Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
Empty voice
Elegant_Style said:
!!!!!!! hooray !!!!!!!!! awesome poem about writers block so I guess since you were able to wright it you don;t have it anymore??
December 10th, 2016 16:41
Elegant_Style said:
!!!!!!! hooray !!!!!!!!! awesome poem about writers block so I guess since you were able to wright it you don;t have it anymore??
December 10th, 2016 16:41
Empty voice
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the frustration of being blocked in your poem. Excellent job.
December 10th, 2016 08:21
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the frustration of being blocked in your poem. Excellent job.
December 10th, 2016 08:21
Give me a reason
gelyn said:
Hi,
An astonishing write and I enjoyed reading this. ...let\'s dig some gems here
I am love, I am fallen,
I am many faces of many men.
I am man, I am woman,
I am myself and many others.
I am right, I am wrong,
I am the son of my mother.
I could end up becoming your lover,
But I shall never proclaim to be anything more than I am; my reader.
^^^^^
this particular stanza keeps running into my head. . it\'s like a song. ... and I love it....
I like how you contradict yourself here
a paradoxical stanza. ..
Well done. ..
Gel
December 9th, 2016 18:48
gelyn said:
Hi,
An astonishing write and I enjoyed reading this. ...let\'s dig some gems here
I am love, I am fallen,
I am many faces of many men.
I am man, I am woman,
I am myself and many others.
I am right, I am wrong,
I am the son of my mother.
I could end up becoming your lover,
But I shall never proclaim to be anything more than I am; my reader.
^^^^^
this particular stanza keeps running into my head. . it\'s like a song. ... and I love it....
I like how you contradict yourself here
a paradoxical stanza. ..
Well done. ..
Gel
December 9th, 2016 18:48
Give me a reason
Tony36 said:
Writing poems is a a great way to show your life. I\'ve been writing my whole life, Great write
December 9th, 2016 14:35
Tony36 said:
Writing poems is a a great way to show your life. I\'ve been writing my whole life, Great write
December 9th, 2016 14:35
Give me a reason
Quemis said:
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awesome! that is alot of poems. You can do it!
December 9th, 2016 10:45
Quemis said:
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awesome! that is alot of poems. You can do it!
December 9th, 2016 10:45
Plant a thought
Quemis said:
I like the first two blocks a tonnnn.
The first two lines of the second block sound amazing when I read them in my head and say them outloud.
December 9th, 2016 01:20
Quemis said:
I like the first two blocks a tonnnn.
The first two lines of the second block sound amazing when I read them in my head and say them outloud.
December 9th, 2016 01:20
The poet condemned
Quemis said:
If the fact that the rhythm is so much more pronounced early in piece is on purpose, your a genius.
Either way, really awesome, really cool. Great job yet again demon.
December 9th, 2016 01:10
Quemis said:
If the fact that the rhythm is so much more pronounced early in piece is on purpose, your a genius.
Either way, really awesome, really cool. Great job yet again demon.
December 9th, 2016 01:10
Survival of the fittest
Elegant_Style said:
i was very shaken when the bird died.... and then you bring in the cat and I had to laugh. A marvelous creation!!
December 6th, 2016 17:13
Elegant_Style said:
i was very shaken when the bird died.... and then you bring in the cat and I had to laugh. A marvelous creation!!
December 6th, 2016 17:13
United states
Augustus said:
Oh this is so refreshing compared to much of the rhetoric today. A toast to you sir!
December 5th, 2016 23:02
Augustus said:
Oh this is so refreshing compared to much of the rhetoric today. A toast to you sir!
December 5th, 2016 23:02
United states
Christina8 said:
I really liked your poem. It lists what makes us unique. i really like the last line. Very clever.
December 5th, 2016 13:04
Christina8 said:
I really liked your poem. It lists what makes us unique. i really like the last line. Very clever.
December 5th, 2016 13:04
An empty soul
SabreLi said:
I love this amazing piece, one of my favourites for sure! I am a fan of rhyme anyway, but it is lines that paint a picture such as \'I can change a heart in the middle of a scream\' and verses which carry true meaning and messages that really do it for me. The whole piece wraps up incredibly allowing the reader to interpret that they can take their life into their own hands - fate is not foretold! xx
December 4th, 2016 14:25
SabreLi said:
I love this amazing piece, one of my favourites for sure! I am a fan of rhyme anyway, but it is lines that paint a picture such as \'I can change a heart in the middle of a scream\' and verses which carry true meaning and messages that really do it for me. The whole piece wraps up incredibly allowing the reader to interpret that they can take their life into their own hands - fate is not foretold! xx
December 4th, 2016 14:25
Attraction
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Very appealing and emotive as u poetically in awesome rhyming try to verify the feelings and verify about her love. Superb epic muse. The description is beautiful here. Kudos.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . Pls don\'t forget to. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it
December 4th, 2016 08:06
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Very appealing and emotive as u poetically in awesome rhyming try to verify the feelings and verify about her love. Superb epic muse. The description is beautiful here. Kudos.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . Pls don\'t forget to. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it
December 4th, 2016 08:06
The poem for every female
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HARVEY ~ This is a poem I wish I\'d written but I have posted similar. You echo my sntiments~ I treat every FEMALE as an ANGEL because they are. Thanks for caring ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
December 1st, 2016 08:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HARVEY ~ This is a poem I wish I\'d written but I have posted similar. You echo my sntiments~ I treat every FEMALE as an ANGEL because they are. Thanks for caring ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
December 1st, 2016 08:35
Robotic
SabreLi said:
I love this one; a real unique masterpiece (again) and such an interesting view on everyday life. I feel like everyone around me is trapped in some kind of matrix when I go into work each day, or when I am in the shop or the street, it seems like no one can break out of their robotic monotonous shell; but of course we all can if we call upon our inner strength. Thank you for posting a great piece that I have really enjoyed reading :) xx
November 30th, 2016 15:26
SabreLi said:
I love this one; a real unique masterpiece (again) and such an interesting view on everyday life. I feel like everyone around me is trapped in some kind of matrix when I go into work each day, or when I am in the shop or the street, it seems like no one can break out of their robotic monotonous shell; but of course we all can if we call upon our inner strength. Thank you for posting a great piece that I have really enjoyed reading :) xx
November 30th, 2016 15:26
Nobody but me and my crow
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow, this was very well written and sooooooo depressing at the same time....nicely done..GOTHIC is a great way to categorize it
November 30th, 2016 07:28
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow, this was very well written and sooooooo depressing at the same time....nicely done..GOTHIC is a great way to categorize it
November 30th, 2016 07:28
Girl with the black cloud
WriteBeLight said:
Mind blowing! Well written, very clear this person is smitten.
November 28th, 2016 08:41
WriteBeLight said:
Mind blowing! Well written, very clear this person is smitten.
November 28th, 2016 08:41
Jack and Jill : Enter the Matrix
SabreLi said:
I really love this piece, very well written :) Such realism described potently and the realisation that with the choice they made - they made their beds and must now lie in them! Nods to both titular works went down well, and the whole piece was wound together nicely though their journey exposing both the cowardice of the two and the future they have sown for the next generation. Look forward to your next work :) xx
November 27th, 2016 18:20
SabreLi said:
I really love this piece, very well written :) Such realism described potently and the realisation that with the choice they made - they made their beds and must now lie in them! Nods to both titular works went down well, and the whole piece was wound together nicely though their journey exposing both the cowardice of the two and the future they have sown for the next generation. Look forward to your next work :) xx
November 27th, 2016 18:20
Him
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This was such an awesome liege to read. Thank you for your time.
~RTBH~
November 25th, 2016 11:45
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This was such an awesome liege to read. Thank you for your time.
~RTBH~
November 25th, 2016 11:45
Him
WriteBeLight said:
Oscar Wilde said, \"Be yourself. Everyone else is taken.\" I liked your poem.
November 25th, 2016 08:14
WriteBeLight said:
Oscar Wilde said, \"Be yourself. Everyone else is taken.\" I liked your poem.
November 25th, 2016 08:14
Sweet dreams are made of cheese
Augustus said:
Alright, I\'m a Brie lover. I can live with that. Good job.
November 22nd, 2016 14:44
Augustus said:
Alright, I\'m a Brie lover. I can live with that. Good job.
November 22nd, 2016 14:44
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