Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
The Written.
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like the journey of a soul through the maze of life. A tale of wandering, stumbling along the way to find one\'s way. Well done
September 4th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like the journey of a soul through the maze of life. A tale of wandering, stumbling along the way to find one\'s way. Well done
September 4th, 2026 04:05
Inner Truth.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s beginning reminded me of Meatloaf and the song Paradise by the dashboard lights. A read that develops from someone looking for commitment to truth in communication. Nicely done
September 3rd, 2026 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s beginning reminded me of Meatloaf and the song Paradise by the dashboard lights. A read that develops from someone looking for commitment to truth in communication. Nicely done
September 3rd, 2026 05:30
Enrapture
sorenbarrett said:
Poems and songs our wings to carry us through life. Here a poem to one loved and a promise to create two or three in a lifetime worthy of such love. Nicely done
September 2nd, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Poems and songs our wings to carry us through life. Here a poem to one loved and a promise to create two or three in a lifetime worthy of such love. Nicely done
September 2nd, 2026 04:27
Deep thoughts connection.
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you in this poem identifying with the general thought. Age takes its toll as cynicism grows. What was familiar now only a memory and what one sees one does not want to. A sad write of the world condition through the eyes of one that has seen better.
September 1st, 2026 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you in this poem identifying with the general thought. Age takes its toll as cynicism grows. What was familiar now only a memory and what one sees one does not want to. A sad write of the world condition through the eyes of one that has seen better.
September 1st, 2026 05:40
Beautiful to her.
sorenbarrett said:
This to me is a message of being taken for what lies inside not one\'s sexual appeal. Nicely written
August 31st, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
This to me is a message of being taken for what lies inside not one\'s sexual appeal. Nicely written
August 31st, 2026 04:38
Books of Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
This brought to mind how many times people assume that my poems are reflections of my life and how many times they are wrong and how many times they are right. One is wrong to assume for there are many secrets I would not tell while others I do freely. Nicely written
August 30th, 2026 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
This brought to mind how many times people assume that my poems are reflections of my life and how many times they are wrong and how many times they are right. One is wrong to assume for there are many secrets I would not tell while others I do freely. Nicely written
August 30th, 2026 06:38
Apathetic
sorenbarrett said:
A good write with a most positive attitude. My father was a prejudiced man not to skin color, religion, gender or sexuality but to peoples actions.
August 29th, 2026 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A good write with a most positive attitude. My father was a prejudiced man not to skin color, religion, gender or sexuality but to peoples actions.
August 29th, 2026 13:05
Fit in or die.
sorenbarrett said:
The message of this is priceless and gets the fave
August 19th, 2026 13:48
sorenbarrett said:
The message of this is priceless and gets the fave
August 19th, 2026 13:48
Old
sorenbarrett said:
Now why are you writing about me? A good write of a dark day in a season well spent going into winter. Well done
August 18th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Now why are you writing about me? A good write of a dark day in a season well spent going into winter. Well done
August 18th, 2026 04:15
Have no fear, A.I. is here.
Paul Bell said:
AI in the hands of the lunatics will do what pandemics couldn\'t, wipe us out.
It will also cure all illnesses, which is a contradiction in terms.
Will it make me a better footballer, or is that a step too far.
August 16th, 2026 08:26
Paul Bell said:
AI in the hands of the lunatics will do what pandemics couldn\'t, wipe us out.
It will also cure all illnesses, which is a contradiction in terms.
Will it make me a better footballer, or is that a step too far.
August 16th, 2026 08:26
Have no fear, A.I. is here.
sorenbarrett said:
Too much truth makes one doubt. Too much comfort makes one bored. Too much power makes one fear. Nicely written Aa
August 16th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Too much truth makes one doubt. Too much comfort makes one bored. Too much power makes one fear. Nicely written Aa
August 16th, 2026 04:25
L\'amour.
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely it feels renascence in nature and with a French touch. Lovely
August 15th, 2026 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely it feels renascence in nature and with a French touch. Lovely
August 15th, 2026 13:58
Fighting in the shopping centre.
sorenbarrett said:
Too many rats in a cage. Nicely written
August 14th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Too many rats in a cage. Nicely written
August 14th, 2026 04:22
Fighting in the shopping centre.
Paul Bell said:
Yes, a trip to the shops is like going to war now.
Actually, going to war is probably safer, they give you a rifle.
August 14th, 2026 03:37
Paul Bell said:
Yes, a trip to the shops is like going to war now.
Actually, going to war is probably safer, they give you a rifle.
August 14th, 2026 03:37
Have\'s and Have Not\'s.
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss and recognition that if one had tried a little harder life could have been much better. Well written
August 13th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss and recognition that if one had tried a little harder life could have been much better. Well written
August 13th, 2026 04:08
Criminal Mind
sorenbarrett said:
This is a story told well of one that may well be a serial killer or stalker or maybe just a philanderer. Well done
August 12th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
This is a story told well of one that may well be a serial killer or stalker or maybe just a philanderer. Well done
August 12th, 2026 03:52
Artificial Mind
sorenbarrett said:
AI on the loose and no one cares they just complain. Well any robbery or enslavement is the same. Well written
August 11th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
AI on the loose and no one cares they just complain. Well any robbery or enslavement is the same. Well written
August 11th, 2026 08:37
Artificial Mind
Thomas W Case said:
This is a frantic, paranoid ride through AI, technology, money, and the fear of unleashing something we can’t put back in the damn cage. The fractured rhythm fits the subject beautifully—it feels like the speaker is watching the machine accelerate while humanity scrambles to understand what it just created.
August 11th, 2026 06:52
Thomas W Case said:
This is a frantic, paranoid ride through AI, technology, money, and the fear of unleashing something we can’t put back in the damn cage. The fractured rhythm fits the subject beautifully—it feels like the speaker is watching the machine accelerate while humanity scrambles to understand what it just created.
August 11th, 2026 06:52
Swan Song
sorenbarrett said:
There is a wonderful contradiction in this poem in the line I want to fall in love. Like wanting a reflex or a autonomic response love can not be wished but must be felt. Yet there are those that work on loving someone and over time do so as in arranged marriages. Nicely said.
August 10th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
There is a wonderful contradiction in this poem in the line I want to fall in love. Like wanting a reflex or a autonomic response love can not be wished but must be felt. Yet there are those that work on loving someone and over time do so as in arranged marriages. Nicely said.
August 10th, 2026 03:57
The telling of my death.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks prophetically of death and knowing of it. Well done
August 9th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks prophetically of death and knowing of it. Well done
August 9th, 2026 04:18
Fly
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor. It takes the undesired and most loathsome creature (and so are some people or events) and treats it with compassion and understanding (as we should those things that annoy us) and simply asks that we free them. Our encounter with such annoyances are brief and better to let them go than dwell upon them or even try to destroy them. Very nicely presented in so few words. Loved it a fave
August 8th, 2026 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor. It takes the undesired and most loathsome creature (and so are some people or events) and treats it with compassion and understanding (as we should those things that annoy us) and simply asks that we free them. Our encounter with such annoyances are brief and better to let them go than dwell upon them or even try to destroy them. Very nicely presented in so few words. Loved it a fave
August 8th, 2026 15:31
Our Town
sorenbarrett said:
A creepy feeling in reading this poem. One never knows who one is dealing with. Well put in this write
August 4th, 2026 03:20
sorenbarrett said:
A creepy feeling in reading this poem. One never knows who one is dealing with. Well put in this write
August 4th, 2026 03:20
Stolen lyres.
sorenbarrett said:
The loss of a religious relationship put in metaphor. I think I have been there before. Well written in rhyme
July 21st, 2026 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
The loss of a religious relationship put in metaphor. I think I have been there before. Well written in rhyme
July 21st, 2026 08:20
Vintage.
sorenbarrett said:
It is always interesting to me what people label vintage or classic. Young kids call anything before this year vintage and anything pre 2020 classic. As for me anything before 1960 is vintage and pre 1900 is classic. As for black and white movies they have some of the best 12 Angry men a first rate movie even by Rotten Tomatoes, Citizen Kane another good one. Nicely written
July 18th, 2026 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
It is always interesting to me what people label vintage or classic. Young kids call anything before this year vintage and anything pre 2020 classic. As for me anything before 1960 is vintage and pre 1900 is classic. As for black and white movies they have some of the best 12 Angry men a first rate movie even by Rotten Tomatoes, Citizen Kane another good one. Nicely written
July 18th, 2026 09:48
An ode to a dear from Me.
sorenbarrett said:
A fun write of love where one is willing to do anything for the other but the least significant issue at the end puts an end to it all. Well done
July 16th, 2026 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
A fun write of love where one is willing to do anything for the other but the least significant issue at the end puts an end to it all. Well done
July 16th, 2026 14:28
Believe.
sorenbarrett said:
An obsession put in poem drawn like a magnet nicely written.
July 14th, 2026 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
An obsession put in poem drawn like a magnet nicely written.
July 14th, 2026 10:01
Little Lion.
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written a most encouraging poem and metaphor. Well done
July 13th, 2026 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written a most encouraging poem and metaphor. Well done
July 13th, 2026 14:36
Time for me to put the War back in Warcraft.
sorenbarrett said:
A deep dive into the world of warcraft and one is paid off in gold. Well done
July 12th, 2026 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
A deep dive into the world of warcraft and one is paid off in gold. Well done
July 12th, 2026 09:15
Time for me to put the War back in Warcraft.
rhmn_7 said:
Warcraft was never my thing but congratulations on building a half-million gold empire dear poet!
July 12th, 2026 08:06
rhmn_7 said:
Warcraft was never my thing but congratulations on building a half-million gold empire dear poet!
July 12th, 2026 08:06
The Great Unknown.
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic musing on the desirability of a mate or companion and the undesirability of self. Well written
July 11th, 2026 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic musing on the desirability of a mate or companion and the undesirability of self. Well written
July 11th, 2026 14:23
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