Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
I Need To Visit France
Cassie58 said:
A frustrating dream. Especially the phone number and address of that French babe being lost like that. Strange how mixed up dreams can become. Still, this had a touch of spice about it. You need to dream more often.
December 13th, 2023 23:27
Cassie58 said:
A frustrating dream. Especially the phone number and address of that French babe being lost like that. Strange how mixed up dreams can become. Still, this had a touch of spice about it. You need to dream more often.
December 13th, 2023 23:27
No More Eden
shadowbones said:
Great poem! I see the randomness of it all too.
December 12th, 2023 19:31
shadowbones said:
Great poem! I see the randomness of it all too.
December 12th, 2023 19:31
For a Friend in an Asylum in California
Tooway said:
Nice cadence in the form of words
December 12th, 2023 17:35
Tooway said:
Nice cadence in the form of words
December 12th, 2023 17:35
Dapple and Down
Tooway said:
Down I go into the gray and brown.
This is the only part that I cant make sense of, love the word play in the rest. Can\'t tell if it\'s cultural differences that I don\'t get the first line or if it went over my head. No need to explain, just didn\'t want to be sincere of something I liked but didn\'t understand fully. Thanks
December 12th, 2023 17:29
Tooway said:
Down I go into the gray and brown.
This is the only part that I cant make sense of, love the word play in the rest. Can\'t tell if it\'s cultural differences that I don\'t get the first line or if it went over my head. No need to explain, just didn\'t want to be sincere of something I liked but didn\'t understand fully. Thanks
December 12th, 2023 17:29
Like a Butterfly Melting
Parisab said:
The crow pecking and the life inching away like a filthy worm: like loss, leaving someone to waste away . Like someone waiting for the pain to stop-great symbolism
December 12th, 2023 02:24
Parisab said:
The crow pecking and the life inching away like a filthy worm: like loss, leaving someone to waste away . Like someone waiting for the pain to stop-great symbolism
December 12th, 2023 02:24
2 Dollars on the 6 Horse to Show
gray0328 said:
Nicely done. I worked at the Fair Grounds here in New Orleans for 13yrs back in the 80\'s and I have fond memories of that time. I had my own tip sheet (Courtney\'s Connor) that sold for $2 and I used that income for all my bets. I still read DRF everyday.
December 10th, 2023 11:27
gray0328 said:
Nicely done. I worked at the Fair Grounds here in New Orleans for 13yrs back in the 80\'s and I have fond memories of that time. I had my own tip sheet (Courtney\'s Connor) that sold for $2 and I used that income for all my bets. I still read DRF everyday.
December 10th, 2023 11:27
2 Dollars on the 6 Horse to Show
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
I lost! I put 6 dollars on the 2 horse. Doh! lol.
December 8th, 2023 10:50
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
I lost! I put 6 dollars on the 2 horse. Doh! lol.
December 8th, 2023 10:50
2 Dollars on the 6 Horse to Show
Tom Dylan said:
A really good poem, Thomas. Some great lines, that look in your eyes, was full of good-byes, just brilliant. My wife asked me the other day what I\'d like for Christmas, I told her, Seedy Town Blues.
December 8th, 2023 10:00
Tom Dylan said:
A really good poem, Thomas. Some great lines, that look in your eyes, was full of good-byes, just brilliant. My wife asked me the other day what I\'d like for Christmas, I told her, Seedy Town Blues.
December 8th, 2023 10:00
Life Anew
orchidee said:
A lovely pic and write T.
We have big black tom cat, and his sister a tabby cat.
December 8th, 2023 03:15
orchidee said:
A lovely pic and write T.
We have big black tom cat, and his sister a tabby cat.
December 8th, 2023 03:15
For a Friend in an Asylum in California
John Lee said:
Very nice write! I read these lines several times, definitely took me somewhere.
\"The Mad Hatter moon
laughs at me,
and the fog
only lasts a
little while.
Just one more time,
please stay a while.\"
December 5th, 2023 22:01
John Lee said:
Very nice write! I read these lines several times, definitely took me somewhere.
\"The Mad Hatter moon
laughs at me,
and the fog
only lasts a
little while.
Just one more time,
please stay a while.\"
December 5th, 2023 22:01
For a Friend in an Asylum in California
Tom Dylan said:
Another belter. Some lovely lines.
December 4th, 2023 02:31
Tom Dylan said:
Another belter. Some lovely lines.
December 4th, 2023 02:31
No More Eden
John Prophet said:
Life is so very far from Eden. Maybe someday. Nice work!
December 1st, 2023 21:09
John Prophet said:
Life is so very far from Eden. Maybe someday. Nice work!
December 1st, 2023 21:09
No More Eden
Parisab said:
Very balanced in theme and content-May you find Eden in all beautiful things…
December 1st, 2023 11:25
Parisab said:
Very balanced in theme and content-May you find Eden in all beautiful things…
December 1st, 2023 11:25
No More Eden
Bobby O said:
This is really good I read it twice and it got better. Nice job. Good mind.
December 1st, 2023 02:10
Bobby O said:
This is really good I read it twice and it got better. Nice job. Good mind.
December 1st, 2023 02:10
No More Eden
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes that randomness takes us in the right direction Thomas, it certainly has for me.
Andy
November 30th, 2023 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes that randomness takes us in the right direction Thomas, it certainly has for me.
Andy
November 30th, 2023 02:44
Like a Butterfly Melting
sorenbarrett said:
The obsession of love is well expressed here. Nice images.
November 26th, 2023 15:43
sorenbarrett said:
The obsession of love is well expressed here. Nice images.
November 26th, 2023 15:43
Like a Butterfly Melting
John Lee said:
well written description of loneliness. Nice job
November 25th, 2023 22:06
John Lee said:
well written description of loneliness. Nice job
November 25th, 2023 22:06
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Bobby O said:
An interesting mechanism for the fly on the wall ?it’s commentary and its observation. Does that pride thing mean it arrived first with intention to lead , or with a certain varnish could sometimes mean, that it hangs around stir up problems but just when the trouble is about to get big the phony self appointed shill realizes that his act , that is without substance, can’t hang under pressure and he charts a quick escape , he “Goeth”
Elsewhere??)
November 24th, 2023 23:56
Bobby O said:
An interesting mechanism for the fly on the wall ?it’s commentary and its observation. Does that pride thing mean it arrived first with intention to lead , or with a certain varnish could sometimes mean, that it hangs around stir up problems but just when the trouble is about to get big the phony self appointed shill realizes that his act , that is without substance, can’t hang under pressure and he charts a quick escape , he “Goeth”
Elsewhere??)
November 24th, 2023 23:56
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh I\'d buy a collection of rewritten nursery rhymes - so bring your entrepreneurial spirit/skills to bear, please...!
Excellent.
November 24th, 2023 17:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh I\'d buy a collection of rewritten nursery rhymes - so bring your entrepreneurial spirit/skills to bear, please...!
Excellent.
November 24th, 2023 17:48
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Syd said:
I wish my kids were still little so I could read this version of a bed time story to them. Great write!
-Syd
November 24th, 2023 15:01
Syd said:
I wish my kids were still little so I could read this version of a bed time story to them. Great write!
-Syd
November 24th, 2023 15:01
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Ellen Marsell said:
Really, it was fun ))
November 24th, 2023 08:46
Ellen Marsell said:
Really, it was fun ))
November 24th, 2023 08:46
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