Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
Shatterproof
notapoet said:
If you are as talented with a guitar as you are with the pen this could be a great song.. just my two cents anyway.... Great write!
January 24th, 2017 16:30
notapoet said:
If you are as talented with a guitar as you are with the pen this could be a great song.. just my two cents anyway.... Great write!
January 24th, 2017 16:30
Strength
Augustus said:
Beautiful thoughts. Saddened by those shattered. Hugs.
January 23rd, 2017 17:43
Augustus said:
Beautiful thoughts. Saddened by those shattered. Hugs.
January 23rd, 2017 17:43
In need of being loved
Augustus said:
I don\'t have much to offer but my love?
Heartfelt .
January 22nd, 2017 19:51
Augustus said:
I don\'t have much to offer but my love?
Heartfelt .
January 22nd, 2017 19:51
Close enough to criticize
P.H.Rose said:
This is so very good
Aa.. I am exactly as you
Put..words arrive in my
Head and just jot them down.
I have a favourite line
Of mine similar to yours.
\"Paper and pen are my
Tools of trade\"....not
Fist for violence made..
Well done !!!!
January 21st, 2017 19:56
P.H.Rose said:
This is so very good
Aa.. I am exactly as you
Put..words arrive in my
Head and just jot them down.
I have a favourite line
Of mine similar to yours.
\"Paper and pen are my
Tools of trade\"....not
Fist for violence made..
Well done !!!!
January 21st, 2017 19:56
Close enough to criticize
Christina8 said:
Awesome poem. I really liked the first stanza. Absolutely blunt and honest. Love your poetry--Christina
January 21st, 2017 10:37
Christina8 said:
Awesome poem. I really liked the first stanza. Absolutely blunt and honest. Love your poetry--Christina
January 21st, 2017 10:37
All that we are
Augustus said:
I read this is even though we are apart I still love you, knowing the bond is broken. Nicely done.
January 19th, 2017 11:57
Augustus said:
I read this is even though we are apart I still love you, knowing the bond is broken. Nicely done.
January 19th, 2017 11:57
This is mine
Christina8 said:
Great poem! The last line says a lot. \"we will never feel the same pain\". I feel sad sometimes too. And poetry helps like I see it does you. I hope you feel better real soon!--Christina
January 18th, 2017 14:24
Christina8 said:
Great poem! The last line says a lot. \"we will never feel the same pain\". I feel sad sometimes too. And poetry helps like I see it does you. I hope you feel better real soon!--Christina
January 18th, 2017 14:24
This is mine
Corey said:
In real life, no one has a wonderful day, every day. It\'s ok if we find ourselves in a place of darkness. What\'s important is to not remain there. Thanks for sharing such an honest piece. Well done!
January 18th, 2017 14:07
Corey said:
In real life, no one has a wonderful day, every day. It\'s ok if we find ourselves in a place of darkness. What\'s important is to not remain there. Thanks for sharing such an honest piece. Well done!
January 18th, 2017 14:07
This is mine
notapoet said:
Loved your poem, I too release my feelings and emotions through my words and find it very cathartic. Although my days are now filled with much love and happiness the dark sadness still creeps in from time to time. Excellent write!!
January 18th, 2017 11:01
notapoet said:
Loved your poem, I too release my feelings and emotions through my words and find it very cathartic. Although my days are now filled with much love and happiness the dark sadness still creeps in from time to time. Excellent write!!
January 18th, 2017 11:01
This is mine
Ks24 said:
I know how you feel but things get better if you just stick in there and if you ever need someone to talk to I can make some time to listen
January 18th, 2017 08:50
Ks24 said:
I know how you feel but things get better if you just stick in there and if you ever need someone to talk to I can make some time to listen
January 18th, 2017 08:50
There is no fate...
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written and expressed Great write
January 17th, 2017 14:02
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written and expressed Great write
January 17th, 2017 14:02
I have seen it all
Fay Slimm. said:
Apt question to end this gentle appeal - - good read.
January 16th, 2017 10:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Apt question to end this gentle appeal - - good read.
January 16th, 2017 10:04
I am becoming
Augustus said:
Love sheds light on duality so you can become all you are meant to be. Love the way you expressed.
January 13th, 2017 21:29
Augustus said:
Love sheds light on duality so you can become all you are meant to be. Love the way you expressed.
January 13th, 2017 21:29
I am becoming
Phoenix8523 said:
Love the line \"the canvas is not unused, it has just not been revealed yet\"! Your poem touched me deeply. -- phoenix
January 13th, 2017 11:25
Phoenix8523 said:
Love the line \"the canvas is not unused, it has just not been revealed yet\"! Your poem touched me deeply. -- phoenix
January 13th, 2017 11:25
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