Comments received on poems by Mehrangaiz
Amalgamation of Beliefs
Kinsey Peterson said:
I particularly appreciate the line \"Thrashing like a monster snarling to be let out of its rusting chains\" as it depicts how long this issue has been tearing apart at the speaker. I truly hope this piece is not about you, as your words are beautiful and one can see the effort that was put into this wonderful poem.
February 22nd, 2024 13:43
Kinsey Peterson said:
I particularly appreciate the line \"Thrashing like a monster snarling to be let out of its rusting chains\" as it depicts how long this issue has been tearing apart at the speaker. I truly hope this piece is not about you, as your words are beautiful and one can see the effort that was put into this wonderful poem.
February 22nd, 2024 13:43
Freedom, A Ruthless Fight
Parisab said:
Very good write, describing medical treatment with surgical precision and yet beautiful metaphors serpent and trees describing the body’s experience
February 18th, 2024 16:28
Parisab said:
Very good write, describing medical treatment with surgical precision and yet beautiful metaphors serpent and trees describing the body’s experience
February 18th, 2024 16:28
Freedom, A Ruthless Fight
Alan R said:
The last line reminds me of the quote from Franz Kafka...
\"I am free and that is why I am lost\"
February 18th, 2024 10:02
Alan R said:
The last line reminds me of the quote from Franz Kafka...
\"I am free and that is why I am lost\"
February 18th, 2024 10:02
Courtesy of The Love I Will Never Receive
Alan R said:
Brilliant title choice
January 23rd, 2024 08:12
Alan R said:
Brilliant title choice
January 23rd, 2024 08:12