Comments received on poems by M.M.
Let This Be Surrender
sorenbarrett said:
Anger rage that poetry won\'t fix. Loved the last stanza. Well written.
August 14th, 2024 15:25
sorenbarrett said:
Anger rage that poetry won\'t fix. Loved the last stanza. Well written.
August 14th, 2024 15:25
Condemned To A Life of Tragedy
sorenbarrett said:
Jaded is the word. And yes I too am such. It is hard not to be in a world of lies, greed, violence, deception. But there is always the other side to the coin and nothing has meaning without duality. A powerful and interesting write.
August 1st, 2024 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
Jaded is the word. And yes I too am such. It is hard not to be in a world of lies, greed, violence, deception. But there is always the other side to the coin and nothing has meaning without duality. A powerful and interesting write.
August 1st, 2024 05:51
Rusting Medals
Doggerel Dave said:
All sounds pretty human to me.
And if you really feel bad about yourself...tomorrow is not far away.....
July 28th, 2024 17:52
Doggerel Dave said:
All sounds pretty human to me.
And if you really feel bad about yourself...tomorrow is not far away.....
July 28th, 2024 17:52
Who To Call
sorenbarrett said:
We all had no choice of being who we are. Parents had the coice to bring someone here or not and like pulling the arm of a slot machine you get what you get. Mothers should never blame their children for being like their spouse for it was they that made the choice not the child. Well written
July 20th, 2024 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
We all had no choice of being who we are. Parents had the coice to bring someone here or not and like pulling the arm of a slot machine you get what you get. Mothers should never blame their children for being like their spouse for it was they that made the choice not the child. Well written
July 20th, 2024 10:45
Amalgamation of Beliefs
Kinsey Peterson said:
I particularly appreciate the line \"Thrashing like a monster snarling to be let out of its rusting chains\" as it depicts how long this issue has been tearing apart at the speaker. I truly hope this piece is not about you, as your words are beautiful and one can see the effort that was put into this wonderful poem.
February 22nd, 2024 13:43
Kinsey Peterson said:
I particularly appreciate the line \"Thrashing like a monster snarling to be let out of its rusting chains\" as it depicts how long this issue has been tearing apart at the speaker. I truly hope this piece is not about you, as your words are beautiful and one can see the effort that was put into this wonderful poem.
February 22nd, 2024 13:43
Freedom, A Ruthless Fight
Parisab said:
Very good write, describing medical treatment with surgical precision and yet beautiful metaphors serpent and trees describing the body’s experience
February 18th, 2024 16:28
Parisab said:
Very good write, describing medical treatment with surgical precision and yet beautiful metaphors serpent and trees describing the body’s experience
February 18th, 2024 16:28
Freedom, A Ruthless Fight
Alan R said:
The last line reminds me of the quote from Franz Kafka...
\"I am free and that is why I am lost\"
February 18th, 2024 10:02
Alan R said:
The last line reminds me of the quote from Franz Kafka...
\"I am free and that is why I am lost\"
February 18th, 2024 10:02
Courtesy of The Love I Will Never Receive
Alan R said:
Brilliant title choice
January 23rd, 2024 08:12
Alan R said:
Brilliant title choice
January 23rd, 2024 08:12
