' sharin' . Happy Birthday to a lovely lady ~ Love BRIAN X
June 16th, 2016 04:23
Raw Pleasure
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
PERFECT LOVE POEM SHAHLA - Rhythmic sensuality awesome imagery ! Swaying - trembling - smiling - tasting - feeling - consuming - touching - caressing - whispering - satisfying - BEAUTIFUL All the sensations we feel when we are truly loved and in love ! Thank you for sharing - BRIAN
May 23rd, 2016 04:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
PERFECT LOVE POEM SHAHLA - Rhythmic sensuality awesome imagery ! Swaying - trembling - smiling - tasting - feeling - consuming - touching - caressing - whispering - satisfying - BEAUTIFUL All the sensations we feel when we are truly loved and in love ! Thank you for sharing - BRIAN
May 23rd, 2016 04:35
Women’s Rights in Afghanistan
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SHAHLA - Lovve you list and all the points you make about WOMEN'S RIGHTS. The USA and the UK (where I live) are not PERFECT places for Ladies to live but we do our best. We do pray for Afghanistan - for peace and especially for equal rights for Ladies. Every blessing BRIAN
April 30th, 2016 11:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SHAHLA - Lovve you list and all the points you make about WOMEN'S RIGHTS. The USA and the UK (where I live) are not PERFECT places for Ladies to live but we do our best. We do pray for Afghanistan - for peace and especially for equal rights for Ladies. Every blessing BRIAN
April 30th, 2016 11:18
Wings Of A Book
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:
Yes, beautiful.
With love
- M Karimy
February 24th, 2016 02:23
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:
Yes, beautiful.
With love
- M Karimy
February 24th, 2016 02:23
Girls Education Problem In Afghanistan
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:
it is very difficult to unravel the problem of education for girls in afghanistan. we all know about how they divested in knowledge and education.
With love,
M Karimy
February 24th, 2016 02:13
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:
it is very difficult to unravel the problem of education for girls in afghanistan. we all know about how they divested in knowledge and education.
With love,
M Karimy
February 24th, 2016 02:13
Light Of Wisdom
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:
Fantastic !
With love,
M karimy
February 24th, 2016 01:55
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:
Fantastic !
With love,
M karimy
February 24th, 2016 01:55
Love Is Kindness
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:
life without love is like a rose without its aroma.
Great poem as always dear Mrs. Latifi.
With love,
Milad Karimy
February 24th, 2016 01:52
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:
life without love is like a rose without its aroma.
Great poem as always dear Mrs. Latifi.
With love,
Milad Karimy
February 24th, 2016 01:52
When You Are A Mother
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:
and I am the only one son of my kind mother and I know how she is compassion. I cannot execute the rights which my mother has on me as much more I attempt I can't, therefor I can pray for my mother and ask from my almighty Allah to settle her in paradise (Janat).
February 21st, 2016 22:53
Mohammad Milad Karimy said:
and I am the only one son of my kind mother and I know how she is compassion. I cannot execute the rights which my mother has on me as much more I attempt I can't, therefor I can pray for my mother and ask from my almighty Allah to settle her in paradise (Janat).
February 21st, 2016 22:53
When You Are A Mother
mommabear28 said:
Im a mother of 3 boys so i know the feeling! Loved this!
January 25th, 2016 15:06
mommabear28 said:
Im a mother of 3 boys so i know the feeling! Loved this!
January 25th, 2016 15:06
Winter
Ken said:
Winter, like the other seasons, does play an important part in our life. Great work. :)
December 24th, 2015 23:19
Ken said:
Winter, like the other seasons, does play an important part in our life. Great work. :)
December 24th, 2015 23:19
Travelers of Life
Ken said:
You never cease to amaze me. Excellent work. :)
December 23rd, 2015 18:24
Ken said:
You never cease to amaze me. Excellent work. :)
December 23rd, 2015 18:24
Wings Of A Book
Ken said:
So beautiful. Delving into books allows us a brief reprieve from the demands of life. Another great work. Keep them coming. :)
December 22nd, 2015 22:41
Ken said:
So beautiful. Delving into books allows us a brief reprieve from the demands of life. Another great work. Keep them coming. :)
December 22nd, 2015 22:41
Broken Youth
Ken said:
We take life for granted so very often. Never realizing or accepting the hardships of others around the world. Thank you for this piece. Reality check accomplished.
December 22nd, 2015 02:09
Ken said:
We take life for granted so very often. Never realizing or accepting the hardships of others around the world. Thank you for this piece. Reality check accomplished.
December 22nd, 2015 02:09
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