Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey



The poet condemned
Quemis said:

If the fact that the rhythm is so much more pronounced early in piece is on purpose, your a genius.

Either way, really awesome, really cool. Great job yet again demon.

December 9th, 2016 01:10

The poet condemned
Augustus said:

I love the banter. Excellent

December 8th, 2016 12:19

Survival of the fittest
Elegant_Style said:

i was very shaken when the bird died.... and then you bring in the cat and I had to laugh. A marvelous creation!!

December 6th, 2016 17:13

United states
Augustus said:

Oh this is so refreshing compared to much of the rhetoric today. A toast to you sir!

December 5th, 2016 23:02

United states
Tony36 said:

Really enjoyed it, great write

December 5th, 2016 14:37

United states
Christina8 said:

I really liked your poem. It lists what makes us unique. i really like the last line. Very clever.

December 5th, 2016 13:04

An empty soul
SabreLi said:

I love this amazing piece, one of my favourites for sure! I am a fan of rhyme anyway, but it is lines that paint a picture such as \'I can change a heart in the middle of a scream\' and verses which carry true meaning and messages that really do it for me. The whole piece wraps up incredibly allowing the reader to interpret that they can take their life into their own hands - fate is not foretold! xx

December 4th, 2016 14:25

Attraction
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Very appealing and emotive as u poetically in awesome rhyming try to verify the feelings and verify about her love. Superb epic muse. The description is beautiful here. Kudos.

U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . Pls don\'t forget to. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it

December 4th, 2016 08:06

The poem for every female
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks HARVEY ~ This is a poem I wish I\'d written but I have posted similar. You echo my sntiments~ I treat every FEMALE as an ANGEL because they are. Thanks for caring ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN

December 1st, 2016 08:35

Robotic
SabreLi said:

I love this one; a real unique masterpiece (again) and such an interesting view on everyday life. I feel like everyone around me is trapped in some kind of matrix when I go into work each day, or when I am in the shop or the street, it seems like no one can break out of their robotic monotonous shell; but of course we all can if we call upon our inner strength. Thank you for posting a great piece that I have really enjoyed reading :) xx

November 30th, 2016 15:26

Nobody but me and my crow
Tony36 said:

Wow Awesome write

November 30th, 2016 14:07

Nobody but me and my crow
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Wow, this was very well written and sooooooo depressing at the same time....nicely done..GOTHIC is a great way to categorize it

November 30th, 2016 07:28

Robotic
Yorke said:

I like it a lot!

November 29th, 2016 16:08

Girl with the black cloud
Tony36 said:

Wow!

November 28th, 2016 11:27

Girl with the black cloud
WriteBeLight said:

Mind blowing! Well written, very clear this person is smitten.

November 28th, 2016 08:41

Jack and Jill : Enter the Matrix
SabreLi said:

I really love this piece, very well written :) Such realism described potently and the realisation that with the choice they made - they made their beds and must now lie in them! Nods to both titular works went down well, and the whole piece was wound together nicely though their journey exposing both the cowardice of the two and the future they have sown for the next generation. Look forward to your next work :) xx

November 27th, 2016 18:20

Him
P.H.Rose said:

Great poem...
Well done...

November 25th, 2016 19:40

Him
Rosethebrokenhearted said:

This was such an awesome liege to read. Thank you for your time.
~RTBH~

November 25th, 2016 11:45

Him
Tony36 said:

Awesome Awesome write

November 25th, 2016 08:34

Him
WriteBeLight said:

Oscar Wilde said, \"Be yourself. Everyone else is taken.\" I liked your poem.

November 25th, 2016 08:14

A perfect beauty
Elegant_Style said:

!!!!!!Amazing!!!!!!

November 24th, 2016 23:52

A perfect beauty
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 24th, 2016 09:32

Sweet dreams are made of cheese
Augustus said:

Alright, I\'m a Brie lover. I can live with that. Good job.

November 22nd, 2016 14:44

Sweet dreams are made of cheese
Marie Braden said:

This is so funny!!!!!

November 22nd, 2016 12:21

You\'re not even
Christina8 said:

This is an excellent poem. It speaks to what true and everlasting love is. Amazing!--Christina

November 21st, 2016 16:37

You\'re not even
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

November 21st, 2016 14:28

If...
TyKy said:

This is really good!

November 20th, 2016 15:38

If...
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 20th, 2016 09:14

The Endless Poem : Part one - Requiem
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 17th, 2016 09:27

I had a life
Augustus said:

Well written, thought provoking, powerful yet sweet and gentle.

November 16th, 2016 14:50



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