Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
Under Candle Light
sorenbarrett said:
As this poem winds its way through various thoughts it reflects on whether a person can see themself or not. nicely said
October 6th, 2025 14:51
sorenbarrett said:
As this poem winds its way through various thoughts it reflects on whether a person can see themself or not. nicely said
October 6th, 2025 14:51
\"Fore!\"
sorenbarrett said:
A collage of pictures painted in words of past snapshots brought into the present. Reminiscing over all most are discarded and one moves on to the lawn of the freeway. Such symbolism resides in this poem. Well done
October 1st, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
A collage of pictures painted in words of past snapshots brought into the present. Reminiscing over all most are discarded and one moves on to the lawn of the freeway. Such symbolism resides in this poem. Well done
October 1st, 2025 04:36
Soul Breaker
sorenbarrett said:
A breach of trust and a broken relationship. Life is tough and loving someone is tougher still. A sad write
September 29th, 2025 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
A breach of trust and a broken relationship. Life is tough and loving someone is tougher still. A sad write
September 29th, 2025 14:29
This is important...to you
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there is the intermingling of the terms love and passion. I make a distinction passion is wild and indiscriminate while love is calm and faithful a lovely write.
September 28th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there is the intermingling of the terms love and passion. I make a distinction passion is wild and indiscriminate while love is calm and faithful a lovely write.
September 28th, 2025 04:12
Blue Sky Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
A bright and happy poem of romance that is hopeful. So nice to hear and well penned. Good rhyme fills it and it flows well
September 25th, 2025 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A bright and happy poem of romance that is hopeful. So nice to hear and well penned. Good rhyme fills it and it flows well
September 25th, 2025 14:04
Hypocrite
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of attraction but strong differences prevent fulfillment of union. The incongruence leaves a great deal of tension and the inability to forget or let go of the thought. Nicely written
September 24th, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of attraction but strong differences prevent fulfillment of union. The incongruence leaves a great deal of tension and the inability to forget or let go of the thought. Nicely written
September 24th, 2025 06:52
There is no love here
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desire and possession that runs the gamut through its course. Lovely
September 22nd, 2025 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desire and possession that runs the gamut through its course. Lovely
September 22nd, 2025 13:01
The Emerald Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Emerald city? A reference to the land of Oz. A good read.
September 21st, 2025 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
Emerald city? A reference to the land of Oz. A good read.
September 21st, 2025 07:23
Just another story
sorenbarrett said:
We all are special in our own way and that is what make ordinary extraordinary. A fun read with meaning.
September 18th, 2025 16:59
sorenbarrett said:
We all are special in our own way and that is what make ordinary extraordinary. A fun read with meaning.
September 18th, 2025 16:59
When you love someone
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the sadness in this poem of lost love. Nicely written
September 16th, 2025 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the sadness in this poem of lost love. Nicely written
September 16th, 2025 16:02
Big ol\' Big Mac
sorenbarrett said:
I hear not only exhaustion in this poem but loss of ambition. A general feeling of malaise falls over this write. Nicely worded.
September 14th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
I hear not only exhaustion in this poem but loss of ambition. A general feeling of malaise falls over this write. Nicely worded.
September 14th, 2025 05:42
A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Sightless
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
I love this. Beautifully written.
September 10th, 2025 09:49
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
I love this. Beautifully written.
September 10th, 2025 09:49
A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Sightless
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of love and the desire for it. Nicely penned
September 10th, 2025 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of love and the desire for it. Nicely penned
September 10th, 2025 08:17
Morning Beautiful
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
“lost in your spheres, like I have been for a thousand years” dreamy, timeless love imagery.
The repetition of listening “open ears”emphasizes devotion and presence. This is beautiful.
September 8th, 2025 16:15
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
“lost in your spheres, like I have been for a thousand years” dreamy, timeless love imagery.
The repetition of listening “open ears”emphasizes devotion and presence. This is beautiful.
September 8th, 2025 16:15
Morning Beautiful
sorenbarrett said:
I have not heard it but it seems a beautiful concept and reminds me of a video by Lara Fabian Je suis de toi that is close to this theme and I highly recomend you watch it. Watch the video not just her album song.
September 8th, 2025 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
I have not heard it but it seems a beautiful concept and reminds me of a video by Lara Fabian Je suis de toi that is close to this theme and I highly recomend you watch it. Watch the video not just her album song.
September 8th, 2025 12:26
A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Sand
sorenbarrett said:
Motivational and inspirational asking for devotion and patience. Nicely written
September 7th, 2025 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
Motivational and inspirational asking for devotion and patience. Nicely written
September 7th, 2025 14:18
We write poetry
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful love poem of life through the years that all that have had a long relationship can identify with. Very nicely done
September 6th, 2025 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful love poem of life through the years that all that have had a long relationship can identify with. Very nicely done
September 6th, 2025 05:38
Eternal Destiny
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing with remorse over a lost love. This poem has good flow and with some rhyme and semi rhyme it has a beat. Well done
September 5th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing with remorse over a lost love. This poem has good flow and with some rhyme and semi rhyme it has a beat. Well done
September 5th, 2025 04:15
Ex-WoW Players Hate Me
sorenbarrett said:
This seems very rap like and carries the heaviness and anger of rap and punk. I liked the flow and rhyme scheme. Well done that\'s a wrap.
September 4th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
This seems very rap like and carries the heaviness and anger of rap and punk. I liked the flow and rhyme scheme. Well done that\'s a wrap.
September 4th, 2025 04:55
Power
sorenbarrett said:
There are those that will be kind a few that may be harsh and many that don\'t read just passing by. As for me I read to enjoy. A good read
September 3rd, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
There are those that will be kind a few that may be harsh and many that don\'t read just passing by. As for me I read to enjoy. A good read
September 3rd, 2025 04:58
Well said.
Aa Harvey said:
I can talk easier through poems then I can have a conversation with a real human being.
I see ordinary people telling ordinary lies and I try to tell the truth whenever it is possible and the lies just eat away my soul.
People see people who have done nothing wrong in an ugly way sometimes.
The world is constantly out of sync with what it should be and people are broken and often wrong.
When the world is having a good day there is always someone there to point the finger and say \"The End Is Nigh!\"
I kneel before anybody and agree they are better than me in every way and still I want nothing from them.
September 2nd, 2025 17:20
Aa Harvey said:
I can talk easier through poems then I can have a conversation with a real human being.
I see ordinary people telling ordinary lies and I try to tell the truth whenever it is possible and the lies just eat away my soul.
People see people who have done nothing wrong in an ugly way sometimes.
The world is constantly out of sync with what it should be and people are broken and often wrong.
When the world is having a good day there is always someone there to point the finger and say \"The End Is Nigh!\"
I kneel before anybody and agree they are better than me in every way and still I want nothing from them.
September 2nd, 2025 17:20
Well said.
Doggerel Dave said:
So it is your wish to always speak in metaphor? Why? Because reality is too.......
September 2nd, 2025 17:12
Doggerel Dave said:
So it is your wish to always speak in metaphor? Why? Because reality is too.......
September 2nd, 2025 17:12
Well said.
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written. Why is it that people have such a difficult time understanding metaphor and take everything literally? A good write
September 2nd, 2025 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written. Why is it that people have such a difficult time understanding metaphor and take everything literally? A good write
September 2nd, 2025 12:50
Always
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of dreams, belief and a charmed life. Nicely written
September 1st, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of dreams, belief and a charmed life. Nicely written
September 1st, 2025 04:40
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