Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
More than Me.
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for love in this poem. Nicely written it calls out for someone.
December 26th, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for love in this poem. Nicely written it calls out for someone.
December 26th, 2025 05:15
New Reality
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely love declaration that speaks loudly. Nicely done Happy holiday
December 25th, 2025 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely love declaration that speaks loudly. Nicely done Happy holiday
December 25th, 2025 08:39
Black Lung
sorenbarrett said:
There is a pressure of time in this poem that speaks of life as fleeting and in so little time to accomplish what needs or wants to be done. A lovely write
December 21st, 2025 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
There is a pressure of time in this poem that speaks of life as fleeting and in so little time to accomplish what needs or wants to be done. A lovely write
December 21st, 2025 14:03
Now, Tomorrow and Always.
sorenbarrett said:
The plea of a man intent upon passion and the reluctance of a woman that withholds to experience reassurance. A lovely write
December 14th, 2025 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
The plea of a man intent upon passion and the reluctance of a woman that withholds to experience reassurance. A lovely write
December 14th, 2025 06:06
Futile
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic search for love in all the wrong places. Loved the line about love being on a different page. Well written
December 13th, 2025 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic search for love in all the wrong places. Loved the line about love being on a different page. Well written
December 13th, 2025 14:44
Timing
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem a plea for unity and to hear the words said. Nicely done
December 7th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem a plea for unity and to hear the words said. Nicely done
December 7th, 2025 05:28
Tired but kind
sorenbarrett said:
Exhaustion, tired , worn out all come through in this poem. A lovely write
December 6th, 2025 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
Exhaustion, tired , worn out all come through in this poem. A lovely write
December 6th, 2025 15:02
Love me silly
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that recognizes differences but wants to make connection. Very nicely done
December 4th, 2025 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that recognizes differences but wants to make connection. Very nicely done
December 4th, 2025 16:25
My Duality
sorenbarrett said:
I noted the similarities to the song Hurt with the reference to hole and sting in the beginning of the poem. There is also the \"I am there is no God\" a reference to the name of God I am that I am. One is one\'s own god. A most thought provoking read.
December 3rd, 2025 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
I noted the similarities to the song Hurt with the reference to hole and sting in the beginning of the poem. There is also the \"I am there is no God\" a reference to the name of God I am that I am. One is one\'s own god. A most thought provoking read.
December 3rd, 2025 05:57
Always, always
sorenbarrett said:
Full of examples as to why the author loves someone. Equally full of images it goes on to say that this will always be so. Nicely written
December 2nd, 2025 20:01
sorenbarrett said:
Full of examples as to why the author loves someone. Equally full of images it goes on to say that this will always be so. Nicely written
December 2nd, 2025 20:01
We are the innovator\'s
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of alliteration galore, enough to fill the belly of any desiring reader. A fun read
November 19th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of alliteration galore, enough to fill the belly of any desiring reader. A fun read
November 19th, 2025 05:02
His sand\'s of time
sorenbarrett said:
When we see someone being self destructive when or do we intervene and at what level or how. Great questions in metaphor or parable form. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 17:06
sorenbarrett said:
When we see someone being self destructive when or do we intervene and at what level or how. Great questions in metaphor or parable form. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 17:06
Got a boo-boo.
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting meter in this poem that speaks of illness and its resultant loss of energy and desire. Maybe a metaphoric cold? Nicely done.
November 5th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting meter in this poem that speaks of illness and its resultant loss of energy and desire. Maybe a metaphoric cold? Nicely done.
November 5th, 2025 08:18
The Everafter
sorenbarrett said:
A fling on a string, a night of passion. This poem feels free and easy so light.
October 19th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A fling on a string, a night of passion. This poem feels free and easy so light.
October 19th, 2025 04:42
Paragraph One
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of poems those of the writer and of others. Nicely done
October 18th, 2025 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of poems those of the writer and of others. Nicely done
October 18th, 2025 13:16
Outstanding!
sorenbarrett said:
There are many wanna be advisors and this raises the hackles on the back of many a person. A poem of rebellion. Lovely
October 16th, 2025 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
There are many wanna be advisors and this raises the hackles on the back of many a person. A poem of rebellion. Lovely
October 16th, 2025 13:22
I write fact as fiction
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that in its anguish of loss tells of dreams unmet and the sadness of being alone. Nicely done
October 12th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that in its anguish of loss tells of dreams unmet and the sadness of being alone. Nicely done
October 12th, 2025 04:08
Under Candle Light
sorenbarrett said:
As this poem winds its way through various thoughts it reflects on whether a person can see themself or not. nicely said
October 6th, 2025 14:51
sorenbarrett said:
As this poem winds its way through various thoughts it reflects on whether a person can see themself or not. nicely said
October 6th, 2025 14:51
\"Fore!\"
sorenbarrett said:
A collage of pictures painted in words of past snapshots brought into the present. Reminiscing over all most are discarded and one moves on to the lawn of the freeway. Such symbolism resides in this poem. Well done
October 1st, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
A collage of pictures painted in words of past snapshots brought into the present. Reminiscing over all most are discarded and one moves on to the lawn of the freeway. Such symbolism resides in this poem. Well done
October 1st, 2025 04:36
Soul Breaker
sorenbarrett said:
A breach of trust and a broken relationship. Life is tough and loving someone is tougher still. A sad write
September 29th, 2025 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
A breach of trust and a broken relationship. Life is tough and loving someone is tougher still. A sad write
September 29th, 2025 14:29
This is important...to you
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there is the intermingling of the terms love and passion. I make a distinction passion is wild and indiscriminate while love is calm and faithful a lovely write.
September 28th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there is the intermingling of the terms love and passion. I make a distinction passion is wild and indiscriminate while love is calm and faithful a lovely write.
September 28th, 2025 04:12
Blue Sky Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
A bright and happy poem of romance that is hopeful. So nice to hear and well penned. Good rhyme fills it and it flows well
September 25th, 2025 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A bright and happy poem of romance that is hopeful. So nice to hear and well penned. Good rhyme fills it and it flows well
September 25th, 2025 14:04
Hypocrite
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of attraction but strong differences prevent fulfillment of union. The incongruence leaves a great deal of tension and the inability to forget or let go of the thought. Nicely written
September 24th, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of attraction but strong differences prevent fulfillment of union. The incongruence leaves a great deal of tension and the inability to forget or let go of the thought. Nicely written
September 24th, 2025 06:52
There is no love here
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desire and possession that runs the gamut through its course. Lovely
September 22nd, 2025 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desire and possession that runs the gamut through its course. Lovely
September 22nd, 2025 13:01
The Emerald Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Emerald city? A reference to the land of Oz. A good read.
September 21st, 2025 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
Emerald city? A reference to the land of Oz. A good read.
September 21st, 2025 07:23
Just another story
sorenbarrett said:
We all are special in our own way and that is what make ordinary extraordinary. A fun read with meaning.
September 18th, 2025 16:59
sorenbarrett said:
We all are special in our own way and that is what make ordinary extraordinary. A fun read with meaning.
September 18th, 2025 16:59
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