Comments received on poems by Melancholia
Secret desires
Poetic Licence said:
Sensual and provocative write, of passionate sexual desire knowing that\'s all it will be desire, nicely expressed write
March 14th, 2025 13:21
Poetic Licence said:
Sensual and provocative write, of passionate sexual desire knowing that\'s all it will be desire, nicely expressed write
March 14th, 2025 13:21
Secret desires
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and sensuous this poem speaks of sexual desire. When the hormones are racing little else can be thought about.
March 14th, 2025 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and sensuous this poem speaks of sexual desire. When the hormones are racing little else can be thought about.
March 14th, 2025 12:56
My forever puppeteer
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of being trapped in a relationship with someone they care about but they it\'s not right, well expressed feelings in the write
March 11th, 2025 03:03
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of being trapped in a relationship with someone they care about but they it\'s not right, well expressed feelings in the write
March 11th, 2025 03:03
My forever puppeteer
sorenbarrett said:
We are all pulled by strings. Strings of emotions pulled by those we care about. Great write.
March 10th, 2025 18:07
sorenbarrett said:
We are all pulled by strings. Strings of emotions pulled by those we care about. Great write.
March 10th, 2025 18:07
Depression\'s lullaby
Poetic Licence said:
This a lovely write being positive about sad occurances and how over time it balances it\'s self out,a lovely read
February 22nd, 2025 13:28
Poetic Licence said:
This a lovely write being positive about sad occurances and how over time it balances it\'s self out,a lovely read
February 22nd, 2025 13:28
Depression\'s lullaby
sorenbarrett said:
To each sad element there is a positive. Balance is a rule of the universe. A lovely write with a sense of balance, past and present what was and is. Love and apathy very nicely written
February 22nd, 2025 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
To each sad element there is a positive. Balance is a rule of the universe. A lovely write with a sense of balance, past and present what was and is. Love and apathy very nicely written
February 22nd, 2025 13:23
Burying love alive
Poetic Licence said:
Well written piece expressing the pain of separation, powerful and emotional write
February 20th, 2025 16:08
Poetic Licence said:
Well written piece expressing the pain of separation, powerful and emotional write
February 20th, 2025 16:08
Burying love alive
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. The pain is palpable.
February 20th, 2025 14:38
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. The pain is palpable.
February 20th, 2025 14:38
Burying love alive
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning of past values and actions so well worded and spoken.
February 20th, 2025 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning of past values and actions so well worded and spoken.
February 20th, 2025 14:07
Burying love alive
Cassie58 said:
Partings can be so painful. Nicely conveyed emotion in this poem. Good imagery as well. Thank you for sharing.
February 20th, 2025 13:38
Cassie58 said:
Partings can be so painful. Nicely conveyed emotion in this poem. Good imagery as well. Thank you for sharing.
February 20th, 2025 13:38
(Don\'t) Leave me!
Poetic Licence said:
I sense the pain of losing someone possibly because of their own doing, now reaching out to explain their reason and action, very well written
February 17th, 2025 14:13
Poetic Licence said:
I sense the pain of losing someone possibly because of their own doing, now reaching out to explain their reason and action, very well written
February 17th, 2025 14:13
(Don\'t) Leave me!
sorenbarrett said:
A feel of loss in this poem and a reaching out. Very nicely expressed in most poetic style
February 17th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
A feel of loss in this poem and a reaching out. Very nicely expressed in most poetic style
February 17th, 2025 13:28
The foe of fantasy
Qurrathul Ain said:
Really, that pain when reality hits us and heartlessly destroys our impossible dreams of perfection. This thought has crossed my mind more than often.
Relatable!
August 28th, 2024 08:57
Qurrathul Ain said:
Really, that pain when reality hits us and heartlessly destroys our impossible dreams of perfection. This thought has crossed my mind more than often.
Relatable!
August 28th, 2024 08:57
Desperately dependent
Cloie said:
Your poem vividly portrays the rollercoaster of uncertainty and insecurity. The raw emotion and desperate longing for connection leap off the page, capturing the tumultuous journey of the restless mind. Superb!
February 25th, 2024 05:34
Cloie said:
Your poem vividly portrays the rollercoaster of uncertainty and insecurity. The raw emotion and desperate longing for connection leap off the page, capturing the tumultuous journey of the restless mind. Superb!
February 25th, 2024 05:34
Kryptonite of an insecure
Alan R said:
Isn\'t this just the best poem about the insecure! Good write!
February 12th, 2024 13:15
Alan R said:
Isn\'t this just the best poem about the insecure! Good write!
February 12th, 2024 13:15
Chasing a fairytale
ana_the_bibliophile said:
Your poem is really relatable.
February 9th, 2024 09:59
ana_the_bibliophile said:
Your poem is really relatable.
February 9th, 2024 09:59
Impostor
peto said:
Really enjoyed reading
Rhyme and flow great
Self searching seems honest
\"Self doubt \" stood out
Keep writing
You have a talent for it
February 4th, 2024 18:18
peto said:
Really enjoyed reading
Rhyme and flow great
Self searching seems honest
\"Self doubt \" stood out
Keep writing
You have a talent for it
February 4th, 2024 18:18
