Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey



A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Breeze
Fay Slimm. said:

Clever reflection on love.

August 21st, 2017 04:10

My elegy
myself and me said:

Today, I am so busy with \"capture and taste sweet moment.\", including right now.
Thank you and love this one.

August 20th, 2017 21:51

My elegy
burning-embers said:

There are those amongst us for whom they happen every day. I\'m in your group tho and theyre few and far between. Makes them all the more special tho doesnt it.

August 20th, 2017 05:13

The choice is yours
myself and me said:

I believe the cat have more fun to see you pull the string. :)

August 19th, 2017 19:28

The choice is yours
burning-embers said:

You are a poet and as much as your writing is therapy it is also a pleasure to know it is being read. Keep toying with us.... i\'ll chase your wool

August 19th, 2017 18:58

The choice is yours
Nicholas Browning said:

Why you little -
All jokes aside, it was a fun read.
Pets are just friend-slaves.
What do you think about that?

August 19th, 2017 06:57

I have nothing
myself and me said:

I wrote \"She left\" to follow yours.

August 17th, 2017 21:24

I have nothing
FredPeyer said:

You have memories
You have regrets
You have hope
You have everything you need to write another great poem!

August 17th, 2017 17:37

I have nothing
Nicholas Browning said:

If you have nothing, then make something. Well played.

August 17th, 2017 13:05

I have nothing
kevin browne said:

you\'re a poet so you will always have something to write. love and poetry is in your blood and there isn\'t a lot you can do about that. powerful work also appears to leave its mark, I congratulate you for words written here in this poem.

August 17th, 2017 12:26

Existence
MaddieJ said:

can really relate...... Great write! \"I want for nothing, so nothing soothes\" was really good.

August 17th, 2017 00:11

Existence
FredPeyer said:

Talk about a mental desert, but very well written Aa. It takes skill to write a 44 line \"pointless tale\"!

August 16th, 2017 11:23

These are the good times
Nicholas Browning said:

This is nice. Very nice. It\'s soft and it\'s sweet, but it has the aftertaste of longing hope that could give the reader a feeling of bittersweet desire. The rhyme scheme is pleasant to say the least. Well done.

August 14th, 2017 06:54

What could have been
myself and me said:

In love like in a honey pool, lost love seems drowning in a freezing pond. Nice poem.

August 12th, 2017 22:16

What could have been
Louis Gibbs said:

It could, and it can ... unless it isn\'t! Such is the crap-shoot that is love. Well expressed in your poem, AA.

August 12th, 2017 12:37

He said \'There is no love.\'
myself and me said:

The big problem of depression is the loss of sense for love. I was horrified by this feeling.
Even the island is flooded by the rain, one day, the Sun will shine on it and it will become oasis.

August 11th, 2017 23:14

He said \'There is no love.\'
Nicholas Browning said:

Excuse me, Hi. The names Nick, but you can call me Nicholas if you really feel like it. An island covered with rain, huh? Must suck. Don\'t get me wrong, I\'m empathizing with you. I don\'t like sympathy either. Just wanted to tell you that I enjoyed this, forgive if it seems rude to enjoy poetry about self-loathing, but I get where it\'s coming from. I feel like this myself sometimes. I watch the world go by, doing absolutely nothing, only to be reminded that the one thing I want is the one thing I\'ll never have. I wanted to be loved, to love. To care for, and to be cared for. Tried it out, and this is where it led me. Good to know we\'re companions in this. Love the poetry, keep on writing friend.

August 11th, 2017 03:14

Soulmate
myself and me said:

Soulmate, no matter how late you meet in your life, you feel that you have known each other for a long time, you were created for each other. Nice poem.

August 9th, 2017 21:28

Soulmate
Tony36 said:

Beautiful write

August 9th, 2017 14:32

The id, the ego and the super-ego
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 8th, 2017 13:08

The id, the ego and the super-ego
malubotelho said:

Yes, the master say, when you find your self, it is just yourself. You don\'t need to have a relationship with yourself. Just be yourself.
Very nice writing and I hope your lady fall for you.

August 8th, 2017 10:11

The id, the ego and the super-ego
orchidee said:

Erm, are three of you there?! Seems to make it more complicated for you! Just be \'I\'. heehee.

August 8th, 2017 08:15

The id, the ego and the super-ego
Fay Slimm. said:

A thrill of a read to some fortunate lady and hoping your appeal will hit all the right boxes AA.

August 8th, 2017 05:06

If so.
orchidee said:

And now you\'ve written it! A fine write Aa.

August 7th, 2017 09:24

I see
Louis Gibbs said:

You see beyond the illusion that is this world ... congratulations! I really like and resonate with this one, Aa.

August 6th, 2017 10:49

Kiss me
FredPeyer said:

Yes Aa, there is more to a kiss than meets the eye. Well said!

August 3rd, 2017 16:41

Guitars in the night
Louis Gibbs said:

Dreamers are the ones who keep our world going, advancing. You are in good company, Aa!

August 2nd, 2017 07:41

Guitars in the night
Fay Slimm. said:

Fantasy takes dreamers to all sorts of exciting places as this fine tribute outlines. I love the on-going pitch and pace of your journey through night-time AA.

August 2nd, 2017 03:26

Say something
jenny.g said:

Brilliantly desolate!

August 1st, 2017 14:21

Say something
ajithraj said:

Isn\'t it something?

August 1st, 2017 10:47



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