Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
What a life
LIZ said:
\"Always lots of stuff, always lots of things\" \"Shits lots of shits\"--- that one was my favorite!!!
October 22nd, 2023 10:57
LIZ said:
\"Always lots of stuff, always lots of things\" \"Shits lots of shits\"--- that one was my favorite!!!
October 22nd, 2023 10:57
What a life
Teddy.15 said:
They come together as one very beautiful piece of poetic reflection. Loved the appreciation for the steak brought back memories of my childhood down to the air. Gorgeous. ❤️
October 22nd, 2023 02:42
Teddy.15 said:
They come together as one very beautiful piece of poetic reflection. Loved the appreciation for the steak brought back memories of my childhood down to the air. Gorgeous. ❤️
October 22nd, 2023 02:42
What a life
Parisab said:
The second poem was specially powerful to me. Glad to hear your reading…The Los Angeles references are special too.
October 22nd, 2023 02:27
Parisab said:
The second poem was specially powerful to me. Glad to hear your reading…The Los Angeles references are special too.
October 22nd, 2023 02:27
Shakespeare Won\'t Look At Me
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s like reading from one of my books of Bukowski, natural talent ❤️ and of course.brings the reader some very interesting imagery lol kudos
October 21st, 2023 12:15
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s like reading from one of my books of Bukowski, natural talent ❤️ and of course.brings the reader some very interesting imagery lol kudos
October 21st, 2023 12:15
And Then The Night Comes
AuburnScribbler said:
Masterfully written here Thomas, the imagery you\'ve used; perfectly sums up the absence of light, and the underlying point you make, the darkness that humanity makes; in order to profit from it everyday, comes across emphatically.
Like the consensus who\'ve commented, I also like the picture that accompanies your words, very Wednesday Addams, and very pertinent to the season.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 21st, 2023 09:32
AuburnScribbler said:
Masterfully written here Thomas, the imagery you\'ve used; perfectly sums up the absence of light, and the underlying point you make, the darkness that humanity makes; in order to profit from it everyday, comes across emphatically.
Like the consensus who\'ve commented, I also like the picture that accompanies your words, very Wednesday Addams, and very pertinent to the season.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 21st, 2023 09:32
In Retrospect
arqios said:
This I truly get, including almost being killed by an abscessed tooth. It could be called grackle-mania. The tang of yellow mustard fills my lungs!
October 20th, 2023 05:28
arqios said:
This I truly get, including almost being killed by an abscessed tooth. It could be called grackle-mania. The tang of yellow mustard fills my lungs!
October 20th, 2023 05:28
In Retrospect
2781 said:
I can relate to loosing weight. If you can find a real 2nd hand leather belt you can keep knocking holes in it.
As for all other aliments, tell them to piss off.
October 20th, 2023 01:23
2781 said:
I can relate to loosing weight. If you can find a real 2nd hand leather belt you can keep knocking holes in it.
As for all other aliments, tell them to piss off.
October 20th, 2023 01:23
In Retrospect
Teddy.15 said:
Bologna? An excellent poem, to be down and out on the streets I\'ve never been but this poetic verse truly makes the reader see and feel the life before and after . ❤️
October 20th, 2023 00:58
Teddy.15 said:
Bologna? An excellent poem, to be down and out on the streets I\'ve never been but this poetic verse truly makes the reader see and feel the life before and after . ❤️
October 20th, 2023 00:58
In Retrospect
Parisab said:
Those experiences have to be expressed and deserve to be heard-it made my heart ache but kept my eyes open-those words deserve to be written in gold (and not mustard.)
You are a strong poet!
October 20th, 2023 00:53
Parisab said:
Those experiences have to be expressed and deserve to be heard-it made my heart ache but kept my eyes open-those words deserve to be written in gold (and not mustard.)
You are a strong poet!
October 20th, 2023 00:53
Waltzing Through Memories
Goldfinch60 said:
May she appear to you in reality soon Thomas.
Andy
October 20th, 2023 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May she appear to you in reality soon Thomas.
Andy
October 20th, 2023 00:44
Waltzing Through Memories
Parisab said:
Another interpretation of fairytales,-yours is mind-bending and raw. You design the picture the dance of loneliness and longing so well in your poems, Thomas!
October 19th, 2023 12:13
Parisab said:
Another interpretation of fairytales,-yours is mind-bending and raw. You design the picture the dance of loneliness and longing so well in your poems, Thomas!
October 19th, 2023 12:13
4 Walls
MendedFences27 said:
Our four walls can define us all. I\'m sure the living quarters of every person are distinctly theirs. As writers we prioritize our writing area. We spend a great deal of time imagining the abodes of others. Your \"4 Walls\" takes us on a journey through the times of your life, and seems to give a sense of desire to be free like \"that feral cat.\"
It\'s a most interesting journey, one that I thoroughly enjoyed, and hope to read more from you. Thanks for posting. - Phil A.
October 18th, 2023 18:38
MendedFences27 said:
Our four walls can define us all. I\'m sure the living quarters of every person are distinctly theirs. As writers we prioritize our writing area. We spend a great deal of time imagining the abodes of others. Your \"4 Walls\" takes us on a journey through the times of your life, and seems to give a sense of desire to be free like \"that feral cat.\"
It\'s a most interesting journey, one that I thoroughly enjoyed, and hope to read more from you. Thanks for posting. - Phil A.
October 18th, 2023 18:38
4 Walls
Goldfinch60 said:
Those four walls are so important to many of us Thomas.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Those four walls are so important to many of us Thomas.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:17
Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
Parisab said:
Use of beautiful symbolism capturing the soul of a woman in an erotic and human way… “her eyes hated her face” and washing the eyes away from all that she had seen and hated about herself. One can discover so much more by reading this poem, more than once.
October 18th, 2023 02:13
Parisab said:
Use of beautiful symbolism capturing the soul of a woman in an erotic and human way… “her eyes hated her face” and washing the eyes away from all that she had seen and hated about herself. One can discover so much more by reading this poem, more than once.
October 18th, 2023 02:13
Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Thomas.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Thomas.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:07
4 Walls
Parisab said:
Incredible in its honesty, you describe these objects inside the “four walls” bringing a sense of security and warmth. The relief comes with the realization, that they also bring limitations in freedom and movement like the Gold fish inside a fish bowl. The Feral cat as the alter ego is still howling and telling the other (darker) side of the story outside of the four walls. Exquisite and rich work…
October 18th, 2023 01:58
Parisab said:
Incredible in its honesty, you describe these objects inside the “four walls” bringing a sense of security and warmth. The relief comes with the realization, that they also bring limitations in freedom and movement like the Gold fish inside a fish bowl. The Feral cat as the alter ego is still howling and telling the other (darker) side of the story outside of the four walls. Exquisite and rich work…
October 18th, 2023 01:58
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