Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
Right or wrong for me
Nubianpoet said:
I have found a treasure.
Keep writing!👍🏾😉
From a : Phenomenal Woman!
Continue to rise🌹
February 18th, 2024 09:49
Nubianpoet said:
I have found a treasure.
Keep writing!👍🏾😉
From a : Phenomenal Woman!
Continue to rise🌹
February 18th, 2024 09:49
An old poet
jarcher54 said:
You got me to take a look... and comment! LOL were you begging? Thanks for sharing this somewhat ominous piece and the feelings every poet shares!
January 28th, 2023 20:04
jarcher54 said:
You got me to take a look... and comment! LOL were you begging? Thanks for sharing this somewhat ominous piece and the feelings every poet shares!
January 28th, 2023 20:04
An old poet
danieloptera said:
I like your writing it rimes, I find that hard to do.
January 28th, 2023 10:21
danieloptera said:
I like your writing it rimes, I find that hard to do.
January 28th, 2023 10:21
All war is unjust
Doggerel Dave said:
And a full vote from me.
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
January 25th, 2023 19:11
Doggerel Dave said:
And a full vote from me.
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
January 25th, 2023 19:11
Deathly Stares
L. B. Mek said:
\'The faceless unseen, the unknown thingy, wotnot.\'
transcended mere words, to
so vividly emote, what
so many, incomprehensively feel
about the more divisively ethereal elements
in existence...
thanks for sharing, an intriguing read
November 4th, 2022 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'The faceless unseen, the unknown thingy, wotnot.\'
transcended mere words, to
so vividly emote, what
so many, incomprehensively feel
about the more divisively ethereal elements
in existence...
thanks for sharing, an intriguing read
November 4th, 2022 04:21
A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Coffin
Doggerel Dave said:
Well that\'s a relief - time to move on, perhaps?
September 30th, 2022 08:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Well that\'s a relief - time to move on, perhaps?
September 30th, 2022 08:41
Words care less
Accidental Poet said:
Caress your words for with your touch they care. Great write Aa. ; )
May 15th, 2021 14:28
Accidental Poet said:
Caress your words for with your touch they care. Great write Aa. ; )
May 15th, 2021 14:28
Unheard songs
dusk arising said:
Your last stanza would stand strong on its own here. Straight from the heart of a poet it connects so well.
May 14th, 2021 12:24
dusk arising said:
Your last stanza would stand strong on its own here. Straight from the heart of a poet it connects so well.
May 14th, 2021 12:24
The same old love story
Accidental Poet said:
How about reexamining what brought you both together in the first place. Might that spark still be there? Great write Aa. ; )
May 12th, 2021 19:23
Accidental Poet said:
How about reexamining what brought you both together in the first place. Might that spark still be there? Great write Aa. ; )
May 12th, 2021 19:23
The Quickening of the Heart
Accidental Poet said:
No man is a loser who has the capacity to love another. Excellent write Aa. ; ) AP
May 11th, 2021 12:59
Accidental Poet said:
No man is a loser who has the capacity to love another. Excellent write Aa. ; ) AP
May 11th, 2021 12:59
Make the world Greta again.
L. B. Mek said:
such writes, are ever Timely and always Important
for the Awareness they help create..
thanks for sharing
(although I\'m more Sympathetic - for, that poor childless-Greta
than, Inspired-by, her Self sacrificing laudable goals: to be Honest...
her Parents seem so Clueless
in their dereliction of Duty: by ignoring
what\'s best for her Sanity;
\'from my overtly unjust, cowardly opinionated
armchair Commentator\'s, backseat perception...\')
May 10th, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
such writes, are ever Timely and always Important
for the Awareness they help create..
thanks for sharing
(although I\'m more Sympathetic - for, that poor childless-Greta
than, Inspired-by, her Self sacrificing laudable goals: to be Honest...
her Parents seem so Clueless
in their dereliction of Duty: by ignoring
what\'s best for her Sanity;
\'from my overtly unjust, cowardly opinionated
armchair Commentator\'s, backseat perception...\')
May 10th, 2021 05:24
Make the world Greta again.
Doggerel Dave said:
Well that\'s laid it out for everybody. Can\'t thank you enough, Aa.
So forget Nature and \'all will be well\'. It is OK for us old \'uns - it most probably will be during the time we have left. But for the younger members of MPS, Forget your surging hormones, Love unrequited and life inside your own head - turn your focus out, realize relatively speaking you haven\'t got much time left.
May 9th, 2021 19:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Well that\'s laid it out for everybody. Can\'t thank you enough, Aa.
So forget Nature and \'all will be well\'. It is OK for us old \'uns - it most probably will be during the time we have left. But for the younger members of MPS, Forget your surging hormones, Love unrequited and life inside your own head - turn your focus out, realize relatively speaking you haven\'t got much time left.
May 9th, 2021 19:28
Almost broken
L. B. Mek said:
if you put your last stanza\'s lyrics, to the Rocky soundtrack
you\'ll have a winner overnight!
\'I definitely feel like a lengthy (5 min) jog, ending with (a few) step climbing, Y fist pumping: (conservative) celebrations\'! wooooot, lol
forgive my silliness, you\'ve penned a fantastic write, dear poet
May 7th, 2021 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
if you put your last stanza\'s lyrics, to the Rocky soundtrack
you\'ll have a winner overnight!
\'I definitely feel like a lengthy (5 min) jog, ending with (a few) step climbing, Y fist pumping: (conservative) celebrations\'! wooooot, lol
forgive my silliness, you\'ve penned a fantastic write, dear poet
May 7th, 2021 06:16
My love continues
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like the mention of nature jn this . Lovely words 🙂
May 7th, 2021 01:06
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like the mention of nature jn this . Lovely words 🙂
May 7th, 2021 01:06
Almost broken
Accidental Poet said:
Grand slam with this one Aa. Great write. ; ) AP.
May 6th, 2021 18:31
Accidental Poet said:
Grand slam with this one Aa. Great write. ; ) AP.
May 6th, 2021 18:31
One love
L. B. Mek said:
I too know that song
it has a sobering melody: truly...
thanks for sharing!
January 19th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
I too know that song
it has a sobering melody: truly...
thanks for sharing!
January 19th, 2021 06:08
Justify
L. B. Mek said:
and where exactly do you presume \'you\' will \'remain\' oh \'enlightened sentient\' of all-things warped: dreary, bleak and fear derived to infantile notions from self-justifying coercive fatalism of shared pathological thought\'s...
lol, you\'re so cute, with your hands still outstretched \'after all these years\' screaming, love me, want me, See Me!
we do, we just moved-on from that entitlement fuelled self-indulgent, whingey victim mentality - a long, long time ago,
when we \'blinkered\' few realised: what you will too - someday,
cry all you want, but life operates best when we actualise our own fates!
see there\'s no conveniently \'free\' to answer your call for help, unless you reach-out - willingly and seek that help, waiting on you to value your own self: first,
then we too - can intrust a part of ourselves in your cause...
we live in a shitty world, yup how profound your realisation\'s read, truly how useful all that insight you spew... lol
lol thanks for sharing your entertainingly impassioned writes,
hopefully I matched your strain of vehemence in my pitiful words of this scribbled reply I\'m certain you\'ll detest,
sincere apologies in advance if my take on reality upsets your sensibilities dear Poet, keep that mighty Pen flowing!
January 8th, 2021 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
and where exactly do you presume \'you\' will \'remain\' oh \'enlightened sentient\' of all-things warped: dreary, bleak and fear derived to infantile notions from self-justifying coercive fatalism of shared pathological thought\'s...
lol, you\'re so cute, with your hands still outstretched \'after all these years\' screaming, love me, want me, See Me!
we do, we just moved-on from that entitlement fuelled self-indulgent, whingey victim mentality - a long, long time ago,
when we \'blinkered\' few realised: what you will too - someday,
cry all you want, but life operates best when we actualise our own fates!
see there\'s no conveniently \'free\' to answer your call for help, unless you reach-out - willingly and seek that help, waiting on you to value your own self: first,
then we too - can intrust a part of ourselves in your cause...
we live in a shitty world, yup how profound your realisation\'s read, truly how useful all that insight you spew... lol
lol thanks for sharing your entertainingly impassioned writes,
hopefully I matched your strain of vehemence in my pitiful words of this scribbled reply I\'m certain you\'ll detest,
sincere apologies in advance if my take on reality upsets your sensibilities dear Poet, keep that mighty Pen flowing!
January 8th, 2021 06:32
It\'s the hope that kills you
Jerry Reynolds said:
Flows really well. Stay Safe.
January 6th, 2021 09:21
Jerry Reynolds said:
Flows really well. Stay Safe.
January 6th, 2021 09:21
Hard-bitten
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s a pretty world if your mind is blind.\'
how jarring these words read, when I consider they\'re written by someone who chuckles along reading Terry Pratchett\'s floating Turtle perspective\'s of life, lol
January 5th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s a pretty world if your mind is blind.\'
how jarring these words read, when I consider they\'re written by someone who chuckles along reading Terry Pratchett\'s floating Turtle perspective\'s of life, lol
January 5th, 2021 05:06
Black hole soul
L. B. Mek said:
bleak be that outlook that nurtures that sweet spot between dulled indifference to life and the edges of Abyss to nullified existence...
Seek no warmth if your blood \'chooses\' to run smoother when nurtured by the cold of surrendered hope.
Ignore us naïve fools who peddle all that Toxic Positivity and pity us, somewhat: for we dare not face that morose truth of despair, you have the bravery to walk within.
But, dear brother I beg - may you never forget: even swimming in those deep pools of depression, you remain a child of \'CHOICE\'!
You \'choose\' to be brave and not look away, to hide within normality\'s easy streets of conformity!
You \'choose\' to ink your pain, so that other\'s who feel the same may know: they are not alone!
YOU CHOOSE: so choose, dear brother to Survive and sing that song for the broken hearted
and we feeble few, who dare to meet you - even if only across a bandwidth of binary digits, promise to continue, listening as best we can,
until you\'ve sang your life\'s song, as only You Can, one brave breath at a time...
Have the New Year you want, dear Poet!
stay safe and colour the sky\'s blue with your swear words (it helps - sometimes),
thanks for sharing!
December 31st, 2020 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
bleak be that outlook that nurtures that sweet spot between dulled indifference to life and the edges of Abyss to nullified existence...
Seek no warmth if your blood \'chooses\' to run smoother when nurtured by the cold of surrendered hope.
Ignore us naïve fools who peddle all that Toxic Positivity and pity us, somewhat: for we dare not face that morose truth of despair, you have the bravery to walk within.
But, dear brother I beg - may you never forget: even swimming in those deep pools of depression, you remain a child of \'CHOICE\'!
You \'choose\' to be brave and not look away, to hide within normality\'s easy streets of conformity!
You \'choose\' to ink your pain, so that other\'s who feel the same may know: they are not alone!
YOU CHOOSE: so choose, dear brother to Survive and sing that song for the broken hearted
and we feeble few, who dare to meet you - even if only across a bandwidth of binary digits, promise to continue, listening as best we can,
until you\'ve sang your life\'s song, as only You Can, one brave breath at a time...
Have the New Year you want, dear Poet!
stay safe and colour the sky\'s blue with your swear words (it helps - sometimes),
thanks for sharing!
December 31st, 2020 05:11
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