Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
Rainbow in a hurricane
Augustus said:
One line I don\'t understand---I could love you the way I loved her.----otherwise I like the message of love.
December 22nd, 2016 22:05
Augustus said:
One line I don\'t understand---I could love you the way I loved her.----otherwise I like the message of love.
December 22nd, 2016 22:05
Taken
SabreLi said:
Wow, vivid scenery here; I always enjoy reading dark and mysterious pieces as I find it cathartic to see the beauty that can be made of the darkness. Great work; powerful final lines xx
December 22nd, 2016 16:16
SabreLi said:
Wow, vivid scenery here; I always enjoy reading dark and mysterious pieces as I find it cathartic to see the beauty that can be made of the darkness. Great work; powerful final lines xx
December 22nd, 2016 16:16
Starfire
SabreLi said:
I love the more abstract themes and this one struck a chord with me! Such a great idea and brilliantly penned; I had to read it over because it was so good! Keep up the great work, would love to see some more xx
December 22nd, 2016 16:02
SabreLi said:
I love the more abstract themes and this one struck a chord with me! Such a great idea and brilliantly penned; I had to read it over because it was so good! Keep up the great work, would love to see some more xx
December 22nd, 2016 16:02
Rainbow in a hurricane
SabreLi said:
I love this one :D Great piece, with the rhythm and flow it read as lyrics. Beautiful message here xx
December 22nd, 2016 15:26
SabreLi said:
I love this one :D Great piece, with the rhythm and flow it read as lyrics. Beautiful message here xx
December 22nd, 2016 15:26
A poet\'s tree
Augustus said:
I often think about trees that have been around since the time of Christ. We have such a brief time on earth. Nicely done.
December 19th, 2016 21:21
Augustus said:
I often think about trees that have been around since the time of Christ. We have such a brief time on earth. Nicely done.
December 19th, 2016 21:21
A poet\'s tree
OxfordSkills said:
Trees live for thousands of years... A poet\'s tree continues to grow, expand, create, protect -as long as we have life and memory.
Thank you for the metaphor. :-)
December 19th, 2016 18:38
OxfordSkills said:
Trees live for thousands of years... A poet\'s tree continues to grow, expand, create, protect -as long as we have life and memory.
Thank you for the metaphor. :-)
December 19th, 2016 18:38
My requiem
myinnervoice said:
The imagery and symbolism was amazing, i noted a tone shift early own, but i might have been reading it from the wrong perspective. this style is one of my weak points. Still all around i enjoyed it and look foward to later works. Thank you.
December 17th, 2016 06:04
myinnervoice said:
The imagery and symbolism was amazing, i noted a tone shift early own, but i might have been reading it from the wrong perspective. this style is one of my weak points. Still all around i enjoyed it and look foward to later works. Thank you.
December 17th, 2016 06:04
Chasing rainbows
Elegant_Style said:
yet again, a fantastic depiction of love and youth... i have to say its somewhat sad, but it is still amazing!!
December 16th, 2016 17:08
Elegant_Style said:
yet again, a fantastic depiction of love and youth... i have to say its somewhat sad, but it is still amazing!!
December 16th, 2016 17:08
Essential
SabreLi said:
Such an amazingly powerful poem, as I myself tend not to write of love it makes it all the more special when I am able to experience the emotions through the great work of others. Well done for your brilliant job at describing the sublime xx
December 15th, 2016 08:35
SabreLi said:
Such an amazingly powerful poem, as I myself tend not to write of love it makes it all the more special when I am able to experience the emotions through the great work of others. Well done for your brilliant job at describing the sublime xx
December 15th, 2016 08:35
There is no money in poetry
WriteBeLight said:
You are a wonderful poet. There are ways to self-publish, at minimal costs. And, you can put your books on Amazon, although your profit margin is not great. But, your stuff will be out there. Keep trying!
December 13th, 2016 12:20
WriteBeLight said:
You are a wonderful poet. There are ways to self-publish, at minimal costs. And, you can put your books on Amazon, although your profit margin is not great. But, your stuff will be out there. Keep trying!
December 13th, 2016 12:20
Empty voice
Augustus said:
Well said. With a pen in your hand I doubt this will last long. (Consider history or biology, an affair with a teacher, or a date with a clown, a rare serpent specimen all bring the muse around)
December 10th, 2016 23:39
Augustus said:
Well said. With a pen in your hand I doubt this will last long. (Consider history or biology, an affair with a teacher, or a date with a clown, a rare serpent specimen all bring the muse around)
December 10th, 2016 23:39
Empty voice
Elegant_Style said:
!!!!!!! hooray !!!!!!!!! awesome poem about writers block so I guess since you were able to wright it you don;t have it anymore??
December 10th, 2016 16:41
Elegant_Style said:
!!!!!!! hooray !!!!!!!!! awesome poem about writers block so I guess since you were able to wright it you don;t have it anymore??
December 10th, 2016 16:41
Empty voice
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the frustration of being blocked in your poem. Excellent job.
December 10th, 2016 08:21
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the frustration of being blocked in your poem. Excellent job.
December 10th, 2016 08:21
Give me a reason
gelyn said:
Hi,
An astonishing write and I enjoyed reading this. ...let\'s dig some gems here
I am love, I am fallen,
I am many faces of many men.
I am man, I am woman,
I am myself and many others.
I am right, I am wrong,
I am the son of my mother.
I could end up becoming your lover,
But I shall never proclaim to be anything more than I am; my reader.
^^^^^
this particular stanza keeps running into my head. . it\'s like a song. ... and I love it....
I like how you contradict yourself here
a paradoxical stanza. ..
Well done. ..
Gel
December 9th, 2016 18:48
gelyn said:
Hi,
An astonishing write and I enjoyed reading this. ...let\'s dig some gems here
I am love, I am fallen,
I am many faces of many men.
I am man, I am woman,
I am myself and many others.
I am right, I am wrong,
I am the son of my mother.
I could end up becoming your lover,
But I shall never proclaim to be anything more than I am; my reader.
^^^^^
this particular stanza keeps running into my head. . it\'s like a song. ... and I love it....
I like how you contradict yourself here
a paradoxical stanza. ..
Well done. ..
Gel
December 9th, 2016 18:48
Give me a reason
Tony36 said:
Writing poems is a a great way to show your life. I\'ve been writing my whole life, Great write
December 9th, 2016 14:35
Tony36 said:
Writing poems is a a great way to show your life. I\'ve been writing my whole life, Great write
December 9th, 2016 14:35
Give me a reason
Quemis said:
: )
awesome! that is alot of poems. You can do it!
December 9th, 2016 10:45
Quemis said:
: )
awesome! that is alot of poems. You can do it!
December 9th, 2016 10:45
Plant a thought
Quemis said:
I like the first two blocks a tonnnn.
The first two lines of the second block sound amazing when I read them in my head and say them outloud.
December 9th, 2016 01:20
Quemis said:
I like the first two blocks a tonnnn.
The first two lines of the second block sound amazing when I read them in my head and say them outloud.
December 9th, 2016 01:20
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