Comments received on poems by Chris M 352
She’s Tired
sorenbarrett said:
Personification well used in this poem to mislead the reader until the last line. Nicely done
March 18th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Personification well used in this poem to mislead the reader until the last line. Nicely done
March 18th, 2025 04:19
She’s Tired
Poetic Licence said:
Depression and self loathing can be very tiring on a person and naturally they look to numb the pain any way they can, but it\'s not the answer. sad and touching write, well expressed, take Care
March 18th, 2025 03:26
Poetic Licence said:
Depression and self loathing can be very tiring on a person and naturally they look to numb the pain any way they can, but it\'s not the answer. sad and touching write, well expressed, take Care
March 18th, 2025 03:26
Fear
sorenbarrett said:
Full of melancholy this poem and sadness where we must carry ourselves with a brighter face. No tears allowed until night . Nicely done
March 15th, 2025 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
Full of melancholy this poem and sadness where we must carry ourselves with a brighter face. No tears allowed until night . Nicely done
March 15th, 2025 05:51
Fear
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write which a lot of people will relate to, during the day we wear the mask and pretend it\'s all alright, but when the night comes we battle with our demons, nicely expressed
March 15th, 2025 05:34
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write which a lot of people will relate to, during the day we wear the mask and pretend it\'s all alright, but when the night comes we battle with our demons, nicely expressed
March 15th, 2025 05:34
feeling like disappering
Tony36 said:
Take care
Be brave
Do not become the darkness slave
A light stoll shines
Though it may be hard to see
But it is there
Shining for thee
June 13th, 2024 17:08
Tony36 said:
Take care
Be brave
Do not become the darkness slave
A light stoll shines
Though it may be hard to see
But it is there
Shining for thee
June 13th, 2024 17:08
feeling like disappering
jojojoking said:
Hey, I’ve gone through some similar issues before with wanting to disappear but please take care of yourself I’m sure there are people who love and care about you deeply.
June 13th, 2024 15:10
jojojoking said:
Hey, I’ve gone through some similar issues before with wanting to disappear but please take care of yourself I’m sure there are people who love and care about you deeply.
June 13th, 2024 15:10
Broken heart
vividvoid14 said:
love this, its outstanding and I feel the pain I feel the hurt with your poem. i love that you used two perspectives in the poem the defender and the victime keep writting you got talent kid!
March 7th, 2024 19:20
vividvoid14 said:
love this, its outstanding and I feel the pain I feel the hurt with your poem. i love that you used two perspectives in the poem the defender and the victime keep writting you got talent kid!
March 7th, 2024 19:20
Together we will heal
vividvoid14 said:
keep writing you got a lot of talent kid.
February 15th, 2024 19:29
vividvoid14 said:
keep writing you got a lot of talent kid.
February 15th, 2024 19:29
Depression feelings
Parisab said:
You describe it with familiarity-l hope that you also access how it helps you recognize a need or a change-lovely share
January 19th, 2024 16:15
Parisab said:
You describe it with familiarity-l hope that you also access how it helps you recognize a need or a change-lovely share
January 19th, 2024 16:15
Depression feelings
Cassie58 said:
Depression sucks. So much negativity when it comes to visit and very difficult to push it back out the door. Hang in there, it does eventually go and there are plenty of others who know what you are going through. I hope you find some light in your day. You describe it well here.
January 19th, 2024 06:15
Cassie58 said:
Depression sucks. So much negativity when it comes to visit and very difficult to push it back out the door. Hang in there, it does eventually go and there are plenty of others who know what you are going through. I hope you find some light in your day. You describe it well here.
January 19th, 2024 06:15
My life story
vividvoid14 said:
i understand the feeling, and i don\'t think you are a freak. i think you\'re amazingly skilled and you have talent. you\'re complicated and people decide to hate what they don\'t understand. your unique. I\'m glad to call u my friend
September 7th, 2023 14:57
vividvoid14 said:
i understand the feeling, and i don\'t think you are a freak. i think you\'re amazingly skilled and you have talent. you\'re complicated and people decide to hate what they don\'t understand. your unique. I\'m glad to call u my friend
September 7th, 2023 14:57
