Comments received on poems by Lanejamesc



Found Love Again
Lanejamesc said:



July 6th, 2017 01:35

Found Love Again
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, may your love abound in your life.

July 6th, 2017 01:31

Found Love Again
Louis Gibbs said:

Amazing how that can happen, isn\'t it? I like your fine poem, Lane!

July 5th, 2017 20:51

Found Love Again
burning-embers said:

Reads like you were thinking out loud and came to a right conclusion. When this is happening to you, you just know don\'t you. Even if a painful past makes u fight it. A delightful read.

July 5th, 2017 19:09

Found Love Again
Stephen.Sapaugh said:

Due to the content matter of this poem I won\'t be giving it a regular review. I like that that you are working through the deep seeded emotion of love that resides in all of us. It was once M.F.K Fisher that said about writing why she writes about food so much ,\" That there are only two things we can\'t live without food, and love.\" This reminds he of that. Glad you were able to deal with the emotions, and I hope you have found love like you have described, because without it we can easily perish.

July 5th, 2017 19:01

A Beautiful Smile
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

July 1st, 2017 00:55

A Beautiful Smile
FredPeyer said:

Beautiful poem. It can be very difficult if a friend at least in your mind becomes a little bit more than just a friend. Friendship and love is so closely related, sometimes the borders overlap. I do hope she reads it and you two can go on from there.

June 30th, 2017 17:01

A Beautiful Smile
Lanejamesc said:

Thank you

June 30th, 2017 15:44

To my daughter
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Bravo James
I am sure she is just as proud of you for having the courage to put all that love down on paper
Well done

March 11th, 2017 09:50

To my daughter
Tony36 said:

A wonderfully expressed tribute to your daughter

March 11th, 2017 08:16

To my daughter
Fay Slimm. said:

A daughter is special and this verse so filled with a father\'s love will delight the daughter for whom it is written. - A delightful read.


March 11th, 2017 06:24

Remember when Life was so simple
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write.

March 4th, 2017 05:12

Forgiveness
Lanejamesc said:

Got this poem published. Pretty cool for me. My first

January 14th, 2017 00:47

Forgiveness
michael h moore said:

Forgiveness is extremely powerful. Not least the forgiveness we give ourselves, thats if we have the strength and conviction to do it. I think the ability to forgive is a real blessing and is not shared by everyone. I think forgiveness is strongly associated with power of understanding. It is incredible just how our quantity of forgiveness increases as our understanding of people grows.

January 22nd, 2016 00:16

Forgiveness
Lanejamesc said:

As you can see I like to rhyme. Just getting back to writing. These not my best, but it's a start😊

January 21st, 2016 21:04

I will Always be a friend
Lanejamesc said:

As you can see I like to rhyme. Just getting back to writing. These not my best, but it's a start😊

January 21st, 2016 21:04