Comments received on poems by Twizzle48
ODE TO THE MOTHER LODE
Poetic Licence said:
An enjoyable read taking me back to some history lessons and the prospectors of gold, those breaking their backs in the hopes of riches, i feel the sentiment of this write could apply elsewhere as well, enjoyed the read
February 8th, 2025 21:12
Poetic Licence said:
An enjoyable read taking me back to some history lessons and the prospectors of gold, those breaking their backs in the hopes of riches, i feel the sentiment of this write could apply elsewhere as well, enjoyed the read
February 8th, 2025 21:12
DEMONS IN DAYLIGHT
Poetic Licence said:
The demons i see are the people in power who are now fully on the march to take everything they can, i am sure how we can put them back into the dark, but i hope we can. Really enjoyed this read.
January 5th, 2025 13:43
Poetic Licence said:
The demons i see are the people in power who are now fully on the march to take everything they can, i am sure how we can put them back into the dark, but i hope we can. Really enjoyed this read.
January 5th, 2025 13:43
BOYS TOYS
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderful present that would of been, a lovely write of past memories and off days when toys were toys and could be played with, Enjoyed the read
January 3rd, 2025 01:49
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderful present that would of been, a lovely write of past memories and off days when toys were toys and could be played with, Enjoyed the read
January 3rd, 2025 01:49
ROMANCE
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely written request in the search for love, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:37
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely written request in the search for love, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:37
WHEN TIME STOPS
Poetic Licence said:
And as long as that candle stays alight, we might get back on track, really enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 16:16
Poetic Licence said:
And as long as that candle stays alight, we might get back on track, really enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 16:16
THE DAY THAT ANGER DIED
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and tenderly written poem, i enjoyed the read, Thank you
December 20th, 2024 12:49
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and tenderly written poem, i enjoyed the read, Thank you
December 20th, 2024 12:49
FIRSTBORN
Poetic Licence said:
The more we write the more we develop, really enjoyable read
December 18th, 2024 08:33
Poetic Licence said:
The more we write the more we develop, really enjoyable read
December 18th, 2024 08:33
ONE GOAL
Poetic Licence said:
May you obtain your wishes, very enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 13:39
Poetic Licence said:
May you obtain your wishes, very enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 13:39
ONE GOAL
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, well, well. I\'m a Wednesdays child. Nothing like seeing the next day\'s resolutions as together we tackle yonder. Excellently rendered with lively imagery and a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 17th, 2024 12:01
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, well, well. I\'m a Wednesdays child. Nothing like seeing the next day\'s resolutions as together we tackle yonder. Excellently rendered with lively imagery and a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 17th, 2024 12:01
IS THIS LOVE THEN
Poetic Licence said:
Well written, we all crave it but a lot of time i do not know what to do with it once it arrives, because it is the most powerful feeling we can have.
November 27th, 2024 18:59
Poetic Licence said:
Well written, we all crave it but a lot of time i do not know what to do with it once it arrives, because it is the most powerful feeling we can have.
November 27th, 2024 18:59
HIGH TEA FOR I.T
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write. As someone who used to code basic \"a la mode\" as you put it, I really appreciate this as it really captures the vast change in such a relatively short time and how that change can really leave one\'s head spinning, not to mention, as your poem also addresses, the dangers that have cropped up in that short time...things we would not have imagined back then. Excellent write!
November 14th, 2024 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write. As someone who used to code basic \"a la mode\" as you put it, I really appreciate this as it really captures the vast change in such a relatively short time and how that change can really leave one\'s head spinning, not to mention, as your poem also addresses, the dangers that have cropped up in that short time...things we would not have imagined back then. Excellent write!
November 14th, 2024 08:08
NO MUSE
Cheeky Missy said:
If only you weren\'t hellbent on simply scrounging around in your ain noggin and could forgive the not surprising reality that nothing really changes, as a certain Larry Norman used to croon, there\'s forever a \"new\" day. I like your style. Charming and excellently rendered with the haunting reality so perfectly delineated it rears its head herein and leers at all. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:16
Cheeky Missy said:
If only you weren\'t hellbent on simply scrounging around in your ain noggin and could forgive the not surprising reality that nothing really changes, as a certain Larry Norman used to croon, there\'s forever a \"new\" day. I like your style. Charming and excellently rendered with the haunting reality so perfectly delineated it rears its head herein and leers at all. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:16
HIGH TEA FOR I.T
Cheeky Missy said:
The bits and bytes are now our life, or so they\'d have us think. Yet far more others live their days without much more than ink. Tis curious how they\'ve fooled us all.
Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and superb imagery not to mention a winsome appeal despite the topic.
Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:10
Cheeky Missy said:
The bits and bytes are now our life, or so they\'d have us think. Yet far more others live their days without much more than ink. Tis curious how they\'ve fooled us all.
Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and superb imagery not to mention a winsome appeal despite the topic.
Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:10
THE LAST COMMAND
jarcher54 said:
I like the way you crowded the words into a small space like the confines of a sub... intense and foreboding, like a torpedo in the tube!
November 13th, 2024 09:37
jarcher54 said:
I like the way you crowded the words into a small space like the confines of a sub... intense and foreboding, like a torpedo in the tube!
November 13th, 2024 09:37
SYZYGY
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was excellent and informative! Oh...and thank you for the Scrabble word! 😉👏🌹
November 11th, 2024 12:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was excellent and informative! Oh...and thank you for the Scrabble word! 😉👏🌹
November 11th, 2024 12:27
THE LAST NIGHT WITH THE DEVIL
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! The punchline! Excellently rendered with aptly haunting poignancy and gorgeous imagery, the suspense snaps with a bang at that hilarious conclusion. I love it! Thank you very much for sharing!
November 3rd, 2024 12:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! The punchline! Excellently rendered with aptly haunting poignancy and gorgeous imagery, the suspense snaps with a bang at that hilarious conclusion. I love it! Thank you very much for sharing!
November 3rd, 2024 12:10
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