Comments received on poems by teardrop
My Dog Got Loose This Morning
TobaniNataiella said:
A very enjoyable read, nicely written, thank you
December 11th, 2024 05:31
TobaniNataiella said:
A very enjoyable read, nicely written, thank you
December 11th, 2024 05:31
My Dog Got Loose This Morning
rin said:
It was an event that will remain in your memories as well as your sadness.
December 11th, 2024 04:57
rin said:
It was an event that will remain in your memories as well as your sadness.
December 11th, 2024 04:57
The Gift
TobaniNataiella said:
Very nicely written and a great ending to the poem, hope he does not visit again
December 9th, 2024 03:47
TobaniNataiella said:
Very nicely written and a great ending to the poem, hope he does not visit again
December 9th, 2024 03:47
The Gift
Mutley Ravishes said:
Silky smooth flow to this rhyme.
By the way, I\'ve heard Death\'s favorite snack is \"identification.\"
December 9th, 2024 01:54
Mutley Ravishes said:
Silky smooth flow to this rhyme.
By the way, I\'ve heard Death\'s favorite snack is \"identification.\"
December 9th, 2024 01:54
The Gift
rin said:
I thought it was going to end as it did with a love poem, but I was surprised by the amazing dialogue expression.
December 9th, 2024 01:47
rin said:
I thought it was going to end as it did with a love poem, but I was surprised by the amazing dialogue expression.
December 9th, 2024 01:47
Shadows In The Dark
Lorenz said:
Your shadow is afraid of you.You have to tame it !
December 7th, 2024 14:42
Lorenz said:
Your shadow is afraid of you.You have to tame it !
December 7th, 2024 14:42
She Owns You
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of our own internal panic and anxiety. When we stop and take a good look, we see that it only comes from inside of us. Very nicely written with great rhyme and flow.
December 7th, 2024 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of our own internal panic and anxiety. When we stop and take a good look, we see that it only comes from inside of us. Very nicely written with great rhyme and flow.
December 7th, 2024 13:47
She Owns You
Cassie58 said:
Great rhythm, vivid imagery and a surprise ending in this dark tale. Very nicely penned teardrop. Well done.
December 7th, 2024 12:20
Cassie58 said:
Great rhythm, vivid imagery and a surprise ending in this dark tale. Very nicely penned teardrop. Well done.
December 7th, 2024 12:20
She Owns You
TobaniNataiella said:
A very cleverly written poem and enjoyable read, Thank you
December 7th, 2024 05:47
TobaniNataiella said:
A very cleverly written poem and enjoyable read, Thank you
December 7th, 2024 05:47
Shadows In The Dark
Neville said:
there are far too many lonely and sad people around aren\'t there .. and with eight point two billion people on the planet as of now, one must ask what on earth is going on .. having said that, I think these fine words of yours were simply crying out to be written & I applaud you teardrop .. a fine introduction to your ink ma\'am .. Neville 😎
December 6th, 2024 11:33
Neville said:
there are far too many lonely and sad people around aren\'t there .. and with eight point two billion people on the planet as of now, one must ask what on earth is going on .. having said that, I think these fine words of yours were simply crying out to be written & I applaud you teardrop .. a fine introduction to your ink ma\'am .. Neville 😎
December 6th, 2024 11:33
Shadows In The Dark
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor with great imagery. Many of us hide in the shadows and live under cloudy skies. This dreary sadness is not necessary and the sun is available to all. It shines on all creatures equally. What is a shadow in the morning maybe bright sun in the afternoon. A beautiful poem that has deep meaning
December 6th, 2024 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor with great imagery. Many of us hide in the shadows and live under cloudy skies. This dreary sadness is not necessary and the sun is available to all. It shines on all creatures equally. What is a shadow in the morning maybe bright sun in the afternoon. A beautiful poem that has deep meaning
December 6th, 2024 06:10
Shadows In The Dark
TobaniNataiella said:
Very nicely written touching a subject that many people are suffering behind closed doors, enjoyed the read
December 6th, 2024 00:39
TobaniNataiella said:
Very nicely written touching a subject that many people are suffering behind closed doors, enjoyed the read
December 6th, 2024 00:39
Shadows In The Dark
Cassie58 said:
Fear and loneliness are such a curse. Leads to isolation. Your stanzas are nicely composed with end rhyme. Pleased to meet you teardrop.
December 6th, 2024 00:21
Cassie58 said:
Fear and loneliness are such a curse. Leads to isolation. Your stanzas are nicely composed with end rhyme. Pleased to meet you teardrop.
December 6th, 2024 00:21
Shadows In The Dark
Mutley Ravishes said:
Fear,
Your sheer
Nerve in trying to frighten me!
I think Mr. Carl Jung might like your poem.
December 5th, 2024 22:03
Mutley Ravishes said:
Fear,
Your sheer
Nerve in trying to frighten me!
I think Mr. Carl Jung might like your poem.
December 5th, 2024 22:03
The Things I Don\'t Say
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, the things we don\'t say but we should. 🌹
December 2nd, 2024 14:38
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, the things we don\'t say but we should. 🌹
December 2nd, 2024 14:38
The Things I Don\'t Say
TobaniNataiella said:
This speaks volumes to me, i do exactly the same. Sadly people ask out of habit not that they really care, and you know if you told them exactly how you feel, they would never ask again. Hope things get better, take Care
December 1st, 2024 13:43
TobaniNataiella said:
This speaks volumes to me, i do exactly the same. Sadly people ask out of habit not that they really care, and you know if you told them exactly how you feel, they would never ask again. Hope things get better, take Care
December 1st, 2024 13:43
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