Comments received on poems by Twizzle48
NO LONGER SCARLET
Doggerel Dave said:
See my entry to your first piece - Add \'engage\'.
February 17th, 2024 18:34
Doggerel Dave said:
See my entry to your first piece - Add \'engage\'.
February 17th, 2024 18:34
NO MUSE
Pop64 said:
The \'block\" can sometimes be so overwhelming, but in the case of this write, where it\'s the subject, it can also be magnificent. I love the rhyme scheme you used here as well of a,b,c,c,c,b,a as it lends to the flow of the write and serves to keep the subject matter serious.
September 22nd, 2023 08:00
Pop64 said:
The \'block\" can sometimes be so overwhelming, but in the case of this write, where it\'s the subject, it can also be magnificent. I love the rhyme scheme you used here as well of a,b,c,c,c,b,a as it lends to the flow of the write and serves to keep the subject matter serious.
September 22nd, 2023 08:00
NO MUSE
Doggerel Dave said:
An accomplished piece, which says plenty about poetic inspiration.
Thanks for favouring us with your attention, but you will be moving on, won\'t you.....
A pity, however that\'s the way it goes here - they come and go. But you see, the parade moves so quickly that not much attention is accrued.. unless you stick around, reveal a little about yourself and....
September 22nd, 2023 06:06
Doggerel Dave said:
An accomplished piece, which says plenty about poetic inspiration.
Thanks for favouring us with your attention, but you will be moving on, won\'t you.....
A pity, however that\'s the way it goes here - they come and go. But you see, the parade moves so quickly that not much attention is accrued.. unless you stick around, reveal a little about yourself and....
September 22nd, 2023 06:06
