Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
The choice is yours
burning-embers said:
You are a poet and as much as your writing is therapy it is also a pleasure to know it is being read. Keep toying with us.... i\'ll chase your wool
August 19th, 2017 18:58
burning-embers said:
You are a poet and as much as your writing is therapy it is also a pleasure to know it is being read. Keep toying with us.... i\'ll chase your wool
August 19th, 2017 18:58
The choice is yours
Nicholas Browning said:
Why you little -
All jokes aside, it was a fun read.
Pets are just friend-slaves.
What do you think about that?
August 19th, 2017 06:57
Nicholas Browning said:
Why you little -
All jokes aside, it was a fun read.
Pets are just friend-slaves.
What do you think about that?
August 19th, 2017 06:57
I have nothing
FredPeyer said:
You have memories
You have regrets
You have hope
You have everything you need to write another great poem!
August 17th, 2017 17:37
FredPeyer said:
You have memories
You have regrets
You have hope
You have everything you need to write another great poem!
August 17th, 2017 17:37
I have nothing
Nicholas Browning said:
If you have nothing, then make something. Well played.
August 17th, 2017 13:05
Nicholas Browning said:
If you have nothing, then make something. Well played.
August 17th, 2017 13:05
I have nothing
kevin browne said:
you\'re a poet so you will always have something to write. love and poetry is in your blood and there isn\'t a lot you can do about that. powerful work also appears to leave its mark, I congratulate you for words written here in this poem.
August 17th, 2017 12:26
kevin browne said:
you\'re a poet so you will always have something to write. love and poetry is in your blood and there isn\'t a lot you can do about that. powerful work also appears to leave its mark, I congratulate you for words written here in this poem.
August 17th, 2017 12:26
Existence
MaddieJ said:
can really relate...... Great write! \"I want for nothing, so nothing soothes\" was really good.
August 17th, 2017 00:11
MaddieJ said:
can really relate...... Great write! \"I want for nothing, so nothing soothes\" was really good.
August 17th, 2017 00:11
Existence
FredPeyer said:
Talk about a mental desert, but very well written Aa. It takes skill to write a 44 line \"pointless tale\"!
August 16th, 2017 11:23
FredPeyer said:
Talk about a mental desert, but very well written Aa. It takes skill to write a 44 line \"pointless tale\"!
August 16th, 2017 11:23
These are the good times
Nicholas Browning said:
This is nice. Very nice. It\'s soft and it\'s sweet, but it has the aftertaste of longing hope that could give the reader a feeling of bittersweet desire. The rhyme scheme is pleasant to say the least. Well done.
August 14th, 2017 06:54
Nicholas Browning said:
This is nice. Very nice. It\'s soft and it\'s sweet, but it has the aftertaste of longing hope that could give the reader a feeling of bittersweet desire. The rhyme scheme is pleasant to say the least. Well done.
August 14th, 2017 06:54
What could have been
myself and me said:
In love like in a honey pool, lost love seems drowning in a freezing pond. Nice poem.
August 12th, 2017 22:16
myself and me said:
In love like in a honey pool, lost love seems drowning in a freezing pond. Nice poem.
August 12th, 2017 22:16
What could have been
Louis Gibbs said:
It could, and it can ... unless it isn\'t! Such is the crap-shoot that is love. Well expressed in your poem, AA.
August 12th, 2017 12:37
Louis Gibbs said:
It could, and it can ... unless it isn\'t! Such is the crap-shoot that is love. Well expressed in your poem, AA.
August 12th, 2017 12:37
He said \'There is no love.\'
myself and me said:
The big problem of depression is the loss of sense for love. I was horrified by this feeling.
Even the island is flooded by the rain, one day, the Sun will shine on it and it will become oasis.
August 11th, 2017 23:14
myself and me said:
The big problem of depression is the loss of sense for love. I was horrified by this feeling.
Even the island is flooded by the rain, one day, the Sun will shine on it and it will become oasis.
August 11th, 2017 23:14
He said \'There is no love.\'
Nicholas Browning said:
Excuse me, Hi. The names Nick, but you can call me Nicholas if you really feel like it. An island covered with rain, huh? Must suck. Don\'t get me wrong, I\'m empathizing with you. I don\'t like sympathy either. Just wanted to tell you that I enjoyed this, forgive if it seems rude to enjoy poetry about self-loathing, but I get where it\'s coming from. I feel like this myself sometimes. I watch the world go by, doing absolutely nothing, only to be reminded that the one thing I want is the one thing I\'ll never have. I wanted to be loved, to love. To care for, and to be cared for. Tried it out, and this is where it led me. Good to know we\'re companions in this. Love the poetry, keep on writing friend.
August 11th, 2017 03:14
Nicholas Browning said:
Excuse me, Hi. The names Nick, but you can call me Nicholas if you really feel like it. An island covered with rain, huh? Must suck. Don\'t get me wrong, I\'m empathizing with you. I don\'t like sympathy either. Just wanted to tell you that I enjoyed this, forgive if it seems rude to enjoy poetry about self-loathing, but I get where it\'s coming from. I feel like this myself sometimes. I watch the world go by, doing absolutely nothing, only to be reminded that the one thing I want is the one thing I\'ll never have. I wanted to be loved, to love. To care for, and to be cared for. Tried it out, and this is where it led me. Good to know we\'re companions in this. Love the poetry, keep on writing friend.
August 11th, 2017 03:14
Soulmate
myself and me said:
Soulmate, no matter how late you meet in your life, you feel that you have known each other for a long time, you were created for each other. Nice poem.
August 9th, 2017 21:28
myself and me said:
Soulmate, no matter how late you meet in your life, you feel that you have known each other for a long time, you were created for each other. Nice poem.
August 9th, 2017 21:28
The id, the ego and the super-ego
malubotelho said:
Yes, the master say, when you find your self, it is just yourself. You don\'t need to have a relationship with yourself. Just be yourself.
Very nice writing and I hope your lady fall for you.
August 8th, 2017 10:11
malubotelho said:
Yes, the master say, when you find your self, it is just yourself. You don\'t need to have a relationship with yourself. Just be yourself.
Very nice writing and I hope your lady fall for you.
August 8th, 2017 10:11
The id, the ego and the super-ego
orchidee said:
Erm, are three of you there?! Seems to make it more complicated for you! Just be \'I\'. heehee.
August 8th, 2017 08:15
orchidee said:
Erm, are three of you there?! Seems to make it more complicated for you! Just be \'I\'. heehee.
August 8th, 2017 08:15
The id, the ego and the super-ego
Fay Slimm. said:
A thrill of a read to some fortunate lady and hoping your appeal will hit all the right boxes AA.
August 8th, 2017 05:06
Fay Slimm. said:
A thrill of a read to some fortunate lady and hoping your appeal will hit all the right boxes AA.
August 8th, 2017 05:06
I see
Louis Gibbs said:
You see beyond the illusion that is this world ... congratulations! I really like and resonate with this one, Aa.
August 6th, 2017 10:49
Louis Gibbs said:
You see beyond the illusion that is this world ... congratulations! I really like and resonate with this one, Aa.
August 6th, 2017 10:49
Kiss me
FredPeyer said:
Yes Aa, there is more to a kiss than meets the eye. Well said!
August 3rd, 2017 16:41
FredPeyer said:
Yes Aa, there is more to a kiss than meets the eye. Well said!
August 3rd, 2017 16:41
Guitars in the night
Louis Gibbs said:
Dreamers are the ones who keep our world going, advancing. You are in good company, Aa!
August 2nd, 2017 07:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Dreamers are the ones who keep our world going, advancing. You are in good company, Aa!
August 2nd, 2017 07:41
Guitars in the night
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantasy takes dreamers to all sorts of exciting places as this fine tribute outlines. I love the on-going pitch and pace of your journey through night-time AA.
August 2nd, 2017 03:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantasy takes dreamers to all sorts of exciting places as this fine tribute outlines. I love the on-going pitch and pace of your journey through night-time AA.
August 2nd, 2017 03:26
I am left speechless by her beauty
Fay Slimm. said:
A read of true woe but so beautifully imaged with poetic metaphor - - such an excellent end too leaving only that whisper of hope.
July 29th, 2017 05:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A read of true woe but so beautifully imaged with poetic metaphor - - such an excellent end too leaving only that whisper of hope.
July 29th, 2017 05:19
Until death do us part
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, we will be on the cloud next to you.
July 28th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, we will be on the cloud next to you.
July 28th, 2017 08:01
Until death do us part
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for this endearing outline of an on-going romance and with hope in its finalé the poem makes really positive reading not only for those entering marriage .
July 28th, 2017 04:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for this endearing outline of an on-going romance and with hope in its finalé the poem makes really positive reading not only for those entering marriage .
July 28th, 2017 04:57
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