Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case



Hook Him Up to the Machine
Thomas W Case said:

Thanks for the read

February 25th, 2024 19:48

Hook Him Up to the Machine
Doggerel Dave said:

Muscular poetry, but not quite sure what the problem is.
Free spirit to be ground down by the \'system\'? Seems the \'system\' missed out there, conformity too far behind.

February 25th, 2024 18:31

God is an Artist
sorenbarrett said:

God is an artist and you\'re right our creations pale in comparison.

February 25th, 2024 16:54

God is an Artist
Parisab said:



And sometimes, we succeed.
And it is good,
and He is well pleased.

Your words are very well rounded and succinct here. I can have fun pondering on this one. Full circle to why we are here and Iโ€™m sure you felt close with him by creating this piece, my poetic friend.





February 25th, 2024 11:40

Horny, Broke, and Needing a Drink (A Philosophy)
Teddy.15 said:

A wonderful description of addiction and the emotions of it. ๐ŸŒน

February 25th, 2024 04:29

Horny, Broke, and Needing a Drink (A Philosophy)
Neville said:


I would like to say welcome to the club .. but I was never that big on booze in the first place and couldn\'t afford to be broke .. Neville

February 25th, 2024 03:05

Horny, Broke, and Needing a Drink (A Philosophy)
orchidee said:

I dunno this stuff, in me sheltered life! heehee.

February 25th, 2024 03:04

Horny, Broke, and Needing a Drink (A Philosophy)
David Wakeling said:

Everything in moderation. Thoughtful poem

February 25th, 2024 02:43

Horny, Broke, and Needing a Drink (A Philosophy)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Thomas and so meaningful.

Andy

February 25th, 2024 02:11

Horny, Broke, and Needing a Drink (A Philosophy)
Introverted Sage said:

Mind over matter.
Good write!


February 25th, 2024 00:17

God is an Artist
Cassie58 said:

We are indeed pale in comparison to natureโ€™s gems. What a gift they are Thomas. Great poetry.

February 24th, 2024 23:59

Horny, Broke, and Needing a Drink (A Philosophy)
Cassie58 said:

Addictions to anything can be mighty powerful. Can be hell to break. A tragedy indeed for those sucked in. A powerful write and a lesson as well.

February 24th, 2024 23:27

God is an Artist
Subiya Kouser said:

Just amazing...

February 23rd, 2024 09:25

God is an Artist
Goldfinch60 said:

What Dave said!

Andy

February 23rd, 2024 02:52

God is an Artist
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ve writ it before; I\'ll writ it again:

Man made God in his own image and then flipped it - the rest is History.

February 22nd, 2024 23:07

God is an Artist
Accidental Poet said:

And you succeeded here Tom, well penned. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘

February 22nd, 2024 15:52

Old #56
Neville said:



no country for old cows springs to mind .. enjoyed but would have been better with some horseradish sauce on the side .. Neville


February 22nd, 2024 04:10

Old #56
orchidee said:

Good write T.

February 22nd, 2024 03:24

Old #56
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Thomas.

Andy

February 22nd, 2024 02:47

Old #56
Tom Dylan said:

You really paint a picture, Thomas. Really enjoyed his. I almost gasped when you mention sitting down to dinner!

February 22nd, 2024 02:36

Watch Out
Teddy.15 said:

LoL fabulous, as a woman myself I\'m chuckling away, my sister Mary is in this poem somewhere.

February 22nd, 2024 01:10

Old #56
Teddy.15 said:

lol I\'d say this is charming humour, well I live in the land of the T-bone steak we call it bistecca fiorentina so I appreciate your wonderful imagery the innocence and the fact that all these years later Bukowski has tried to take precautions for his self. Such an endearing poem, we had 24 guinea pigs in our garden, I never did pluck up the courage at the dinner table to ask my father where snowy was lol I have really enjoyed this. ๐ŸŒน

February 22nd, 2024 01:05

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Doggerel Dave said:

I think I\'ll give this one a big miss....

February 21st, 2024 06:14

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Tom Dylan said:

Another great poem. Love the tone of your work, Thomas. And the last line just nailed it.

February 21st, 2024 03:15

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Alan R said:

whack-job from hell

I am so loving this description ๐Ÿ˜‚

February 21st, 2024 03:15

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Goldfinch60 said:

True words in some cases Thomas but I have rarely come across them.

Andy

February 21st, 2024 02:51

Watch Out
Neville said:



Heavens above thanks for the tip.

February 21st, 2024 01:39

Love Button
Thoughtless said:

You can only hope. And there are dreams to warm the night. A++

February 20th, 2024 16:22

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John Prophet said:

A bit racy ๐Ÿ˜ณ
but cute!

February 20th, 2024 08:40

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Neville said:



I get the impression you kept your finger on her pulse at least for a while ..

February 20th, 2024 04:27



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