Comments received on poems by Mehrangaiz



Amalgamation of Beliefs
Kinsey Peterson said:

I particularly appreciate the line \"Thrashing like a monster snarling to be let out of its rusting chains\" as it depicts how long this issue has been tearing apart at the speaker. I truly hope this piece is not about you, as your words are beautiful and one can see the effort that was put into this wonderful poem.

February 22nd, 2024 13:43

Freedom, A Ruthless Fight
Parisab said:

Very good write, describing medical treatment with surgical precision and yet beautiful metaphors serpent and trees describing the body’s experience

February 18th, 2024 16:28

Freedom, A Ruthless Fight
Alan R said:

The last line reminds me of the quote from Franz Kafka...
\"I am free and that is why I am lost\"

February 18th, 2024 10:02

Courtesy of The Love I Will Never Receive
Alan R said:

Brilliant title choice

January 23rd, 2024 08:12