Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey



He said \'There is no love.\'
Nicholas Browning said:

Excuse me, Hi. The names Nick, but you can call me Nicholas if you really feel like it. An island covered with rain, huh? Must suck. Don\'t get me wrong, I\'m empathizing with you. I don\'t like sympathy either. Just wanted to tell you that I enjoyed this, forgive if it seems rude to enjoy poetry about self-loathing, but I get where it\'s coming from. I feel like this myself sometimes. I watch the world go by, doing absolutely nothing, only to be reminded that the one thing I want is the one thing I\'ll never have. I wanted to be loved, to love. To care for, and to be cared for. Tried it out, and this is where it led me. Good to know we\'re companions in this. Love the poetry, keep on writing friend.

August 11th, 2017 03:14

Soulmate
myself and me said:

Soulmate, no matter how late you meet in your life, you feel that you have known each other for a long time, you were created for each other. Nice poem.

August 9th, 2017 21:28

Soulmate
Tony36 said:

Beautiful write

August 9th, 2017 14:32

Soulmate
Accidental Poet said:

Very beautiful and heartfelt.

August 9th, 2017 02:46

The id, the ego and the super-ego
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 8th, 2017 13:08

The id, the ego and the super-ego
malubotelho said:

Yes, the master say, when you find your self, it is just yourself. You don\'t need to have a relationship with yourself. Just be yourself.
Very nice writing and I hope your lady fall for you.

August 8th, 2017 10:11

The id, the ego and the super-ego
orchidee said:

Erm, are three of you there?! Seems to make it more complicated for you! Just be \'I\'. heehee.

August 8th, 2017 08:15

The id, the ego and the super-ego
Fay Slimm. said:

A thrill of a read to some fortunate lady and hoping your appeal will hit all the right boxes AA.

August 8th, 2017 05:06

If so.
orchidee said:

And now you\'ve written it! A fine write Aa.

August 7th, 2017 09:24

I see
Louis Gibbs said:

You see beyond the illusion that is this world ... congratulations! I really like and resonate with this one, Aa.

August 6th, 2017 10:49

Kiss me
FredPeyer said:

Yes Aa, there is more to a kiss than meets the eye. Well said!

August 3rd, 2017 16:41

Guitars in the night
Louis Gibbs said:

Dreamers are the ones who keep our world going, advancing. You are in good company, Aa!

August 2nd, 2017 07:41

Guitars in the night
Fay Slimm. said:

Fantasy takes dreamers to all sorts of exciting places as this fine tribute outlines. I love the on-going pitch and pace of your journey through night-time AA.

August 2nd, 2017 03:26

Say something
jenny.g said:

Brilliantly desolate!

August 1st, 2017 14:21

Say something
ajithraj said:

Isn\'t it something?

August 1st, 2017 10:47

Beau
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful love filled words.

July 31st, 2017 00:22

I am left speechless by her beauty
Accidental Poet said:

But, you have love for this woman. And THAT (believe it or not, is a gift to always treasure.

July 29th, 2017 05:55

I am left speechless by her beauty
Fay Slimm. said:

A read of true woe but so beautifully imaged with poetic metaphor - - such an excellent end too leaving only that whisper of hope.

July 29th, 2017 05:19

Until death do us part
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, we will be on the cloud next to you.

July 28th, 2017 08:01

Until death do us part
Fay Slimm. said:

Thanks for this endearing outline of an on-going romance and with hope in its finalé the poem makes really positive reading not only for those entering marriage .

July 28th, 2017 04:57

The next door
kevin browne said:

and I am well happy with your poem and flying over the moon for you because you are now looking like a different poet. I adore you passion for writing and the determination in this write to stay on top of the world. a lovely poem my friend.

July 27th, 2017 06:15

The next door
Michael Edwards said:

Love the optimism of this - great read.

July 27th, 2017 00:47

Seven days in June
kevin browne said:

which makes it all worth it Aa Harvey. your writing is emotional and filled with horrid things but you are pulling through so, yeah, keep on writing and writing and even more writing. I can\'t wait to read it. your work always opens up peoples hearts and that\'is all down to you. chin up my friend.

July 26th, 2017 02:17

Exit light
kevin browne said:

my apologies Aa Harvey, I don\'t know what I was thinking about apart from I was reading his work before I I saw your poem. I guess writing from the heart and the honesty you give is a fine way to exert your poetry emotions. well done for doing that.

July 25th, 2017 07:02

Exit light
kevin browne said:

I can tell you this onepauly, I am listening and sitting through the night, not naked though like you do, and the creative side takes hold and the magic of whatever will be will be written. great write dear friend.

July 25th, 2017 05:17

Saved
Micalina said:

Wonderful poem.

July 24th, 2017 13:01

Tranquility
Michael Edwards said:

An inspired last line - as an artist I am quite envious that it\'s not mine :)

July 24th, 2017 01:29

Tranquility
Goldfinch60 said:

The artist may be painting the picture but you have painted it with words.

July 24th, 2017 01:00

Tranquility
Louis Gibbs said:

And for us, the Poet is \"painting the scene.\" So very well, I might add. Thanks for sharing this one, Aa.

July 23rd, 2017 11:13

Tranquility
Fay Slimm. said:

So vivid the scene and its excellent description - - tranquility indeed dear Harvey.

July 23rd, 2017 08:59



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