Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey



I don\'t care
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 27th, 2016 12:01

I don\'t care
WriteBeLight said:

I do care about your message. And, I am extremely angry when I hear of people who never knew a parent because the Mother or Father left the child soon after birth. I see the person here shaking their fist. Very good poem about a sad subject.

December 27th, 2016 08:10

Frankenstein\'s cyborg
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 26th, 2016 12:07

Our protectors from the storm
Augustus said:

Thank you for remembering our heroes in this season. Merry Christmas.

December 24th, 2016 22:45

Our protectors from the storm
willyweed said:

very nice tribute to our fallen hero\'s
peace ww

December 24th, 2016 11:16

Bleeding heart
Augustus said:

I gather that some love is better than none at all and those who have true life long love to cherish it. I love the key to the grave line. Nicely done.

December 23rd, 2016 12:23

Bleeding heart
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 23rd, 2016 12:06

Rainbow in a hurricane
Augustus said:

One line I don\'t understand---I could love you the way I loved her.----otherwise I like the message of love.

December 22nd, 2016 22:05

Taken
SabreLi said:

Wow, vivid scenery here; I always enjoy reading dark and mysterious pieces as I find it cathartic to see the beauty that can be made of the darkness. Great work; powerful final lines xx

December 22nd, 2016 16:16

Starfire
SabreLi said:

I love the more abstract themes and this one struck a chord with me! Such a great idea and brilliantly penned; I had to read it over because it was so good! Keep up the great work, would love to see some more xx

December 22nd, 2016 16:02

Rainbow in a hurricane
SabreLi said:

I love this one :D Great piece, with the rhythm and flow it read as lyrics. Beautiful message here xx

December 22nd, 2016 15:26

Rainbow in a hurricane
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written

December 22nd, 2016 11:31

Starfire
Tony36 said:

Awesome

December 21st, 2016 12:53

Starfire
willyweed said:

nicely done, your on fire!
I salute you! ww

December 21st, 2016 11:39

Starfire
ElleDionne said:

Wow, this was beautiful!

December 21st, 2016 09:37

Taken
Zwitterion said:

Very nice indeed.

December 20th, 2016 21:20

Taken
willyweed said:

This is very good writing. ww

December 20th, 2016 10:28

A poet\'s tree
Augustus said:

I often think about trees that have been around since the time of Christ. We have such a brief time on earth. Nicely done.

December 19th, 2016 21:21

A poet\'s tree
OxfordSkills said:

Trees live for thousands of years... A poet\'s tree continues to grow, expand, create, protect -as long as we have life and memory.
Thank you for the metaphor. :-)

December 19th, 2016 18:38

My requiem
myinnervoice said:

The imagery and symbolism was amazing, i noted a tone shift early own, but i might have been reading it from the wrong perspective. this style is one of my weak points. Still all around i enjoyed it and look foward to later works. Thank you.

December 17th, 2016 06:04

Chasing rainbows
Augustus said:

Sad. Hopeless. Thanks for sharing.

December 16th, 2016 17:55

Chasing rainbows
Elegant_Style said:

yet again, a fantastic depiction of love and youth... i have to say its somewhat sad, but it is still amazing!!

December 16th, 2016 17:08

Chasing rainbows
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 16th, 2016 12:51

Essential
SabreLi said:

Such an amazingly powerful poem, as I myself tend not to write of love it makes it all the more special when I am able to experience the emotions through the great work of others. Well done for your brilliant job at describing the sublime xx

December 15th, 2016 08:35

Essential
Elegant_Style said:

amazing as always!!!

December 14th, 2016 21:59

Essential
Augustus said:

Wow!

December 14th, 2016 18:02

Essential
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written poem

December 14th, 2016 13:30

There is no money in poetry
WriteBeLight said:

You are a wonderful poet. There are ways to self-publish, at minimal costs. And, you can put your books on Amazon, although your profit margin is not great. But, your stuff will be out there. Keep trying!

December 13th, 2016 12:20

Empty voice
Augustus said:

Well said. With a pen in your hand I doubt this will last long. (Consider history or biology, an affair with a teacher, or a date with a clown, a rare serpent specimen all bring the muse around)

December 10th, 2016 23:39

Empty voice
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed

December 10th, 2016 18:49



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