Comments received on poems by somethingdeep
Apathy
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Apathy” by somethingdeep
There is no stopping the working of nature. With the onset of autumn, leaves prepare to die off. They give a beautiful sight, with their changing colours. When the last leaf gets blown away, the tree sure looks utterly bare, but it is not dead. It is winding down, hunkering, waiting for winter to blow over. Come spring, it will spring back to life. Winter grinned. It will reign for the time allotted to it. The tree stared at the evergreen and was somewhat jealous of it : how come those species remain green throughout winter ?... The snow would only leave when the time comes. The dancing leaves were not only lonely, but had a different fate : while the tree would resurrect in spring, the leaves will rot away and turn into compost for other trees.
Your profile page says : “…so I try to just focus on me, f f f focus on me….”
Your poetry is sure f f f flakking great…
Remember, we are Friends on this site. (Isn’t the English Language flakking great, too ?... The biggest vocabulary on earth, 600 000 words, and a language that accepts freely being played with… We will continue to invent new words even if Cowford Dictionaries object...)
Soman Ragavan. 1 September, 2023 //
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August 31st, 2023 20:40
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Apathy” by somethingdeep
There is no stopping the working of nature. With the onset of autumn, leaves prepare to die off. They give a beautiful sight, with their changing colours. When the last leaf gets blown away, the tree sure looks utterly bare, but it is not dead. It is winding down, hunkering, waiting for winter to blow over. Come spring, it will spring back to life. Winter grinned. It will reign for the time allotted to it. The tree stared at the evergreen and was somewhat jealous of it : how come those species remain green throughout winter ?... The snow would only leave when the time comes. The dancing leaves were not only lonely, but had a different fate : while the tree would resurrect in spring, the leaves will rot away and turn into compost for other trees.
Your profile page says : “…so I try to just focus on me, f f f focus on me….”
Your poetry is sure f f f flakking great…
Remember, we are Friends on this site. (Isn’t the English Language flakking great, too ?... The biggest vocabulary on earth, 600 000 words, and a language that accepts freely being played with… We will continue to invent new words even if Cowford Dictionaries object...)
Soman Ragavan. 1 September, 2023 //
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August 31st, 2023 20:40
you\'ll never be enough
arial said:
Its so so so beautiful...a well writtten one indeed
May 31st, 2023 21:54
arial said:
Its so so so beautiful...a well writtten one indeed
May 31st, 2023 21:54
Forgive Yourself
somethingdeep said:
idk about u, but I think that all poems should be read aloud. They just sound better that way.
May 29th, 2023 19:35
somethingdeep said:
idk about u, but I think that all poems should be read aloud. They just sound better that way.
May 29th, 2023 19:35
Hold Your Breath
somethingdeep said:
I hope you read that a little dramatically.
May 28th, 2023 09:34
somethingdeep said:
I hope you read that a little dramatically.
May 28th, 2023 09:34
Loveless
somethingdeep said:
when you feel empty no matter the love you\'re shown. Is it the love that isn\'t true? or it is beacause of you? I\'m not sure, maybe both.
May 26th, 2023 07:58
somethingdeep said:
when you feel empty no matter the love you\'re shown. Is it the love that isn\'t true? or it is beacause of you? I\'m not sure, maybe both.
May 26th, 2023 07:58
