Missing the moment
Demar Desu said:

Great poem

October 26th, 2024 00:00

The beauty of the youth
Neilton said:

Amazing poem with great meaning!!

August 31st, 2024 02:20

Utopia
Olive Anderson said:

I like the timeline of your poem, from a conundrum to a solution. Truly the idea of \"opening your eyes\" is the action of stopping and observing the all that is around.

July 27th, 2024 03:29

A long way
G.Cabús said:

Beauty profound! a significant poem!
Thank you David!

November 19th, 2023 00:40

Searching
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

November 13th, 2023 09:19

Reunion
orchidee said:

A fine write D.

November 6th, 2023 02:52

Realized
Thomas W Case said:

I can relate. Excellent.

October 29th, 2023 04:54

Not easy
Thomas W Case said:

Nice work. Gave me a smile.

October 14th, 2023 01:19

In contact
L. B. Mek said:

purposed to empower and liberate
from self
I laud how you choose to use your art
thank you dear poet

September 22nd, 2023 06:05

Looking at the sky
L. B. Mek said:

such ease of flow and worded with accessibility as a priority
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing

September 11th, 2023 06:02

Friend support
Suetah said:

Love this! Wonderful words to express your true feelings. As I read this, I was thinking of my best friend - same story I\'d like to write, but I can\'t find the words yet. Yours are fantastic! Great job!!! :)

September 3rd, 2023 09:09

Adoptive parents
Bigguy said:

Very heartwarming!

August 16th, 2023 22:24

Close your eyes
David Wakeling said:

Happy is a good thing to be.Well done

July 12th, 2023 01:06