Comments received on poems by teardrop



No One Else Sees
Cassie58 said:

Nightmares. The demons come out at night and wreak their havoc . By first light they are gone. Monsters in the head. Nicely penned teardrop.

December 14th, 2024 16:02

No One Else Sees
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

December 14th, 2024 14:12

No One Else Sees
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh...I see it and can very much relate my friend! That said, you are right, no one else sees what is going inside us. πŸ’― That is why poetry like yours is so important...you are giving people a view and breaking the stigma! Thank you for this beautiful piece of poetic expression! Well done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 14th, 2024 10:56

No One Else Sees
Poetic Licence said:

I can totally connect with this well written poem, and the constant battle with the demons of the night, Thank you for the read

December 14th, 2024 06:11

No One Else Sees
Neville said:


I won\'t say a word but I\'m pretty sure I\'ve been there before too .. and so very often, felt the same thing .. Neville πŸ˜ŽπŸ’›πŸ‘

December 14th, 2024 04:09

No One Else Sees
Neville said:


I won\'t say a word but I\'m pretty sure I\'ve been there before too .. and so very often, felt the same thing .. Neville πŸ˜ŽπŸ’›πŸ‘

December 14th, 2024 04:09

You Are Not Him
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

December 13th, 2024 09:09

You Are Not Him
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Understood and...my friend...this is a beautiful poem. Wonderfully expressed! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 13th, 2024 08:33

You Are Not Him
2781 said:

I believe you will receive empathy.

December 13th, 2024 08:01

You Are Not Him
Poetic Licence said:

Quite a powerful to some person, well written, i can feel the sadness and frustration.

December 13th, 2024 07:56

You Are Not Him
Lorenz said:

A dark sensuality .

December 13th, 2024 06:22

She Owns You
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Stunning...I hope it manages to convey my thoughts...

December 12th, 2024 04:02

My Dog Got Loose This Morning
Mutley Ravishes said:

Groundhog Day?!
This rhyme flows so well.

December 11th, 2024 18:25

My Dog Got Loose This Morning
Doggerel Dave said:

It’s days like these…
I felt like the neighbour – I wasn’t staring, honestly….
A piece of realist poetry which told it just as it was. Great.





December 11th, 2024 15:19

My Dog Got Loose This Morning
Neville said:



This is brilliant .. told exactly as woz no doubt fucking brilliant I might add .. πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

December 11th, 2024 09:51

My Dog Got Loose This Morning
Cassie58 said:

Enjoyed reading you teardrop. Some days are best over quick, when they don’t go to plan.

December 11th, 2024 08:12

My Dog Got Loose This Morning
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderul piem teardrop. Really flows nicely! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 11th, 2024 06:30

My Dog Got Loose This Morning
Poetic Licence said:

A very enjoyable read, nicely written, thank you

December 11th, 2024 05:31

My Dog Got Loose This Morning
rin said:

It was an event that will remain in your memories as well as your sadness.

December 11th, 2024 04:57

The Gift
hzugman said:

Oops! Nice hook at the end.

December 9th, 2024 20:40

The Gift
Poetic Licence said:

Very nicely written and a great ending to the poem, hope he does not visit again

December 9th, 2024 03:47

The Gift
Mutley Ravishes said:

Silky smooth flow to this rhyme.
By the way, I\'ve heard Death\'s favorite snack is \"identification.\"

December 9th, 2024 01:54

The Gift
rin said:

I thought it was going to end as it did with a love poem, but I was surprised by the amazing dialogue expression.

December 9th, 2024 01:47

Shadows In The Dark
Lorenz said:

Your shadow is afraid of you.You have to tame it !

December 7th, 2024 14:42

She Owns You
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem of our own internal panic and anxiety. When we stop and take a good look, we see that it only comes from inside of us. Very nicely written with great rhyme and flow.

December 7th, 2024 13:47

She Owns You
Cassie58 said:

Great rhythm, vivid imagery and a surprise ending in this dark tale. Very nicely penned teardrop. Well done.

December 7th, 2024 12:20

She Owns You
Poetic Licence said:

A very cleverly written poem and enjoyable read, Thank you

December 7th, 2024 05:47

Shadows In The Dark
Neville said:



there are far too many lonely and sad people around aren\'t there .. and with eight point two billion people on the planet as of now, one must ask what on earth is going on .. having said that, I think these fine words of yours were simply crying out to be written & I applaud you teardrop .. a fine introduction to your ink ma\'am .. Neville 😎


December 6th, 2024 11:33

Shadows In The Dark
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful metaphor with great imagery. Many of us hide in the shadows and live under cloudy skies. This dreary sadness is not necessary and the sun is available to all. It shines on all creatures equally. What is a shadow in the morning maybe bright sun in the afternoon. A beautiful poem that has deep meaning

December 6th, 2024 06:10

Shadows In The Dark
Poetic Licence said:

Very nicely written touching a subject that many people are suffering behind closed doors, enjoyed the read

December 6th, 2024 00:39

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