Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case



Waltzing Through Memories
orchidee said:

Good write T.

October 19th, 2023 14:04

Waltzing Through Memories
Parisab said:

Another interpretation of fairytales,-yours is mind-bending and raw. You design the picture the dance of loneliness and longing so well in your poems, Thomas!

October 19th, 2023 12:13

4 Walls
MendedFences27 said:

Our four walls can define us all. I\'m sure the living quarters of every person are distinctly theirs. As writers we prioritize our writing area. We spend a great deal of time imagining the abodes of others. Your \"4 Walls\" takes us on a journey through the times of your life, and seems to give a sense of desire to be free like \"that feral cat.\"
It\'s a most interesting journey, one that I thoroughly enjoyed, and hope to read more from you. Thanks for posting. - Phil A.

October 18th, 2023 18:38

4 Walls
2781 said:

I am pleased you have a place to write.

October 18th, 2023 06:26

4 Walls
Goldfinch60 said:

Those four walls are so important to many of us Thomas.

Andy

October 18th, 2023 02:17

Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
Parisab said:

Use of beautiful symbolism capturing the soul of a woman in an erotic and human way… “her eyes hated her face” and washing the eyes away from all that she had seen and hated about herself. One can discover so much more by reading this poem, more than once.

October 18th, 2023 02:13

Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Thomas.

Andy

October 18th, 2023 02:07

4 Walls
Parisab said:

Incredible in its honesty, you describe these objects inside the “four walls” bringing a sense of security and warmth. The relief comes with the realization, that they also bring limitations in freedom and movement like the Gold fish inside a fish bowl. The Feral cat as the alter ego is still howling and telling the other (darker) side of the story outside of the four walls. Exquisite and rich work…

October 18th, 2023 01:58

4 Walls
orchidee said:

Good write T.

October 18th, 2023 01:35

4 Walls
Bobby O said:

Wow! There is so much here with purposely angled directional changes that require a prejudice and then a blank slate analyst. Gotta read it more. I salute the fact all the content is alive but I think it would me naive to state a certain ability to unravel. It’s a journey I’ll enjoy

October 18th, 2023 00:57

4 Walls
Teddy.15 said:

Fabulous poetry, what doesn\'t kill us makes us stronger I was brought up in London in the 70/80/90 it\'s the simple things that catch our eye and ground us for sure. Your imagery is spectacular brought me to places I myself had forgotten. ❤️

October 18th, 2023 00:45

4 Walls
LIZ said:

\"it\'s the simple things that bring me pleasure\" Yes indeed!!!

October 18th, 2023 00:23

Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
aDarkerMind said:

a true poet of a modern world;

October 17th, 2023 16:10

Apathetic, Empathetic
John Lee said:

Yes! Lol.. I love it. I\'m more of a empathetic person myself.. poor mouse.

October 17th, 2023 15:51

Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
LIZ said:

Oh I enjoyed this one....\"She saw too much, felt too much\". Beautiful!!!!

October 17th, 2023 09:56

Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
orchidee said:

Good write T.

October 17th, 2023 09:47

Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
novaa said:

Beautiful lines painting an evocative imagery. Nice write!

October 17th, 2023 06:09

Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
sorenbarrett said:

You might want to check out my poem \"Mockingbird\"

October 17th, 2023 05:21

Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
sorenbarrett said:

I like mockingbirds and have watched them from mating, egg laying, raising their young and admire their loyalty and fighting spirit to defend what they have. Nice write

October 17th, 2023 05:19

Apathetic, Empathetic
Teddy.15 said:

Superb the imagery and of course sexual relations with a mouse killer would put even the hardest of humans off probably. Again you Definately have a Bukowski muse that could actually be mistaken for the real thing. LoL ❤️

October 16th, 2023 16:46

Seedy Town Blues
L. B. Mek said:

wish you all the best with your book, dear Poet

October 16th, 2023 04:21

Seedy Town Blues
2781 said:

I hope you find what you need.

October 16th, 2023 02:03

Apathetic, Empathetic
2781 said:

That\'s willpower

October 16th, 2023 02:01

Apathetic, Empathetic
orchidee said:

Good write Thomas.

October 16th, 2023 01:52

And Then The Night Comes
Introverted Sage said:

WIth a title and picture to match.
The insanity needed just to live.
Depicted perfectly.
Great write!

October 16th, 2023 01:39

Artichokes, Avocados, And Van Gogh
Teddy.15 said:

An extraordinary poetry feast here, I\'m definitely enjoying your poetic imagination and heart. Kudos sir.

October 16th, 2023 00:52

Seedy Town Blues
peto said:

Enjoyed the read
Nicely done

October 15th, 2023 12:54

Seedy Town Blues
aDarkerMind said:

nice one Thomas

October 15th, 2023 03:09

Seedy Town Blues
Teddy.15 said:

I have to say this reminded me of Charles Bukowski, I adore this type poetry up front and to the point. Wonderful. ❤️.

October 15th, 2023 02:57

Seedy Town Blues
Goldfinch60 said:

Ride those waves Thomas and enjoy that fine life.

Andy

October 15th, 2023 01:56



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