Comments received on poems by Twizzle48
WHEN TIME STOPS
TobaniNataiella said:
And as long as that candle stays alight, we might get back on track, really enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 16:16
TobaniNataiella said:
And as long as that candle stays alight, we might get back on track, really enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 16:16
THE DAY THAT ANGER DIED
TobaniNataiella said:
A touching and tenderly written poem, i enjoyed the read, Thank you
December 20th, 2024 12:49
TobaniNataiella said:
A touching and tenderly written poem, i enjoyed the read, Thank you
December 20th, 2024 12:49
FIRSTBORN
TobaniNataiella said:
The more we write the more we develop, really enjoyable read
December 18th, 2024 08:33
TobaniNataiella said:
The more we write the more we develop, really enjoyable read
December 18th, 2024 08:33
ONE GOAL
TobaniNataiella said:
May you obtain your wishes, very enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 13:39
TobaniNataiella said:
May you obtain your wishes, very enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 13:39
ONE GOAL
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, well, well. I\'m a Wednesdays child. Nothing like seeing the next day\'s resolutions as together we tackle yonder. Excellently rendered with lively imagery and a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 17th, 2024 12:01
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, well, well. I\'m a Wednesdays child. Nothing like seeing the next day\'s resolutions as together we tackle yonder. Excellently rendered with lively imagery and a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 17th, 2024 12:01
IS THIS LOVE THEN
TobaniNataiella said:
Well written, we all crave it but a lot of time i do not know what to do with it once it arrives, because it is the most powerful feeling we can have.
November 27th, 2024 18:59
TobaniNataiella said:
Well written, we all crave it but a lot of time i do not know what to do with it once it arrives, because it is the most powerful feeling we can have.
November 27th, 2024 18:59
HIGH TEA FOR I.T
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write. As someone who used to code basic \"a la mode\" as you put it, I really appreciate this as it really captures the vast change in such a relatively short time and how that change can really leave one\'s head spinning, not to mention, as your poem also addresses, the dangers that have cropped up in that short time...things we would not have imagined back then. Excellent write!
November 14th, 2024 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write. As someone who used to code basic \"a la mode\" as you put it, I really appreciate this as it really captures the vast change in such a relatively short time and how that change can really leave one\'s head spinning, not to mention, as your poem also addresses, the dangers that have cropped up in that short time...things we would not have imagined back then. Excellent write!
November 14th, 2024 08:08
NO MUSE
Cheeky Missy said:
If only you weren\'t hellbent on simply scrounging around in your ain noggin and could forgive the not surprising reality that nothing really changes, as a certain Larry Norman used to croon, there\'s forever a \"new\" day. I like your style. Charming and excellently rendered with the haunting reality so perfectly delineated it rears its head herein and leers at all. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:16
Cheeky Missy said:
If only you weren\'t hellbent on simply scrounging around in your ain noggin and could forgive the not surprising reality that nothing really changes, as a certain Larry Norman used to croon, there\'s forever a \"new\" day. I like your style. Charming and excellently rendered with the haunting reality so perfectly delineated it rears its head herein and leers at all. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:16
HIGH TEA FOR I.T
Cheeky Missy said:
The bits and bytes are now our life, or so they\'d have us think. Yet far more others live their days without much more than ink. Tis curious how they\'ve fooled us all.
Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and superb imagery not to mention a winsome appeal despite the topic.
Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:10
Cheeky Missy said:
The bits and bytes are now our life, or so they\'d have us think. Yet far more others live their days without much more than ink. Tis curious how they\'ve fooled us all.
Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and superb imagery not to mention a winsome appeal despite the topic.
Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:10
THE LAST COMMAND
jarcher54 said:
I like the way you crowded the words into a small space like the confines of a sub... intense and foreboding, like a torpedo in the tube!
November 13th, 2024 09:37
jarcher54 said:
I like the way you crowded the words into a small space like the confines of a sub... intense and foreboding, like a torpedo in the tube!
November 13th, 2024 09:37
SYZYGY
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was excellent and informative! Oh...and thank you for the Scrabble word! 😉👏🌹
November 11th, 2024 12:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was excellent and informative! Oh...and thank you for the Scrabble word! 😉👏🌹
November 11th, 2024 12:27
THE LAST NIGHT WITH THE DEVIL
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! The punchline! Excellently rendered with aptly haunting poignancy and gorgeous imagery, the suspense snaps with a bang at that hilarious conclusion. I love it! Thank you very much for sharing!
November 3rd, 2024 12:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! The punchline! Excellently rendered with aptly haunting poignancy and gorgeous imagery, the suspense snaps with a bang at that hilarious conclusion. I love it! Thank you very much for sharing!
November 3rd, 2024 12:10
CONTRARY VIEW
Doggerel Dave said:
Do I truly know myself? I\'m not sure......
Insight there, even not knowing....
October 26th, 2024 05:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Do I truly know myself? I\'m not sure......
Insight there, even not knowing....
October 26th, 2024 05:41
HEARTFELT
Adiii said:
Wow your imagination is just out of this world which represents your knowledge as well loved the way you connected the functioning of heart with rhythm.
October 6th, 2024 10:02
Adiii said:
Wow your imagination is just out of this world which represents your knowledge as well loved the way you connected the functioning of heart with rhythm.
October 6th, 2024 10:02
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