Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey



In need of being loved
Augustus said:

I don\'t have much to offer but my love?
Heartfelt .

January 22nd, 2017 19:51

Close enough to criticize
P.H.Rose said:

This is so very good
Aa.. I am exactly as you
Put..words arrive in my
Head and just jot them down.
I have a favourite line
Of mine similar to yours.
\"Paper and pen are my
Tools of trade\"....not
Fist for violence made..
Well done !!!!

January 21st, 2017 19:56

Close enough to criticize
Christina8 said:

Awesome poem. I really liked the first stanza. Absolutely blunt and honest. Love your poetry--Christina

January 21st, 2017 10:37

Close enough to criticize
Augustus said:

Love the sentiments expressed.

January 21st, 2017 10:18

Close enough to criticize
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

January 21st, 2017 08:52

We are the nothing
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

January 20th, 2017 09:12

All that we are
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed Great write

January 19th, 2017 14:15

All that we are
Augustus said:

I read this is even though we are apart I still love you, knowing the bond is broken. Nicely done.

January 19th, 2017 11:57

All that we are
Francesco said:

Very nice! Thank you for sharing.

January 19th, 2017 10:06

This is mine
Christina8 said:

Great poem! The last line says a lot. \"we will never feel the same pain\". I feel sad sometimes too. And poetry helps like I see it does you. I hope you feel better real soon!--Christina

January 18th, 2017 14:24

This is mine
Corey said:

In real life, no one has a wonderful day, every day. It\'s ok if we find ourselves in a place of darkness. What\'s important is to not remain there. Thanks for sharing such an honest piece. Well done!

January 18th, 2017 14:07

This is mine
Tony36 said:

Great write. Hope things start to look up soon

January 18th, 2017 11:45

This is mine
notapoet said:

Loved your poem, I too release my feelings and emotions through my words and find it very cathartic. Although my days are now filled with much love and happiness the dark sadness still creeps in from time to time. Excellent write!!

January 18th, 2017 11:01

This is mine
Ks24 said:

I know how you feel but things get better if you just stick in there and if you ever need someone to talk to I can make some time to listen

January 18th, 2017 08:50

There is no fate...
Augustus said:

Grab the bull by the horns. Well done.

January 17th, 2017 16:12

There is no fate...
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed Great write

January 17th, 2017 14:02

I have seen it all
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

January 16th, 2017 10:57

I have seen it all
Fay Slimm. said:

Apt question to end this gentle appeal - - good read.

January 16th, 2017 10:04

Nobody expects
Augustus said:

Wow. Between a rock and a hard place. Enjoyed

January 15th, 2017 18:38

I am an idiot
Augustus said:

Helps to get it off your chest. 😊

January 14th, 2017 18:42

I am an idiot
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

January 14th, 2017 10:31

I am becoming
Augustus said:

Love sheds light on duality so you can become all you are meant to be. Love the way you expressed.

January 13th, 2017 21:29

I am becoming
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 13th, 2017 13:37

I am becoming
Phoenix8523 said:

Love the line \"the canvas is not unused, it has just not been revealed yet\"! Your poem touched me deeply. -- phoenix

January 13th, 2017 11:25

Connected
Tony36 said:

Great write, I sometimes get up in the middle of the night to right poems. Just so I can go back to sleep

January 11th, 2017 14:02

Connected
Christina8 said:

Excellent poem. As a poet sometimes thoughts just come flooding and you have to write them down. Even at half past three! Great job! Christina

January 11th, 2017 11:31

Shooting angels
briannabanana4 said:

I really liked this !! It\'s amazing. Keep it up. I had goosebumps.

January 10th, 2017 15:37

Shooting angels
Christina8 said:

You said it \"But you can\'t give up on your dreams\"! I too hope things get better for you. Great poem--Christina

January 10th, 2017 13:06

Twenty One
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

January 9th, 2017 13:58

Never mind
Tony36 said:

Awesome write much truth in your words

January 8th, 2017 17:16



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